Covering the Sky: the Mythical Demon Lord

To be honest, I have never seen a story about Zhe Tian fan that is so disgusting. This book can be considered a reverse. The protagonist is a "novice" who has traveled through the sky and has no golden fingers, no physique, and no talent. He obtained the Immortal Sutra through a deal with Emperor Huangtian, which can be regarded as opening a golden finger. The main plot behind it is to start his journey as a demon lord. What's the annoying point? There's nothing wrong with setting up a peerless enemy first, but setting this enemy up here is really extremely intellectually depressing. It's also the first time I've seen the relationship between the protagonist and his old enemy in the Zhetian fic. Is it a conspiracy, calculation, and pure love? Instead of attacking the enemy with force, you use a woman to lure the protagonist into being deceived. After the protagonist falls in love with the woman, you tell the truth to the protagonist, kill the unborn child in front of the protagonist, and what else is there to make the protagonist collapse? A small theater in a certain area covered with clouds? Have you lost your mind to Mars? It feels a bit like watching the bloody Korean dramas in the past, which is purely disgusting. After all, the audience of Zhetian fandom basically has a "Zhetian world view", and suddenly seeing this kind of "pure love" plot is really ridiculous. This peerless enemy was a point of conflict in the early stage, so that the protagonist could break the heart-lock and fall in love with the devil. However, there was no way to create the image of the "devil" in the follow-up. We could not see the passion and passion that the author himself said. We only saw "kill, kill, kill", which was very similar to Long Aotian's YY Diary of Revenge, which was so embarrassing that it cut out a city. What is the definition of devil? What is the definition of demon in Zhetian's worldview? I didn't feel it from reading later. Indeed, the "demon" described by the author was completely non-dimensional in the early stage (I don't know until I can't stand it anymore). The only feeling I wrote was that it was seriously derailed from Zhetian. After the conflicts in the early stage were over, the journey to becoming Emperor was relatively smooth. The plot was not so retarded at all. Well, it comes to the language description again. The language description in many places, including the dialogue between the characters, was like a primary school student's composition. In short, there is nothing overwhelming in the early stage, but it is full of bloody plots and has no sense of substitution. I persisted until I got to Emperor Cheng, and I couldn't help but become addicted... The biggest failure was the original plot of creating a peerless enemy. I think most of them may have abandoned it here. It was too intellectual. It was okay at the beginning, but I didn't expect it to change after the main plot developed. It doesn't matter if it's not a cool novel, the key is not to engage in such small plots in romance novels, it's so common!

I found someone cool and gave you my monthly pass, so I stopped updating. Wait until I buy oranges for you.

Shouldn't the Demon Lord arrange a partner for him? Should the strong be lonely?

It's pointless to arrange a fateful enemy for Zhe Tian. It should be because all the geniuses of an era are enemies. What's the point of arranging an inexplicable old enemy for you? I can't wait to kill you, this piece of garbage has a bright future.

In the original work, Immortal King Ao Sheng still needs to see Shi Hao and the Liu Shenfa mastered by Shi Hao to confirm that Shi Hao will be his enemy in the future. This Lukong is an Immortal II or an Immortal III. He has no causal relationship with the protagonist and has never even met him. He can accurately deduce the protagonist and even his position. Brother, the Immortal King is not as good as you😅. Are you really not an Immortal Emperor in the game?

Hmm... Reading this novel, it's like I'm controlling the character to play a game. The protagonist has no brains at all. It's really a shame for Huangtian Emperor to meet you. It said that the divine ban was opened for the first time, and then it was said that it was the first time to open the divine ban? They were almost beaten to death, why not just start before the fight? His wife betrayed him, what on earth was he doing? Isn't it reasonable and enjoyable to read novels? Reading your novel makes me feel unreasonable, uncomfortable, and inexplicably aggrieved.

It's okay to have an old enemy, but I don't feel like writing your old enemy well.

I haven't read it yet. Since he calls himself a demon, he is also labeled as a decisive killer and a villain. If he is really labeled, he can read it. But after I read the introduction... I found it not very interesting and not very attractive. They all write about demons. I think it would be interesting to write about the villain route, but no one writes about them. They all say they are demons. In fact, they are no different from the righteous ones. They are basically all in the decent camp without anything new, and I am tired of reading them. It would be interesting if we did something different and wrote about a Dark Lord who follows the dark flow, but no one seems to be writing about it, which is a pity.

The devil in my heart is the kind of devil with monstrous, domineering, powerful and unyielding temperament. It has nothing to do with good or evil and only depends on the position. The reason why the ruthless emperor swallows others is because of the struggle on the road. Everyone who walks on this road is an enemy. What are you, no matter whether you are an enemy or not? You are a completely evil cultivator who slaughters cities and destroys countries at every turn. You are no different from the evil supreme beings in those restricted areas. Countless sages and great emperors of the human race died to protect the human race. Wherever you go, you even slaughter the common people and mortals of the human race. My three views are relatively normal. I really can't stand it.

They have been mindlessly promoting Wu Shi and others. The descendants of the Immortal King can still be suppressed by Wu Shi. This is also 6. Immortal weapon transformations and chaotic bodies may not be able to defeat the descendants of the Immortal King. Can your family, Wu Shi, defeat the descendants of the Immortal King? Doesn't it take the descendants of the Immortal King too seriously? What's even more funny is that the granddaughter of a quasi-immortal emperor can even tie with Wu Shi. Good guy, Shi Hao and Ye Fan are not that awesome!

In the front, the protagonist's strength is so fast, but in the back, he finds various reasons to suppress his fighting strength. In the fourth life of the protagonist, the Lingbao comes out. After more than 100,000 years, the Lingbao is ready to transform into the fifth life. The protagonist is only in the fifth life. Hundreds of thousands of years later, the protagonist is in the sixth life. Emperor Zun has just been born. As a result, Emperor Zun is considering the fourth life, and you are still the sixth life. I have lived for almost a million years, and I am only in my sixth life. I really know how to suppress my fighting power. What's the point of keeping fighting to keep up with the plot? And you have to know that the protagonist is a time traveler and has a reference. He shouldn't change so slowly. Look at how slow the transformation of Emperor Zun and Immortal in the original work is. Part of it is that there is really no way ahead, and there are no fellow Taoists to refer to the transformation method. The slowness of transformation is understandable. Typical examples are Duan De and the God Emperor, who spent millions of years transforming into immortals. Most of them were either sleeping or crazily stacking their lifespans. There is also immortality, which is stuck in time to come out and bathe in the blood of the emperor. It takes millions of years to become an immortal. Emperor couldn't beat his peers when he first appeared. Even if the opponent was the protagonist, how could he be so good at someone who is millions of years older than his opponent? The process of becoming an immortal probably takes a long time. But the people behind are changing faster and faster. Wushi, Wu Ren, Ye Fan, etc., When people transform, in addition to their extraordinary talents, they also have the transformation experiences left by emperor-level people before them to refer to. For example, Ye Fan learned from a ruthless person how to transform into a chaotic body and live out the next life. Those who have a reference can save millions of years of detours. They don't have to keep crazily stacking their lifespans, sleeping crazily, stuck in time, using long years to explore the road ahead without reference, and become immortals in the world of mortals. It is completely understandable. Can your protagonist be the same? With so many reference answers in my mind, it actually takes millions of years to become an immortal? This is the trash among the protagonists! ! !

The writing is very childish, arranging an old enemy on the road to enlightenment. The opposite party does not break the protagonist's Taoist heart, but instead talks about sleeping with the protagonist's woman like an ancient playboy. It's like a cup of flavored coffee. It's coffee but it tastes awkward.

Rival text! ? How many years has it been since the author read novels?

The endless reincarnation of the ancestors sacrifices the spirit and returns to the human realm. Author, are you kidding me? Have you ever read the perfect original work? If you haven't read it, don't write about Immortal Ancients. It's written in such a bullshit way. In half an era, you become an Immortal King giant. You think they are all the protagonists.

"You can become enlightened by defeating your old enemy." What kind of garbage setting is this? It doesn't conform to Zhetian's world view at all. Well, this so-called old enemy uses all kinds of shameful means to deal with the protagonist, and then you can become enlightened after winning? What's the reason? Who are those supreme emperors who have been fighting all their lives? What does it mean that Emperor Huang Tian has been fighting all his life? Set up an old enemy for everyone, and then try to kill the old enemy, and then half of the people will become enlightened.

First, I don't know what the author thought about arranging this old enemy theory. You say there is a causal relationship, but what you wrote seems to be that there is no relationship. One is a practitioner of the Heaven-shading method and the Luangu method together. One is a cultivator of karma. He is the enemy of farts. Damn it. Immortal kings from foreign lands are not as awesome as you. Second, I don't know what to say when reading your novel. It's like eating without any food. To put it bluntly, it's just a rice bowl, without any other taste, it's just very white. Third, I feel that your writing is very inexplicable. I don't know the cause and effect of many things, and then it becomes inexplicable.

What kind of bullshit rivalry is written here, but it turns out that there was no rival in the first place, so I created one myself, which is a ridiculous setting. In the fight on Emperor Zhetian's road, everyone is an enemy. Where are the old enemies?

Can you also arrange an old enemy? The Shetian Trilogy doesn't have this kind of setting at all. According to your setting, the little milk baby should have died of animal milk before it grew up.

Rubbish novels ruined my youth. I didn't want to read more than 30 of them. Don't watch it for free. Is this how you wrote it ten years ago? It makes sense why it's so popular.

I think there are no demons in Zhetian because there are a lot of self-killing emperors in the forbidden area. The ruthless emperors have devoured countless people Almost every emperor has killed countless people Zhetian is perfect. Killing is not guilty. If you are killed, you can only blame yourself for being too weak.

Writing about traveling to ancient times is a piece of shit.

I thought that the world would be destroyed but I would not be destroyed, but when he talked about the Three Views and love to me, I found something was wrong. Run, run, run, run, Run, run, run, run, run, run, run, run,

A bunch of original enemies, a lot of weird things, everyone on the road to becoming an immortal is a rival, is there any point in creating original enemies? Aren't those geniuses competing for hegemony in the original work better than your old enemies who have no talent at all? You simply have nothing to write and arrange for a fisherman to torture the master. You are so poisonous that you are so complacent.

Systematization of the Demon Lord's Law, Becoming an Immortal in Nine Lives and Becoming a King in Ten Lives

An ancient ax refined from more than a dozen kinds of immortal gold and divine materials

Top Ten Imperial Cities

Why not just light up the incense to start the great reckoning? Enter the fairyland and directly arrange the formation to sacrifice an entire world of blood to the foreign land.

I am the author's younger brother. Something happened to the author, so this book needs to be discontinued for a while. Please forgive me.