Civil War America: I Was a Policeman in Texas

I'm not very optimistic about the author, mainly because this kind of subject matter is really difficult. The civil strife in the United States is a description of all aspects, economy, politics, society, power... It is easy to write a cool article around one person, but it is very difficult to write rational and logical writing on this subject.

Internet articles are the most typical fast food literature. The vast majority of Internet article audiences are unwilling to read word for word and sentence by sentence. It may be an exaggeration to say that there are ten lines in one glance, but three or four lines in one glance should be a common phenomenon. Therefore, if an online writer is not particularly good at writing, he cannot choose random linear narratives. What's more, this book not only uses some chaotic linear narrative techniques, but also uses parallel narrative, but it is not used well. The result is this new type of jumping narrative, which cannot guide readers to reasonably combine the fragmented plots, and will only make everyone feel confused and at a loss. When these two negative effects are superimposed, the consequence is that only a few thousand of the bookings that should have been made are left.

The first twenty or so chapters are written confusingly, and the following ones are just trying to make a fool of the old Americans. What I want to see is that the old Americans are bleeding like rivers. I am not here to watch the old Americans ban drugs, guns, and immigrants. And there are so many licking dogs saying that it is well written. I don't understand.

The storyline is a bit off-kilter and hard to follow coherently. And the names are too Westernized, making it a bit difficult to understand who is who.

Change it, it looks confusing. I only have two books on my bookshelf, one is from San Francisco to Washington, and the other is going to be from Mexico to Washington. I hope you will be the third one from Texas to Washington 😁

Author, you should have followed the movie "American Civil War" and started fighting the Civil War directly. Don't describe how the Civil War broke out or integrate the causes and consequences of the Civil War into the text and slowly describe it. Now a lot of people in the comment area question whether you can write about the Civil War.

Hello everyone, I am the author of this book, and the background of this book will be the American Civil War. I hope everyone can vent their various feelings in the building. Insulting the country must be banned.

When I read Chapter 5, I felt like the main character was mentally ill. .

The subject matter may have a platinum life, but to be honest, your writing style is a bit messy. If you strengthen it, this book should be fine for you to work full-time.

I don't want to write a straight oral novel. To be honest, I can't write it. In the early stage, it was indeed chaotic due to lack of experience, and the plot was not officially entered. This is because I want to briefly explain the background, base the oral excitement on the basis, and roughly explain what caused the civil war since it was a civil war? Although the explanation is not very good, wow, wow, I still hope that you guys can follow it and take a look. The plot you are most looking forward to will slowly unfold later. Thank you guys for your support.

It's a good subject matter. In Qidian, or in terms of online literature as a whole, there are very few novels about politics in the United States. The protagonist of this novel is decisive and decisive. On the surface, he is an American, but in actual activities, he implements part of the red idea. In short, the subject matter is good, the storyline is good, and the progress control is good. Rating 4 stars.

I would like to give some advice to the author. You must first clarify the positioning of the protagonist. Should you follow the "lone wolf" style or the "manager farming" style? Follow the "lone wolf" style, arrange a few reliable teammates for the protagonist, add some "foreign aid", and then kill indiscriminately. In the early stage of the "Management and Farming" stream, the protagonist can still kill people randomly, but in the middle and later stages, the protagonist can only arrange for his subordinates to kill people randomly! (Ps: Even if you are a novice writing Shuangwen, if you want to get good grades, you must have a "brain" and at least have a complete logical structure!)

Originally, there was an American up on Station B who talked about the state independence process like this First, the U. S. Congress and the central government have to vote internally to pass the bill, and then after the national referendum is passed, the independent state will then hold a final independence referendum to be legally independent. One of the things they failed to do is that the US government can send troops to quell the rebellion. He also gave an example, so unless the independent state is as bad as Haiti, it will not be legally independent.

The introduction looks very attractive, the evening theme is very good, and I am very interested in it, but the writing is too messy, and the camera switches randomly. It's Chapter 23 and I haven't read the rest yet.

It's really messy, there's a problem with the plot connection, it's too jumpy

It feels a bit jumpy, is it the author's style?

When will the war start? Isn't it just another case of trying to sell someone else's meat? If that's the case, you, the author, are just eunuchs, and we don't waste money, so it's a win-win situation.

Ask the author, is your braised chicken delicious?

After half a month, there are more than ten chapters 😅

Regarding the problems in this book I believe that all readers are attracted by the title of the book or the big chapters, but you will inevitably feel disappointed after reading the content, especially before the twenty-fifth chapter of the book. After that, the content begins to be modified consciously. Of course, the previous chapters will also be gradually modified. Since I am a newcomer, and I am a very enthusiastic person, I really want to finish writing, and I don't want to end up cutting the book because it is too stretched. So I sincerely hope that all of you who can patiently read the latest chapters can see this post. Then I would like to ask fans to leave their own feelings through the latest chapter. The first ten chapters are more comfortable, and the content after the twenty-fifth chapter is more comfortable. Thank you!