Demon Girl Commander

This book is really frustrating to write now. But I did write very seriously. Even if I pounce, I can only admit that I am not strong enough and my thoughts are not in line with the market trend, so I failed so miserably. But the problem is, I can't write one book and then another, just write one book and then another. This is more than 300,000 words. Now I just want to finish this book. Keep writing until the book is finished. Anyway, that's all I want to say. Without accepting any suggestions I cut the book out of concern, above.

The male protagonist is obedient and a bit like a virgin. Don't be such a literary young man. It's fun to watch. Just kill him and it's over. Kill humans and demons together and it's over

It's not enough. It's a pity that Black Rabbit's new book doesn't include a heroine, but the world view after abandoning the heroine is also very interesting. This new book will be a hit.

This is boring. It's all set in this setting. The male protagonist doesn't directly have sex with the female protagonist. It's very interesting.

Reminds me of Magical Girl Attrition Front, where you have to turn into a monster to destroy the monster.

It's very interesting, but the male protagonist looks a bit like a childish male protagonist in a light novel.

Japanese comic setting, combat power is subordinate to the plot

The combination of the routine of the big sword, the daily routine of a certain unruly drama, and the passion of the sword style creates a suture monster, but the craftsmanship is good.

The writing is okay, but I suggest you not take the male protagonist of the novel too lightly.

The settings are not very conventional. But the author is writing seriously

It feels like it was written by someone who has read a lot of novels. The quality is quite good, but the use of long and short sentences is not very good. The novel reading sense relies heavily on long and short sentences.

Poor black rabbit. It is better to write cool articles. As for the kind of practice where you start from something, your writing style must be good in the early stage. Let's make a profit later.

I just finished reading the latest novel, and I feel that the setting of this novel is relatively fresh. But there are a few fatal points that can easily dissuade passers-by. The biggest problem is that some settings are thrown too late. When I first read it I was confused as to why someone would deliberately set a trap for an honorary officer. No matter how much we discriminate, we shouldn't do things that harm others and not benefit ourselves. It was mentioned later that because of the propaganda of the protagonist's political system and that there is not only one kind of power that can resist the devil. It would be much more reasonable if told in advance. This may be because the author already has a setting in his mind, which creates a misunderstanding between the reader and the author. Therefore, some settings should be thrown out as early as possible, because readers will not have the patience to wait for your explanation later. Speaking of settings, I am more curious about how this world full of demons can produce as many as 23 countries and relatively advanced technology. . . I hope I can reconcile myself later. The second thing is this character building. This protagonist is not very popular at the beginning. If possible, it is best to use some background and growth experience to pave the way in advance. Also, sometimes the sentences read strangely. . I don't know if it's my personal reasons.

Don't be like this, okay?😐

At the beginning, I thought it was some kind of classic second game opening, but later on it felt pretty good, but it was too slow.

This worldview is not bad. If you continue writing like this, it will probably become popular.

To be honest, the plot in Chapter 60 of the second volume is a bit depressing. Well, the protagonist has been poisoned, but he still has to continue to explore, and this devil's lair is not impossible to explore. Personally, I may still think that the protagonist of the doomsday novel should be more cautious.

Interview with Guanghua Zhibo was G, and I was recommended to Zhongda Zhibo, hehe.

Do you want to know the outline of Black Rabbit? At the end, Meng Xing longs for power, but how can an honorary officer be promoted as a summoner? The humans in this world are just like the humans in the plight of Pili Puppet Show. They are basically consumables. In the middle, it is hinted that Meng Xing wants to become a philosopher king and establish a country where honorary officers are in power. There are many mysteries! Want to know how everything ends! 😭