Li's Immortal Way

The more you read, the more you find that each character is constantly becoming three-dimensional, individual and identifiable, which makes each plot more delicate and in place, making the overall story more full. In particular, the protagonist's golden needle skill seems to be an ordinary thing, but it can shine in the story. Although it is not an original writing method, compared to most rebirth works, it is very innovative to have the protagonist have this extraordinary skill that an ordinary keeper can practice, and it feels like the hidden weapon of the Tang Sect in Tang San's hand. In fact, those plots that were changed into anime are nothing more than that.

As a newcomer in the world of online literature, the author's first work "Li's Immortal Way" has many flaws... There are no three golden chapters, some characters are not deep and three-dimensional, and the settings in the first few chapters are overwhelming... Although the beginning of the new book has many flaws, the author is very lucky to have the support, encouragement, guidance and suggestions of all the book friends... Sincerely thank you all Taoist friends, the author will continue to move forward! PS: Newcomer Xiaobai is not very fast in coding. Please forgive me, dear book friends. Starting from June 1st, the author will try his best to update twice a day! Woohoo! Ying Ying Ying! Jie Jie Jie!

The first few chapters are too complex, which affects the flow of your book. I suggest you change it. The writing at the end is really good, each character is very three-dimensional, and the rhythm of the story is also pretty good. What a pity.

I think if you change the beginning and delete certain paragraphs if you can, your book deserves better grades. Don't let it get buried because of the lack of traffic due to the dismissal at the beginning.

The author's writing is very strong! Very strong! But it's a bit confusing 😵 I've read the chapters several times and I'm still a little confused. The author can wait until his wings are full before he shows off his sword! Also, the male protagonist gave me the impression that the two labels of old man and acupuncture master were not distinct enough. I hope the author can refer to the psychological activities of the male protagonist in the book "Speedway to Immortality" which is quite interesting. (The above is just my personal experience, don't comment if you don't like it) I will continue to read 😳

Cultivation of immortality is based on Taoist culture, and the earliest authors put a lot of effort into it, such as the level of realm, refining qi - refining qi and transforming spirit - refining spirit and returning to void - returning void and combining with Tao, which basically formed a rigorous and thoughtful system. I basically don't read Western fantasy, supernatural and other novels. Why? Because Western fantasy and supernatural powers do not have a complete system, where is the magic power stored? Some people say that in the sea of ​​consciousness, how can an ordinary person build a magic circle in the sea of ​​consciousness? There are also powers that appear out of thin air and use elements such as fire and ice. How can a mortal flesh and blood bear it without hurting himself? Where is elemental energy stored? What if the effect is improved? Unlike our Taoist cultivation system, which is very complete, the Qi refining stage runs the Xiao Zhoutian (eight extraordinary meridians) in the body. Through eating (refining essence), internal training and external exercises, the muscles, periosteal skin, and meridians of the five internal organs are tempered. The energy is stored in the Dantian and runs through the meridians. When the Qi refining stage is completed, the two bridges of heaven and earth can be opened and the heaven and earth can be guided from the Baihui point. Injecting spiritual energy into the meridians and running through the heavens is the foundation building process. Compressing the spiritual energy from the gaseous state to the liquid state, widening the meridians and further tempering the body is the process of building the foundation. Taoist inner elixir is a spiritual realm, and the golden elixir in the novel I think is the spiritual interference with matter, thereby sublimating the material. The elixir is the integration of essence, energy and spirit to break through this Latitude does not exist in reality but does exist, and Nascent Soul is the continuous improvement of the spirit, making me in another dimension more concrete, and thus interfering with reality more deeply. Transformation means that I in another dimension can fully return to reality through cultivation and become one with the body. Return to virtuality means that after the true self is unified, the body becomes regular. I am independent from reality. There is only a difference in identity between strength and weakness. Hedao means completely mastering a rule or law. At this time, we have an equal relationship with the real world, but there is a difference between strength and weakness. The rules of the real world cannot tolerate this kind of threat, so we lower the thunder penalty, and after it passes, we will ascend to a higher latitude world.

So well written. There are indeed too many settings at the beginning. Readers who suddenly read this book will definitely not want to read it when they see these settings. But the more I write, the better and better I get. After you accumulate experience with this book, the next book will definitely be better!

[There is a lot of foreplay in this book, and it is very slow to get hot. Please forgive me, fellow Taoists, it will get hotter later] You are really a fucking talent! Zhao Liu despised this senior brother in his heart, why is he a genius who is famous on the inner sect list! Kill decisively! Do you understand? The protagonists in the novel are all decisive in killing, okay ! For a protagonist like me, Zhao Liu, decisiveness in killing is just standard. The moment he wakes up, he decisively bends his bow and nocks an arrow and shoots out! Look! The arrow must have passed through the heart! Wait! Why do my arrows stop in mid-air! "It's broken! I've become a stranger!"

On the sandalwood attic, a man and a woman sat opposite each other. The woman has a pair of red phoenix eyes and two curved willow-leaf eyebrows. She wears a silk snow skirt and a gold satin jacket. The man wears a wide yellow shirt and a small piece of peach wood. The man and woman are Li Feiyi and Zhang Lanxiang. Zhang Lanxiang had a cold face and stood up to pour the wine from the pot. Li Feiyi smiled, stood up and held a cup to greet him. The two were silent for a long time. After drinking several cups of wine, the cups were all empty, and the pots were also empty. Zhang Lanxiang covered her face with her horizontal sleeves. After wiping the wine from the corner of her mouth with a silk handkerchief, she raised her chin proudly and asked lightly: "Fellow Daoist Li, do you know any art such as alchemy, weapon refining, formation, talisman making, and spiritual planting?" Li Feiyi picked up a piece of spiritual fish and was eating it with relish, so he nodded. I thought to myself, this restaurant owner is different, the food tastes really bad! Zhang Lanxiang naturally didn't believe it, so he continued to ask: "Lanxiang took the liberty to ask, which kind of Taoist Li knows it?" After Li Feiyi took two mouthfuls of spiritual rice into his mouth, he raised his head and glanced at Zhang Lanxiang, and said: "Medical." Hearing this, Zhang Lanxiang curled up the corner of his mouth and smiled disdainfully, and he was even more disbelieving. Then, Zhang Lanxiang asked again: "Fellow Daoist Li, do you have a paradise in the cave?" "Do you have a powerful weapon?" "Is the spirit stone in the bag quite thick?" Li Feiyi's cheeks were filled with spiritual flesh, and he could only shake his head three times. Zhang Lanxiang looked at the "poor student" who was devouring his food. The corner of his mouth curled up and he couldn't help but shake his head and smile. After a moment, Zhang Lanxiang's smile faded, she stood up and left, leaving only a lukewarm word on the table. "Lan Xiang will not accompany you anymore, it's rude." Li Feiyi has tasted every dish on the table. Some are sour, some salty, some sweet and some bitter. Li Feiyi knows very well - every dish here has its own taste. It is dusk. The figure left, the setting sun shone on the young man's face again, and the sunset poured a small cup of afterglow into the wine cup. Li Feiyi raised the cup with both hands in salute and drank the afterglow in the cup.

Who is the author?🙂

The author is getting better and better as he writes! Marvelous

I will vote for you with eleven recommendation votes every day to support it. I will give it a try after a few days 😊

Hmm, I just like this kind of novel, it's so beautifully written.

Just to be honest, the author is getting better and better as he writes 🤭🤭

Today I suddenly found out that I got an extra amount of points. Faxian's book was actually signed directly. I picked up 80 points for free. Congratulations to the author on signing the contract! !

The next few chapters are really 6, Jue Juezi, holy shit

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One chapter is too little, not enough to fit between teeth

What is this? Xianxia can just apply it directly. He has to come up with a system by himself. The mess he makes is unreasonable and impossible to read.

I bet this book will become a eunuch. I'll post it as proof.

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To be honest, the author's writing is quite good. I can see that he has put his heart into it and is not superficial. However, it may be his first time writing and his writing style is not very fluent. I hope the author will be better.

When I released the book at the same time as you, I could only write 80,000 words. Later, Fantasy 700 had an average of 400,000 words, and now the third book is expected to be a masterpiece. Come back, fellow Taoist, the subject matter needs to be explored, don't give up on yourself easily 😀, Four Sea Traveler stays