Who Hid My Corpse?!

To be honest, I am still a little confused. I originally thought that the book that had hit the market suddenly had success, but some of the problems that followed also made me a little at a loss. I haven't written a book at Qidian for a long time, and I don't understand the rules here, so I can only explain a few recent problems before getting familiar with it. 1. Update issue. Before it is put on the shelves, it is 4,000 words per day. I will write more after it is put on the shelf (because the recommended time for this book is very late, and the number of words will exceed too many if it is updated) 2. Plot issue, everyone may hate Gouzi, I have also noticed it, Rhine It will not appear after the chapter is over, and the Rhine chapter will end before it is put on the shelves 3. Regarding the performance issue, I really don't know how to explain this. You can tell by reading what I posted in the previous chapter. Before I recommended it, I thought this book was going to be a hit, and I never thought that it would suddenly be on the list. But I really don't brush comments, nor do I brush comments as some people say. I wouldn't delete them if I didn't encounter some highly offensive comments. There is no need to use my results to ridicule some great masters. This is really flattering. I know my own level. I have read many suggestions and basically agree with them. For example, some words are wordy and the combat descriptions are not very good. These are indeed my shortcomings and I will work hard to correct them. Also, I am really not the reincarnation of a big boss. I have just written a few fan books in the past and achieved some success, but my originality has never been popular. I wrote a book at Qidian many years ago, and the average subscriptions were 70, 100, and 200 respectively. It was really the best of the best. So for this book, both the subject matter and the plot are completely unfamiliar to me. I really have no experience and can only write as I go. So there are really a lot of shortcomings, and I am really unsure about the current results and everyone's love for this book. I only slept for two hours on the day it was listed on the list. I would wake up from my dreams for fear of writing this book =-= Well... That's about it. Because I don't want to post it in the book and affect everyone's reading experience, I put it in the book review area. If there is anything else, I will wait until the day it is released.

Summary of content: After killing the gods, Vera Bai drew a pie out of Jellal's incomplete soul. The people next to him were pushing and shoving, and Jellal was mixed in, and he followed the crowd into the car in a daze. This is a strange train. Gérard examines its construction, decoration and materials. Is this Tianqin? If so, why couldn't anything match the "gear train" in his memory? If not, which city's god had the mechanical power to create such a creation? The sounds of people around him came like a tide. Jellal could not hear clearly and only felt a splitting headache. "Knight." A voice passed through the tide and came to his ears clearly. Jellal was shocked, as if he had found a fulcrum. Before his mind could even comprehend what had happened, worries and doubts began to fall away. "You..." He looked up subconsciously and found that the person speaking was a strange young man. The young man pointed at Jellal's attire and said with a smile: "Oh, I saw what you were wearing-" The second half of this sentence was concealed by him reservedly. Jellal's clothes were incompatible with his surroundings. The mechanical prosthetic limbs and chain sword glowed with a dark metallic luster, but the others just looked up curiously and said nothing more. "Visas." Jellal said briefly. Young man——Bai Wei laughed. The clothes he wore were the same as those of everyone else on the train: soft fabrics, unfamiliar styles, and overly clean surfaces. Perhaps this made him look too young, and even Jellal was not sure of his own thoughts for a moment. But after this smile, Jellal no longer had any doubts. Visas walked towards him against the crowd. A doubt arose in Jellal's mind: ... If this place is a fantasy, why did the owner of the fantasy make it so crowded? ... Why should he come towards me? He finally stopped. Now the two were very close, they were about the same height, and Jellal could keenly smell the fresh scent of grass and trees from each other. At this time, he wondered again whether this was fantasy. Could pure fantasy be so full of detailed details? "A small gift." Bai Wei's tone was pleasant, "How is it?" Jelal cautiously did not speak. Fortunately, Bai Wei didn't care about his answer. He snapped his fingers, and the omnipresent human voices seemed to fade away like theatrical scenery. "Let's go for a walk?" Bai Wei invited. Jellal nodded. They walked through different carriages of the train, and there were old people, children, men, and women, noisy or quiet, expectant or anxious; there was something in common among them that reminded Jellal of Tian Qin, but it was different from Tian Qin. He didn't think about it for a while-- Bai Wei introduced him casually. "Food." He pointed to a steaming box. "Just for fun." He pointed to the piece of paper on the table in the center of the crowd. "Communication tool." He pointed to a small shiny iron brick. Jellal watched intently, as if he had a clear understanding. "They... Are very orderly." Everyone does their own thing, their emotions generated by their respective positions in the world. They are people in order. Bai Wei smiled and did not say "yes" or "no", but the scene next to him changed again and they came to a busy street. The streets are lively and noisy at the same time. It has become dark, but the city is still bright, with artificial luminous objects scattered everywhere. The streets were equally crowded. The vendors each shouted their own products. The food was steaming and mixed with the voices. These things are very strange. Jellal has never seen them before in other cities, not to mention in Tianqin. The doubts accumulated in Jellal's heart became deeper and deeper. Even if he only took a quick look, he could feel the different cultures this city had and the power behind it... How could he have never heard of such a city before? "Actually, Tianqin is not bad." Bai Wei walked side by side with him, speaking very casually, "Even if it is only a little like here, it is already very good in your place." Jellal was silent. He neither refuted Bai Wei's obviously offensive words, nor wisely asked where "your place" meant. Because he was vaguely aware of the difference between Tianqin and here. "But-" Bai Wei deliberately paused for a few seconds, turned his head to look at Jellal's expression, and sure enough, he saw the knight's increasingly tense face. "Lian Qin is dead, and it will no longer help you. The achievements you once relied on it will inevitably collapse or even dissipate." Bai Wei made an understatement and picked up the cone on the street and handed it to Jellal. Jellal was lost in thought and took a bite absentmindedly, then was shocked back to his senses by the sweetness and coldness of the cone. "But this may not be a good thing." Bai Wei held another flavored cone dotted with fresh fruits in his hand, "The bullet comes to its true fate only after it escapes from the trajectory." Now, Jellal was no longer shocked by the rebellious meaning contained in this sentence, but fell into deep thought. Bai Wei didn't interrupt his thinking and finished his cone slowly. "... There is no god in this city?" Geral asked. The moonlight and lights hit his face together, making his expression very solemn and solemn. Bai Wei smiled and nodded. After a long moment of silence, as if he was infected, Jellal took a long breath, and a slight smile appeared on his face. "Thank you." He said softly. When he looked at the people, the streets, and the city around him with a different look, it all became more and more surprising. "Thank you." Jellal repeated in a low voice. "After-sales service for you." Bai Wei said lazily, "My only surviving host."

A very good novel. First of all, the main line of the plot is very clear. The protagonist collects the stones to restore himself to integrity. Secondly, in the case of the long main line, the characters of each supporting character are very distinct and there is no sense of delay. The main supporting characters successfully established a clear and chaotic position of good and evil in 40 chapters. The character's transformation from a villain, to a fearful one, to a resister, to one who still has a conscience, until the final transformation can be said to be extremely successful The protagonist's transformation from fear to obedience and finally normal dialogue even has a hint of resistance And the plot has a clear discussion of the society in the background world , reselling relief food, cheating in exams, as well as class solidification, government corruption, etc. If you take it in, you can really feel that the social environment inside is like a swamp that makes people addicted I can only say that there are too few chapters. I am about to read the next chapter now, and I can't wait any longer. Click If this book maintains such a high level, it won't be a problem for Baimeng Don't think that my evaluation is too high. You can also have your own judgment standards. After reading it, you will know At present, this book will definitely not be bad. It means that it is the reincarnation of a certain boss, or a newcomer is not the same as a novice

Dude, let's find some famous authors to draw attention to. You look like you were reincarnated from an outside world, but no matter how good your writing is, it won't work if you don't get traffic.

I don't know if I should say it's the possession style, the old man style, or the mastermind style. I feel like it has a little bit of each flavor, but it's really good. The plot and story are well written, and I feel that there is a lot of room for development, because you can change the host, and the new host brings a new perspective, a new protagonist, and a new story chain. The protagonist has a high status, but also has great limitations, which is also very good. If it were completely independent from the carrier, it would not have that flavor. I am very optimistic about this book and more and more people will read it in the future.

It's such an annoying way of writing. When did you start pursuing the villain? This way of writing seems to be very deep. The writing is not up to par, it's disgusting to read.

The first volume is very good, the second volume is readable, and the third volume is 💩. The more I read this female character, the more 💩 she looks like. The portrayal is too rubbish, completely broken. The main character is broken. You are an evil god. You have been turned into a Bodhisattva.

The characterization is so strong, you can really feel the emotional changes

What disgusted me the most in the third volume was that after the heroine destroyed the Holy Sound, she still placed her hope on the protagonist to sort out the mess. This is not something that is taken for granted. It's not that I can't accept the female protagonist rebelling against the male protagonist, or that I can't accept the female protagonist being a puppet. But I can't accept an ending that is both realistic and upright. You create the worst ending according to your own wishes, and then ask the male protagonist how long it will take to kill Wu Ganshen. To put it bluntly, why does the male protagonist have to do this? This is not a thankless thing, but the female protagonist is too childish and the sense of separation is too obvious. You can be self-reliant, have insights, be naturally unruly, and kill people as a mortal. But that's all you have, and you've used everyone just to make up for the scars you've caused in the past with the worst possible outcome? This is the opposite of Uru. One uses his own future to repair the past, and the other uses everyone's future to apologize for himself. After you have done all the bad things, do you still expect others to wipe your butt? Isn't this a typical lack of responsibility and irresponsibility? My simplest moral intuition tells me that I cannot support such a villain to the stage, but I cannot accept such a childish hypocrite to come to the stage. The heroine in the third volume is only for herself from beginning to end. She is too selfish. She does not have so many purely human excuses to cover up the correctness of her actions. Shengyin is bad, surprisingly bad, and then what? Choose such an ending? Let yourself rot and watch Shengyin become a piece of shit, and then force the protagonist to clean up the mess? Please, isn't this childish? Isn't this a separation? When I first saw the heroine falling out with the protagonist, I thought it was acceptable. I was quite looking forward to the direction of the subsequent story, so I was holding back a lot of my thoughts and waiting for the story to unfold. What's the result? Are you just going to show me this? To put it bluntly, this ending is too hasty. The protagonist can be something that the heroine can't do. He can make up for it, or a deus ex machina can come to fight with the holy sound. But this disgusting story about someone insisting on giving her a special nameplate according to her personality is really disgusting to me. The most disturbing thing is that the author said that he is screening readers. I can only say that your first story is well written, but the author can have a God's perspective in the story, but he cannot be really arrogant and regard himself as the top of a green mountain. Especially this kind of mentality where I only need to understand my story, and you, the readers, just follow along and forget it if you don't understand it. It really made me give up my good impression of this author in an instant. You can't learn the so-called arrogance of uptown people before you succeed. You can't write a story and make yourself the dragon in the story. This is a position error made by the author. It can be seen from the emotional statement at the end, including the presentation of the third volume of the work, that the author himself is bored with this book. Readers and readers, as well as the author, have different expectations. But I didn't expect that this thing could be used as an excuse for my own shortcomings. Because no matter how you say it, in my opinion, the ending of this third volume completely deviates from the image of the heroine outlined in so many previous words. The entire third volume is just like the ending. The heroine didn't let me see a glimmer of humanistic brilliance until the end. Even her screams as a lower-class person are so dull and tasteless. At the end of the story, she cannot represent the entire lower world of Shengyin. If what she brings is evil, the evil of order in the entire Shengyin class, then who is the protagonist? A toilet paper to wipe the butt of evil? In the end, I was very disappointed. What was disappointing was not the character of the heroine, but that the author himself should not have used such a character to foreshadow the story. This kind of bomb, which has a strong will to destroy from the beginning, does not need to be painted so delicately. This is a malicious attempt to disguise a bad thing as a good thing. I even think that the heroine is not smart. The reason why she can disgust everyone is purely for the needs of the story. The author's conception has huge problems in this third volume. In fact, to put it bluntly, this story was written poorly by the author himself. The reason why I feel sick is because the author feels that such a bad ending is because he is screening readers? I laughed myself as I wrote this. I can only say that the third volume has so many shortcomings that he is not qualified to say such a paragraph. Because he is the one who is selected. Just like the heroine he wrote, her abilities are limited, but she is lucky, using irregular luck and other people's choices to achieve her goals. In the end, she thinks she has done enough and is waiting for others to eat the bitter consequences she has caused. So, the author still has a long way to go. Don't start showing the arrogance of the creator now. The heroine herself can be written very well, but she lacks too much. I don't hate the heroine so much, what I hate is the garbage the author showed me in the story

Why are so many people criticizing the third volume? Is it because the person I like doesn't show up? Then I will show up! I feel that the author really likes this female character and wrote a lot of troublesome chapters. In fact, some things are boring and troublesome for the author to write, but he still writes it if he likes this character. Such boring fragments are conducive to the integrity of the novel world. She actually doesn't have any deep intentions, which is different from the first and second volumes. After realizing that I was deceived by the world, what should I do? She has completely seen through the world, so it is completely me who knows what I want to do. The puppy on the fourth ticket is also in a dazed state. In all the tickets, the protagonist knows everything but the parasitized person does not know, but the only exception is the girl. She knows that the world is shit, so she comes to explode. I would like to express how much I like it... I don't know why some readers hate it so much, but it's all hate, and it's too bad to complain. I read the book not to see the violence but to see the plot. I want to cheer for this female character!