How Can a Person Float in the Sky Without Getting Stabbed?

This author may be a Japanese with average writing skills.

In the scene where I went to Yamazaki's house, I saw cerebral congestion. The description of the main character was so poor and immature. It doesn't look like someone who has been to Sekiro at all, just like a college student who has just time-traveled. It has a clear and stupid feeling, and a childish feeling. It has almost no character, cannot solve problems reasonably, and is a bad person. No, you can describe it a little colder, it's too immature, it feels like it has nothing but strength.

It's not extreme at all. It's just to gain fame. Just take the knife and chop off one by one according to the surnames that will participate in the war in the future. Assassin's Creed is about to start, if possible, send the Emperor and his family on their way.

There are some problems with the main plot of this book. I thought it was a Japanese manga at first, because the style of painting is similar and it doesn't feel too inconsistent. Later, when I travel to the world of "The Swordsman", the contradiction becomes serious. The first is the combat power. In the first world, "Sekiro", I have cleared the entire world before I am only proficient in Ashina's swordsmanship. Except for swordsmanship, I can't do anything else. No, not illusions, footwork, ninjutsu, mechanisms, medicine, secret techniques, etc., Forget it. You also wrote that the protagonist was resurrected once, and that there are three worlds. The protagonist has not used his trump card to change his strength. Every mission arrangement is to clear the world and be the best in the world, but every time the description of strength is half-measured. In a world like "Sekiro", it's okay to only know swordsmanship. After clearing "Rurouni Kenshin", the result is only an increase in background and a state of accelerated learning skills. Other strengths have not changed since "Sekiro", and the proficiency-level swordsmanship has not changed. After that, I went to "The Swordsman" to complete the strategy so far, and killed a few robbers. After that, everything else was to praise the protagonist's talent and promising future. There are three worlds and the entire future is promising. In this way, the thirty world protagonists still have a promising future. Then there is the issue of the sense of inconsistency. "Sekiro" is considered extraordinary, and "Rurouni Kenshin" is considered the pinnacle of mortals. So what is the positioning of "The Swordsman"? Let's not talk about the style of painting, just the mystery. "Sekiro" must be higher, no matter how great "The Swordsman" is, You can't achieve immortality and resurrection, and you can't see ghosts and monsters. What are you doing in this world? You still use strategies to travel around the world. You have passed the protagonists of two worlds in one cool article. You talk about strategy and wit in the martial arts world where strength is paramount. It's too outrageous. If Xiaoao If there is no magical transformation in the world, where are you going to go in the next world? Firstly, you cannot draw symbols, secondly, you cannot release your inner strength, and thirdly, you cannot learn the knowledge of mysticism. After this world is over, the protagonist is still laying the foundation for a world with high mystery, and even development may not be considered. Now There are only two places where you have the opportunity to change your life against the will of heaven. One is the state left by the end of the world, and the other is to use the opportunity of rebirth for an explosion. I can't think of others. The main reason is that there is a problem with the connection and there is no continuity in everything in the book.

Some readers said that the protagonist has a few dishes 😭 Maybe I didn't explain it clearly at the beginning, so I'll explain it now. The protagonist has experienced the world of Sekiro, but has not passed the level. He only learned sword skills, but did not acquire other extraordinary powers. It can also be seen from the Kenshin chapter. If the protagonist had extraordinary power, he would have been promoted, haha. Then... One more thing, come to Kuku to read ಥ⌣ಥ

It is completely possible to kill all the way through the world of Kenshin, become a murderer, and then become famous directly. The title of Sword Master is easy to get. Besides, they are only Japanese, and they will be killed. It is no different from killing pigs or chickens.

The writing is bland, or boring. The protagonist has a child-like personality and a general sense of purpose. Especially the dialogue, very dry.

Raising eyebrows, shrugging, touching noses, touching hair, can these small movements be removed? ADHD, ahhhhhhhh

The writing is not good, but the writing skills are good. Firstly, there is no main line. Secondly, the language is confusing. Thirdly, it would be better if I didn't write.

Is it because you, the author, are drifting off, or are you unable to lift the Five Tigers' door-breaking knife in the martial arts novel?

It would be better not to write about Sekiro, with the power of Ryūin. Originally, I thought this could be a free choice for everything in the world, but when I saw the end of Kenshin and found that the protagonist took nothing away, it could only be the things obtained in the original world, but this does not make sense. Since the immortal has been cut off, it means that the protagonist has defeated Sakuraryu, but defeating Sakuraryu at this level? It's pure nonsense. Even Yongzhen can't beat this strength. It doesn't make sense no matter how you think about it. Don't say that the title is something you bring, then this book is really poisonous.

Originally, the writing wasn't very good, but it was still readable. But in the end, you wrote about Swordsman in the Second World? This doesn't matter, but the protagonist can be considered a first-tier player in the Kenshin world. You actually said that he has become a second-tier player because he has no internal strength? And there are only a few combinations of sword moves in total. Even if the protagonist is not top-notch, he is not far away. How was your writing?

Let's make the criticism more intense.

How should I put it? I wrote it slowly, I already have "Ashina Isshin", and I still have to go to the sect to show my name. When killing people, do I first say that the sect is saying "Ashina Isshin"? And your mission is to make a name for the shogunate and become a sword master. You should challenge the kendo hall and kill bad guys.

Before I knew it, I had been writing this book for more than a month. The journey up to now has been difficult and persistent... Thank you to readers for their support. Some readers voted for recommendations, some voted for monthly votes, and some readers gave rewards! More readers have been following silently until now~😆 Well, although, but, but, this book has not even been tested in one round 😭 It has been running naked until now, a I didn't get any recommendations either 😐😐😐 Oh... I'm in tears if I talk too much. It's close to 200,000 words but I don't even have a recommendation Family members, who knows... How many days are left? , I have to pk again, can I win once (⩺_⩹) Friends who have read this book, please give me a follow-up reading 🌹🌹🌹 The recommendation is to read the chapters released on Tuesday, I usually The latest chapter will be released at 11 o'clock on Tuesday night, that is, during the day on Wednesday. Everyone, use your little hands to catch up with the latest chapter 🌹🌹🌹 Family members, will you win (⩺⩹)!

The writing is okay, but the plot of the protagonist is weird. It's an indescribable feeling, but it's definitely not weird in a good way.

In front of Wumingshen Fengliu, Wei Mingliu also had to stand aside.

There is also a problem with Sekiro's skills. Even if you hit Genichiro, you will bounce it back. What about your paper man ultimate move? You can't kill Sekiro, but what about your resurrection power? Are you not given anything to go on a monster-fighting tour? 🙂 As long as you are familiar with the target swordsman's rebound, whoever comes will die 🙂

Is Swordsman stronger than Kenshin? Author, are you serious? You have to make it clear which version of Siao Ao you are comparing to. As long as it is not the Hong Kong version, all others are garbage. And the internal power you mentioned, there are not many garbage like Xiao Ao that can be used externally. How can it be worthy of Low Xuan? Among the so-called sword moves, except Dugu Nine Swords and Evil-Repelling Sword Techniques, which sect's sword techniques are useful in the world 🙂 Sword moves with internal power that can cut through even iron are pure garbage 😜

The writing is a bit retarded, I have no idea what I'm thinking.

I think the author still has charm.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing my precious treasure, I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and clever, and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...

By the way, which one is better, Rurouni Kenshin or Death Kuang?

I skipped crazy and saw Chapter 56. Sword energy, dragon flash, one against a hundred, and I am not skilled at pretending.

What Wei Mingliu criticized was passive and showed no performance at all. It is rare to write this kind of thing, but you really failed to live up to expectations.

Is the next step to recruit Tian Boguang?