What Kind of War Criminal? Am I Not Playing a Game?

OverallComments: Elements~: Iron slaves, mechas, ancient weapons, games and reality The choice of technology and mystery is a path of mutual integration, and the integration of other elements is also interesting; In terms of golden finger, it is self-aiming and loading files, or there are some "weak strategies", which are relatively balanced In terms of the heroine, there are no obvious poisonous points, but there are still minor problems, and there are one or two points that provoke conflicts Disadvantages: 1, the protagonist is "ruthless": The classmates who do not regard the protagonist as a human being and the senior sister 15 years later are well described, but the space is short and they gradually become invisible; The early description of Fatty Wang's shrewd but friendly friendship is pretty good, but the "Chaos" is suddenly connected with the Wang family, directly making Fatty Wang invisible after becoming his younger brother The Orange Cat and the Sword Spirit do not have enough connections, making them look like pets In addition, there are some villains and NPCs, but they cannot match the rapid rise in strength of the protagonist. It can be said that the protagonist feels "isolated" and "lonely" 2, New chapter settings are too concentrated: It seems that due to the interruption of updates, the author has thrown out too many settings to keep up with the past plot in his mind, which is dizzying; The ruins compete for other forces to gain a sense of presence, and the Human Emperor Banner desperately tries to make it more "scientific" by coming up with various settings. The other one is that the protagonist is already at an above-average level on the surface. He should not frequently come up with various "text explanations". He should update the equipment and update the horizontal expansion of the network Oh... Thinking about it this way, the big problem here is the new volume. With the "Chinese" name of the new volume's name, Seed Base, I thought it was a talent training base for mechas set up by the real government, and then the competition in the game was the same, with the two sides echoing each other and having a long history, and then pulling out the "Chaos" bus, and it was over. As a result, I am getting more and more confused now The author should finish this ruins as soon as possible and expand the protagonist's relationship network. Now no one can give the protagonist what he wants, so we don't want him to be all-powerful again. Suggestions: End the fight for the ruins as soon as possible; expand the protagonist's relationship network; deepen the conflict points between reality and the game and the factors that echo each other; pull out daily life to make the plot dull; rationalize the setting (PS: The second chapter of the new volume is weird. The protagonist should be a god under the rules in reality and should not be described as a native of the motherland. The game is the opposite)

Chen Jing

I'll give you two monthly passes to support you, so don't be a eunuch.

Are you dead, the author? If it's not dead, it can be updated. I'm speechless. Who can read this little thing written every day?

How can you let someone catch you? Still judging you? Are you defeated? Where is your fleet? Where is your Colossus? Where are your army, Xingtianxingyun, Burning Sky Divine Weapon, and Taixu Engine? Nothing, you are not a war criminal, who is a war criminal?

You can actually think that the traitor is the protagonist and the group is the friend. Let me talk about my personal opinion first. If you really look at the past from the perspective of the federation, the protagonist is the friend and the group is the traitor. The protagonist is indeed a human being biologically, so he will also be affected by human social relationships. Generally speaking, what would a normal person do to his country if he gets a chance and becomes stronger? The answer is obvious, "Become an emperor by studying literature and martial arts." His social connections are here, and he cannot abandon everything in his past to seek refuge with foreigners inexplicably and enjoy the glory and wealth of foreigners. Therefore, the greatest possibility is to gain glory and wealth by serving the country. But you can't do it in the text, because this federation sucks. This so-called federation can actually let a group take over life and death. Personal life safety is not guaranteed, let alone glory, wealth and feelings of family and country. For the Federation, isn't it really outrageous that the strong men of our own race who can obviously be obtained are directed to foreign races because of rubbish like the group? As for him saying someone was raped? From the perspective of the protagonist, the group does not regard the protagonist as one of their own kind, just a humanoid treasure. You didn't even think of him as a human being, and now he's beating you up and you're calling him a rapist? Man you really made me laugh. Everyone, I think love is two-way, whether it is the great love of family and country, or the small love between people. I love my country because she loves me deeply. China has gone from being poor and weak in the past to its current economic development. What can be seen is that she is constantly benefiting the people from the fruits of development. China has given me a good social environment so that I can grow up healthily; China has given me a good education so that I can think more rationally; China has also given me a straight backbone with its 5,000-year history. I enjoy the beauty of China, so I love her from the bottom of my heart. I love China because I can feel that she loves me too, or that she loves all kind-hearted Chinese people. Although she is not perfect or good enough now, there are people working hard to build a better China, and I am willing to believe them. Personally, I feel that there is no better country than China. To sum up, the federation in the article is so disappointing. In this case, I think the protagonist's behavior is reasonable. If it does not have an impact on the lives of normal people later, I even think he is noble.

Wait a minute, whose book were you reading just now? Didn't I warn you long ago not to read other people's books? Why don't you still listen to me? Why do you read other people's books every day and don't read mine? Do you know how uncomfortable it is for me to stare at Zusuke every day, waiting for new comments? Why don't you read my book? Is it because others write better than me? Are you tired of me? Or do you think my writing style is not good? My writing is poor? Do you think my writing is verbose and annoying? I've obviously tried my best not to write weird things, and I've been waiting for you to leave me a comment. Why do you leave me alone every day? Why are you alienating me? Is it because he has such a good relationship with you? Why do you only see other authors and not me? What are other authors better than me?

No, brother, why do you let others call you a war criminal? Have you lost the war? Where is your Colossus? Where are your Titans? Where are your fleets? Where is your army? Nothing, you are not a war criminal, who is a war criminal!

As title. It's so beautiful. The plot, writing and logic are okay. Not to mention, you can really watch it. . I am writing this just to rant, after all, I have to be objective. It's better to be patriotic than to play in the rice circle if you only praise it. The combination of technology and mystery is not ideal. Separate systems are forcibly blended together. Social relations are weak. Technology and mystery have advanced far beyond humankind, but the relations of production have barely changed. There was no deliberate explanation of the relevant content. (Maybe it is more sensitive when it comes to zhengzhi. In fact, it can be said. For example, external pressure, such as a common fate)

I really regret writing online articles. From the age of 18 when I was coding to the age of 30, I didn't save a penny, and I couldn't help spending this month's rent. Oh, I haven't eaten any food for three days. I'm huddled in an abandoned house waiting to die. I can't even get a daily reward. It's so uncomfortable. I just shamelessly logged into QQ, which I haven't used in 5.6 Years, to find someone to help me. I found that many of my former classmates and friends had deleted me, leaving only 6 avatars. I know the honor and disgrace when I have enough food and clothing, and I can't care about that much anymore. I humbly asked the only female classmate who lit up for 20 yuan for a meal. I was also questioned about whether it was me and even started a video call. Colleagues were having a dinner across the street. A group of people heard that a classmate from several years ago was begging for 20 yuan. They all gathered around me and looked at me like monkeys, smiling brightly. They finally agreed to transfer 20 yuan to me after the meal. I waited for more than 2 hours for the account to arrive. She also wrote a line in the remark to make me feel good about it and told me not to contact her in the future. It was too embarrassing. I replied thank you and found that I had been blocked. Hey, I didn't expect that the friendship of classmates for many years is only worth a mere 20 yuan. It's so hard for me to be a human being. Eating a 20-yuan hot meal, my heart felt cold. This wall-mounted meal that I had bought with a lifetime of dignity felt like it was stuck in my throat, my mouth was burning in my stomach, and every grain in my heart was hurting. In the end, I was not full, but there was no other way. I could only go to bed early and rest. I didn't feel hungry when I fell asleep.

This book is very good, but some chapter reviews are really speechless. I didn't expect that it's already 2024. The ZB Group has already bared its fangs and raised its butcher knife to innocent people. There is something that speaks for the ZB family. This kind of thing, when one day Laomei raises the butcher knife like us, this kind of thing will definitely kneel down and praise its ZB master, and then shout not to let us resist, tmd, don't let me know where this kind of thing is.

The hook is too weak. I was attracted by the introduction at the beginning of the title. There are more than 50 chapters in which the senior sister teaches the protagonist. I know she is teaching the protagonist, but there are two of them, one self-aim and one loader. You, a student who has never been on the battlefield, deflected the self-aim which is the only one that can cause damage to the protagonist. In the first few chapters, you can turn around and drill into space tunnels to fight the evil god. This chapter shows me the strongest war criminal is tortured and educated by the students. A D-class student can counter the protagonist. Why can't a group of S-class people on the battlefield not block bullets?

You all know that the last planet where I was captured exploded, so I just want to ask you why you dare to capture me?

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A nice book, but it has shortcomings. The author is too short.

The introduction is not good, but the novel can be read

After looking at it, I opened apex, and apex started! Wuwuwu, Miss Zi Beng, come back quickly, Zi——Beng

Just write about games. If you write too much about reality, it will become boring.

There are so many posts about these two female protagonists in the discussion forum and why the author doesn't write emotional scenes? So what are book friends posting? As described above, so many senior students refused to accept it, and it was not satisfying enough, so they gave up.

The front was fine, but from the beginning of the academy, I didn't know what the author wanted to express, and the damage reduction aura was already out.

It's a bit floating, with a hammer here and a hammer here and there.

Author, I like your book very much. I voted for it every month. If possible, I hope you can keep writing. If you need more votes, you can tell me directly. I am raising one now. It is very uncomfortable because there are too few chapters.

Brother, it's not that I don't watch it, it's just that there are too few.

Your kid is a trumpet, right? Hurry up and tell me the names of the books written by a big one. There is a book shortage recently.

It's very beautiful. Why are there no high-quality products? Keep it up. The author is great.

The flaws in the setting make this book worthless. If this book were to directly travel through time and then cheat, to be honest, I feel that with the current setting and quality, I feel that even if the score is increased by 10 times, it is insufficient.

Thank you all readers for your support, this book has been promoted to the second round of recommendation! Thank you everyone! I hope that all the grandfathers who keep books will help me read the latest two chapters every day. This is really important to me! I have a dream that I want to say but dare not say. I really want to go to Sanjiang ಥ_ಥ Finally, I wish you good health, academic progress, promotion and wealth!

Today the fifth update has all been delivered. Xiaoka has always been slow in coding and writing. Today I feel like my brain is going bald when I write! But these are all things that should be done. The reader's grandfather loves to read them, so I am fully motivated and must write more! Just really asking for support for your first order! Can you book owners also give me an initial subscription? I really can't live without you on my way forward!

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