I Opened the Gene Lock in the World of Naruto

In the reading experience, the character creation of Uzumaki Mito is particularly eye-catching. Realistic and delicate, emotional expression sincere and moving, it successfully moved me, which is a highlight. In addition, other aspects of settings and imagination are also above passing standards, and it has been added to the bookshelf. However, the "inner demon" setting introduced after the protagonist turns on the gene lock is slightly abrupt. The protagonist's inner demons focus on the confusion of "the world is unreal." This core contradiction is obviously separated from the realistic tone and emotional logic established by Uzumaki Mito mentioned above. It fails to realize the natural connection between character growth and setting expansion, and it is inevitable that there will be conflicts before and after, making it a regrettable failure.

Everything else is fine, except that I feel like the male protagonist is mentally ill. He always leads others, wants to be a matchmaker, other people's private matters belong to others, and always puts them on the line. They don't have a single character, maybe they are just acquaintances. Do you need the male protagonist to be such a badass? Be yourself, improve yourself, and live your life well. The male protagonist has just seen the Naruto stereotype, so he has to be the original one? With the time traveler, the world of Naruto is different, unless the male protagonist is a loser. Die halfway

By the way, can you please stop developing Ice Release on Hashirama's Wood Release? What else is the use of a big iceman like you besides being big? It's a complete waste of chakra. It's better to develop it in the direction of freezing and ultra-low temperature. I feel that the compatibility of Ice Release and Wood Release are completely incompatible. If you don't have any ideas, you might as well learn Ao Pheasant.

In those few sentences in the introduction, I felt that the genetic lock was destroyed.

If you want to see the protagonist's rapid and all-round growth after turning on the gene lock, you can leave. The protagonist is far stronger than Minato who is the same age and Naoki who is two years older at the beginning (turning on the gene lock to learn the strange power boxing in seconds and practice ninjutsu to be able to cast without seals instantly). After more than 50 chapters, the protagonist's strength is almost at the same level. This is the first time I see a protagonist cheating and being overtaken by a supporting character.

Let me briefly talk about the general effect of gene locks in Infinite Horror First level: Unlocking instincts can greatly improve perception and control, allowing ordinary people to kill several unarmed special forces with bare hands Second level: Complete control of the body, can quickly recover from injuries, and explode with maximum power , enhance the five senses, super endurance and other abilities Level 3: Developing the brain domain can directly allow the human brain to have computing power far beyond that of a supercomputer, and can simulate other people's thinking, greatly improving control. If developed, it can develop some abilities related to mental consciousness (the most important thing in Level 3 is computing power Improvement, combined with a system that consumes computing power, can directly bring about qualitative changes, such as orthodox cultivation, or the superpowers of magic) The beginning of the fourth level: entering the micro level (can be compared to the complete state of Hai Huli), and fine-tuning genes through micro leveling, is to change the destiny. The first level, one effort is equivalent to a hundred parts, the fourth level can be directly changed For things like changing into one's own species (including species in a world view with extraordinary power, a whole set of ultimate creatures), an ordinary person who has unlocked the fourth level can kill a third level in good condition instantly while being close to him (an analogy is that in Haihu, he uses electric current to propel a group of 800,000 strong men alone) Fourth level Middle: Lighting up the light of the soul can be said to be the first level of qualitative change compared to the Fourth Beginning. It is basically equivalent to the changes you undergo in your mother's womb and after you are born. After lighting up the light of the soul, you can achieve reverse entropy by making something out of nothing. To put it simply, energy comes out of thin air. When this happens, you can do it without asking for help. After lighting up the soul completely After the light, you can awaken an ability, which can be used to see the magical power of your life. It is the most suitable for the user Si Gao: I haven't specified it. I read a lot of fan fiction and went back to read the original work. My personal judgment is [accumulation]. When the accumulation reaches a certain level, it is possible to enter the four highs and be able to complete "I have energy." ", That is, energization. This stage can be achieved at the atomic level (I can't remember whether it is at the atomic level, but it is the level where Nexus' light decomposes), and you can see a relatively more real side of the universe, such as observing energy flows, plane barriers, etc. In addition, Z version In fact, there is no real fifth level of gene lock. The so-called fifth level actually refers to the holy position connected with the multiverse, but you can also become a saint by following other systems, so strictly speaking there is no fifth level. After the fourth level reaches the critical point of sanctification, if you are not a saint, you can choose to continue to accumulate and become a saint. You can keep accumulating until you become an inner universe.

If you turn on the first level of gene lock and cannot grow to the shadow level within half a year, you will be pure waste; if you turn on the second level of three years and six small star destroyers, you will still be the kind of existence with no blind spots and no defects; if you open the third level of analyzing the nature of chakra, you can launch your own extraordinary energy system that is completely controlled by yourself. The fourth level of atomic level control, the fourth level of spiritual light, you can be invincible to Naruto at most if you open the second level. Gene lock plus comprehensive comic, I always feel like I can't get around Jun Ji

Although I don't know whether the Konoha you want to write about is dark or light, but there is one thing: Danzo is never a good person, so why don't you expose your talent directly for fear that others will not take advantage of you? The second one is someone who has died once and is not defensive at all? Not to mention anything else, even releasing all the things that could have been hidden as a trump card makes people feel that the death of the protagonist is not unfair at all.

After a while, I suddenly realized a cognitive error about the hanging rail. Where did Kishimoto get the ideological foundation to create the idea of ​​a three-year-old child going to the battlefield? Is it because the timeline of the long work is out of order, or is it something he personally witnessed, or is it a historical reappearance of the society in which he lives? Generally speaking, everyone thinks it is the timeline of the work. However, I just happened to check that during the British Industrial Revolution, there were actually 3-year-old workers among the lower-class workers in London! Then during Japan's reconstruction period after World War II, when even adults had to work on the ice, there were 5-year-old workers! It's so dark to step on a horse, it's so dark to step on a horse!

The vortex of the protagonist is a bit fake. Take the amount of chakra as an example, other whirlpools are all chakras. The measurement units are hundreds of calories and hundreds of calories. When it comes to the protagonist, the calculation must be reversed. Kakashi said that I have at least 100 whirlpool power. After all, the protagonist, the whirlpool, has two water avatars, a water prison, and a strange power punch, and he has no chakra. Look at Naruto, even if he doesn't use Kyuubi's chakra, he never lacks chakra. Shadow clones are overwhelming to use.

The book of running accounts seems to be no different from the one written by AI. Except for the boring text, you can't feel anything else such as emotion, conspiracy, growth, etc. The protagonist keeps talking about the original work xxx, how is the original work, and if you like to refer to the original work so much, you can practice it honestly. I can't see the protagonist's position and future at all.

The first level is not fighting instinct, but the instinctive genetic instinct, and the passive talent is maxed out; the second level liberation is to modify one's own genetic data. As long as the knowledge is enough, it means standing on the ceiling of biological civilization; the third level death immortality, directly develops into a dimensional overlord-level civilization; the fourth level atomic control, the basic standard of god-level civilization, the fourth level can be self-sufficient from the spiritual dimension after overcoming inner demons! The Four Highs are already qualified to join the Zero Returner Alliance, the great god-level civilization of Pengci, the fifth-level information, energy, and rules are converted to each other. The Five Highs modify the timeline and are themselves the source. This can already touch the other side of the first life, the red-haired Immortal Emperor, the five (ultimate, emperor, and innate) saints to directly compare with the ancients, the ancestors of sacrifices, and the Six Transcendences.

A first-level gene lock from the Uzumaki clan, an elite chuunin for two years. With the gene lock turned on, and two more chuunin assistants, he was beaten by a jounin.

The gene lock that the author understands is turned on with no makeup and no weapons loaded, while Naruto's body is naturally armed. Just like the difference between a naked person and a person driving an EVA, one is wrapped in a layer of clothes and the other is a tens of meters high super gun. Can the combat effectiveness be the same? It's unreasonable to do the same thing, it obviously suppresses the combat power.

It's so rubbish. Look at what's written in the martial arts book. The second-level gene lock can't even reach the shadow level.

I thought the time traveler was an adult's mind and a child's body. Or a child's mind, an adult's body. But when I read this novel, you would say that the protagonist is an adult, but he behaves childishly. If you say that the protagonist is a child, and his thoughts are mature, it is really difficult to tell whether the protagonist is an adult or a child. 😃😃😃

The front is fine, but the back is messed up. For example, when dividing tailed beasts, one tail is included, and one tail is the weakest tailed beast. The author euphemistically said that the original work said this...

Although I don't remember the effect of the gene lock in the original work, it should be similar to the over-limit state, which is more or less a super power. What are you, the ninja version of Keanu Reeves, not as good as a super body? It is very abnormal to inherit human genes, but this is the breakthrough of the gene lock to continue the alien bloodline? Not to mention other things, isn't it natural to open the gene lock and complete some Otsutsuki genes to grow horns and eyes? Are you going to improve your reaction speed, physical skills learning, and chakra control? There is no breakthrough in learning ability

Let's put it this way, gene lock is an additional buff! Whether two people with the same physical fitness have the fighting power that the genetic lock can show is a completely different concept Do the same two people with the same genetic lock have the blessing of extraordinary power? Those are also two concepts! An ordinary person can only fight a few special forces with a first-level elite A person with extraordinary strength can fight several non-gene-locked people with the same strength With the gene lock turned on at the same time, to put it nicely, even if you are a fool, you can become a genius

It's not that exciting. I've read about ten chapters and it's the same as the story. It's not that exciting. The protagonist knows a gene lock stage, beats a dragon genin in one stroke, wins an arm wrestling match with a rope tree, and gets a shadow clone scroll... This is more than ten chapters. If the process of beating the dragon genin is more exciting, the result is that the protagonist falls into a state of confusion. When he wakes up, he finds that the dragon genin has been beaten by himself. Can you tell me what this is about?

Even though I'm doing a lot of cheating, I'm still like a loser who can't stand grinding and whining. The plot is very strong and Hachipo is speechless. It's not unreasonable to have poor grades. A whirlpool physique is used the same as Kakashi's.

After it was released, I felt like watching Boruto, forcibly exalting the protagonist and suppressing other characters. I had an embarrassing feeling that the protagonist could save the world even if he farts.

Although this book is cheating, the overall progress is very good. There is no random introduction of non-Hokage factors. The characteristics of Naruto's power are promoted under the Naruto power system. The overall plot is reasonable and not brainless under the structure of neither dark nor funny. The ending is not unfinished, but it can still be written. The author's reason for ending is also quite correct. Keep up the good work, come on!

I feel like there will be a plot in the future where three generations die.

The protagonist was slashed in the neck by Hanzo, what happened? I've read two chapters down, but there's no explanation?

It is a rare good Naruto book. First of all, the writing and plot are very smooth. The second thing is to have its own system. The gene lock and the Hokage system perfectly match each other. There is no super class and it is not particularly weak. Not bad, not bad

Looking for a Naruto fan fiction. The protagonist Uchiha didn't open his kaleidoscope. Or the kaleidoscope is opened but the eternal kaleidoscope is not opened, and the novel is reverted to the novel about the three magatama eyes of Indra.

The Chakra Black Rod should be a fusion of Yin and Yang Dun, right? Yin and Yang Dun, and the physical enhancement of the fusion of 5 attributes. Has it been eaten? Magnetic escape is wind + earth, wind + earth + thunder may be electromagnetic escape, maybe it is something else, but wind + thunder should not be magnetic escape. Sharingan, Byakugan, etc. Should be the fusion of Yin Dun + Yang Dun, but the "molecular formula" is different (here, "molecular formula" is used to replace a certain word, but I don't know what to call it). I think Wood Release requires a change in the nature or form of chakra, such as turning earth chakra into humus, turning water into mineral water (this idea comes from "Starting from Naruto, Becoming Stronger on My Own").

The writing is good and the ideas are okay, but the plot is a bit off. Seeing that half of Danzo's body was lost due to poison, he was persuaded to retreat.

There is no relationship between evolution and degeneration between the author's Sharingan and the Rinnegan. Kaguya's Sharingan with the power of the Rinnegan is called the Rinnegan, which is essentially a type of Sharingan.