Red Dragon: The Path of Destruction

There are too many unnecessary interludes. When it's time to fight, it should be fighting. Other interesting things can be added during leisure time; adding them during battle is, in my opinion, a mistake.

The short stories about the Dragon's Legacy are quite interesting, but there are too many of them interspersed, which seriously interferes with the main text.

The destructive ability could be made more interesting. It's all just the same old enhancements; the contract is gone. What kind of concept is this? It's so mediocre. The destruction is a gushing eruption, which seems to overlap with your black hole ability. The key point is that you gained the ability to enhance yourself, but you hardly use it; it's not shown.

Why are all the dragon-themed novels farming stories? I don't want to read farming stories anymore.

Poor thing, there are only three people commenting, including me.

The downside is the development time; it doesn't specify how much time has passed since the protagonist's birth.

Too much setup and background story introduction resulted in too little actual plot content.

This is just endless rambling; it's so padded out! Four or five chapters in a row, each with a huge chunk of nonsensical dialogue. I came here to see the protagonist's growth, not to read your nonsense.

There's just too much science information out there; after a while, it becomes unbearable to keep reading.

So many explanations, it's so dry to read.