Jujutsu Kaisen: My Cursed Technique Is a Portal

It's unimaginable that the ability to teleport to another world would be revealed so easily. You don't have invincible abilities, and you don't have a bunch of reliable forces behind you. You are really asking for your own death! The attraction of a different world to a country can be said to be infinite! That represents unlimited resources, unlimited wealth, and unlimited rights! All countries will attack you, you are the piece of meat on the sticky board

Author, you may have underestimated the high-level people in the magic world They are really afraid of death, and they control any risky magic very well The Goujuan family's curse can be spread on a large scale through technological records, and their family has been under control The Sunuo curse was eaten by Japanese knotweed, and there is a risk of being resurrected by the flesh, so I will kill it immediately, otherwise It was Gojo Satoru, he died at that time Otoko Yuta, because he was possessed by the incense in the curse, he was also sentenced to death on the spot Anything that is risky, the senior management of the curse has strict control measures It is most normal for the protagonist's spell to open the door to another dimension to be locked. Otherwise, in a world with viruses, many people will really die.

It's such a mess, go check out fandoms like Wallfacer and see why their data is so bad.

How should I put it, it has a Japanese-style beauty that is bad. He has obviously said that he wants to save the world, but he also has the ability to push his own world. He just has to play house with villains, big and small, and it's a mess. The Crazy Mountains is also a big mess. It can be used as a trap card world view, but it has to forcefully increase the power of Gao Ke. The impact of cross-world tracking has come, and it feels like the author is using it to cause trouble... But from the perspective of the look, it is disgusting. Readers who chase you to write curses back to the fandom.

Seriously, the writing is actually pretty good. The following is subjective and has no reference value. I just want to chat when I have nothing to do. The advantage is that the writing is okay, not awkward or awkward, and the character development is good. There are two main disadvantages. First, you shouldn't write too casually and the plot logic doesn't flow smoothly. For example, in the world of mountains, when you write, you should describe it as "punishing the world without leaving any future troubles." I understand your train of thought. You feel that in the invincible novel you wrote, the male protagonist will definitely not lose, and you can just mess with it. However, the objective logic is that "the male protagonist has not had any resistance to the K-type so far" and "cannot control the spread of K-type pollution." Then what a male protagonist with a normal IQ will definitely do is to "block the world as punishment for breaking the enemy" and "wipe it out as soon as it comes back to ensure that it is as risk-free as possible." No matter what, you will never let friendly forces take the initiative to test this kind of thing that does more harm than good at first sight. Secondly, the depth is too low and the writing of the different world is too sloppy. I dare say that 80% of the audience for this work came to see the well-known characters in various two-dimensional worlds, but you have almost covered the whole process in one stroke. So far, there has not been even one paragraph that seriously describes the complete exploration of the xx character in another world. Although your main plot is not bad, But "the protagonist encounters strange magical events in his daily life with Gojo Satoru and others on the big map" and "Gojo Satoru and others fight zombies separately in the Resident Evil incarnation, with different personalities leading to different endings." Do I really need to tell you which expansion most readers will prefer. . .

I've only read chapter 11 so far. Well, Otoko Yuta can barely be considered a friend. Although it was his request to travel to another world, but to a world with the alien god Cthulhu. Is this a level? If there is a serious situation with Zhou Youtai, let him be permanently exiled to another world. My child, you are really invincible Others don't know about the alien god Cthulhu, doesn't your protagonist know? If one of them is missing, if two come over, the world will be dead.

What the hell is this? Throwing your companion into the Ke system world and letting him return to the original world and run around as he pleases.

It's written in a foggy way. The protagonist is a bit neurotic. He knows the horrors of the K-type but still dares to mess around during the novice period. What kind of conspiracy is there behind the scenes?

Those who have ideas are just a bit... Working slowly and carefully?

The plot fell apart, the eunuchs were broken, and the setting couldn't be grasped at all, and it slowly turned into a mess. Then I still think that readers can't understand it without using their brains😅