Celebrating More Than Years: Starting from Teacher Fan Xian

Have you bought a house? Have you bought a car? Married? Have children? Do you have enough money for baby milk powder? What about money for school? Has your child bought a house? Has your child bought a car? Is the child married? Have any grandchildren? Has your grandson bought a house? Has your grandson bought a car? Is your grandson married? How can you sleep? Please update quickly.

I can't see the protagonist's needs, such as why he wants to become stronger, why he wants to be an official, and what his ultimate goal is. There is not much text to show it. Originally, the golden finger can be used as support, but the sense of gain from the golden finger is not obvious. There is no initial value. If you add it, it feels dispensable. After reading the whole article, I have no problem with the character design, but I personally feel a little awkward about the portrayal. I feel like I have no desires and no demands. Because there are no needs, there is naturally no satisfaction brought by meeting the needs. The full text relies more on the relief brought by other people's recognition of the protagonist. Then there is the goal, it is best to be clear and it can be regarded as a phased achievement. When advancing the plot, add some progress reports appropriately, which may create a sense of satisfaction. With this support, the "water" problem can also be easily solved. The above is just a personal representation. The writing is pretty good, but some humble opinions are dispensable. Congratulations on this excellent book! Don't spray!

What everyone wants to see is you interacting with the characters in the plot, using the system to become stronger and showing off to the good guys, and pretending to be smart and slapped in the face with logic. Look what you did after you entered Beijing. You forced extra drama. There is no logic and it is uncomfortable to watch.

Those who write about Qing Yunian's fandom all have misunderstandings about the Grand Master in it. Grand Master Qing Yunian can conquer a country by himself. The masters of the seventh and eighth grades below the Grand Master can be killed by 1-200 with one sword of the Grand Master. The most powerful crossbow in the army has tens of thousands of arrows. What is the concept? Luo, the destructive power of the Grand Master is more than 10 miles in radius, and there is a human-made nuclear bomb. The protagonist of the novel has inherited the level of Ximen Chuixue and can cut out 40 meters of sword energy. He is capable of being a Grand Master 😅. The Grand Master of Qing Yu Nian can kill hundreds of people with one move.

Good guy, everyone who copied you has copied it. As expected, you can still make money by writing fan fiction 🙂

The protagonist's combat power upgrade is a bit slow. Fan Xian's has already reached 90%, and he's only at level 5.

If I were you, my mentality would be shattered. The book I finally wrote would probably cost two to three thousand a month, and the person who ranked first on the list would have ordered tens of thousands of orders... I guess it's because you were slower and didn't have to copy anymore. Now you're starting to make a mistake 😭

I think it's quite interesting. Starting from the original novel, there are no epilepsy-like or democratic demands in the TV series. The plot and character arrangement are reasonable, and the protagonist has a high degree of integration with the world. Unlike other novels where the protagonist suddenly jumps into the plot like a joke, and the further exploration of the world is also very good and feels very real. That system is really difficult to deal with. If you don't plan to write about astronomy, the system will be a failure in the later stage, and the system settings are not very good.

So you just took the name of Teacher Fan Xian? When Fan Xian comes to Beijing, will this be the finale of this book?

I suggest you go to Luozuo to write. There is a book there that imitates you and reached the top of the rankings.

I could barely watch it in Danzhou, but I couldn't watch it in Kyoto.

I feel bad in the last few chapters...

Good guy, the author is so miserable. This book was less than Qianjun when it started. If it moves next door, it will be directly sold by Tianyi. That person can earn at least 500,000 yuan in royalties from Tianyi. The author should quickly find an editor to protect his rights.

If you enter the court, you will write a lot. You are not writing according to Zhang Julu's template. Emperor Qing is not easy to deal with.

The book that plagiarized you has now been promoted to No. 15 On the list.

In these sad times, your spirit is so lacking

Judging from the current situation, the author's idea of ​​preferring the original work rather than the film and television is quite good. The details of the original work are also very clear. I must be a book fan, right? So far, the content is not too disturbing (*ˊᵕˋ)✩︎‧₊ Then here are some suggestions: Firstly, I still hope not to touch the emotional line Secondly, you can describe more about the protagonist and the various bosses calmly competing with each other Threely, the best reflection of the protagonist's power is the power of the supporting characters. It is not recommended to write in a down-to-earth way. Yours is very strong, but I am still above you. In the early stage, when the protagonist's strength is not enough, you can focus on describing the crushing of intelligence ( •̀֊•́ ) ̖́- Fourth, since it is an adoration value system, I think the protagonist can take the gentle and sinister route. For characters like Fan Xian and friends, we can take the path of healing and describe more of their daily interactions, especially those who are more miserable. I hope the protagonist can love them more ↜(⃔(⃔っ •̤ ༝ •̤ c)⃕) Occasionally, there will be some sly tricks to tease children and the like. And when it comes to enemy characters, the proportion of sinisterness is greater than gentleness. Even when you are scheming, you don't have to let the enemy know that you are scheming against him. You can also mix in some true feelings during the process, that is, after letting the other party feel your tenderness, you can give him the final blow cruelly. The subject is to treat it sincerely and it does not affect the tune of "I plot against you". The author has analyzed the specific situation in detail (つω｀)~ Fifth, the fifth personality! Start up! (It's a joke hhh, I want to make a joke) I'm writing! Hurry up and update! I see everyone discussing that the overall evaluation is not very good, so don't be discouraged from writing (,,•́ . •̀,,) It's rare to meet a book fan, anyway! I like it very much, come on ٩۹(๑•̀ω•́ ๑)۶ Jiangjiangjiang This is my first long review (maybe it's not even that?), But it is indeed my first time to comment so seriously. I give it to you. Please be sure to write it down as a gift that you like! ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡

This protagonist is rude and uneducated. If he were not the protagonist, he would have died long ago. The main plot is unclear and he seems to have no desires or desires. This book is a waste of time.

The author wanted to write about Machiavellianism, but he overestimated his writing skills and ended up writing the same thing.

The author goes and sees for himself