The Time Dragon Mage

What are you writing about? The protagonist is not introduced much in the first half. He is introduced as a great mage and then continues to be a dragon that protects the country. What is this thing you are writing about? Don't you write about dragons? What the hell? What are you writing about? It's so hard to imagine, why should I be a dragon that protects the country? Hehe

Trivia, more than half of the mages believe in the goddess of magic, and the remaining half include many believers of other gods! It should be said that there are a very small number of mages who believe in Lathander, rather than a very small number of mages who believe in God I would like to recommend another book, I also wrote a dnd novel, if you are interested, you can read it! Book title: The Fantasy Journey of a Half-Dragon

Let me tell you my thoughts. The author doesn't know how to write invincible stories, so he didn't choose the dragon species well and came here for the time dragon, so everyone thinks it's an invincible story. What's the author's problem? The Time Dragon is so powerful! If I can't write much, I will be invincible and have nothing to write about. So the author started writing about various conspiracies and other people's perspectives, which made me even more dissuaded.

Giotractuszeit Male Time Dragon Hatchling Challenge Rating: 24 N Huge Dragon Initiative 0; Blindsense 60ft, darkvision 120ft, keenvision, low-lightvision; Listen 60, Spot 60 Aura Dragon Might (30ft, DC 42) Language Celestial, Common, Draconic, and 55 other dialects and racial languages AC 52, touch 8, flat-footed 52 (-2 size, 44 natural armor) HP 682 (44 HD); DR 10/EPIC Immunities paralysis, sleep, slow SR 31 Fort 33; Reflex 24; Will 37 Speed 40ft, fly 300 ft (average maneuverability); hover, wingover Melee bite 61 (2d8 27/19-20), claws 59 (2d6 18), wings 59 (1d8 9), tail 59 (2d6 27) Face 15 ft, reach 10 ft (15 ft with bite) Base attack bonus 44; grapple 70 Combat Options awesome blow, cleave, flying attack, great cleave, improved bull rush, power attack, snatch, enhanced spell-like ability, maximized spell-like ability Special Attacks Dragon's breath, crush (2d8 27, Reflex DC 41)

This kind of writing about the time dragon basically overwhelms the protagonist. The time dragon is basically invincible as soon as it is born.

The chapters where the protagonist appears are not as many as the supporting characters. In the new book issue, a lot of ink is used to describe the supporting characters. I can't understand it. I really can't understand it.

Teen Time Dragon Challenge Level 9?

The writing has no real sense, like a running account

5th Edition Golden Dragon

To be honest, since you are invincible, even the traditional pretense and slap in the face, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger are useless. To put it simply, it just doesn't feel good.