The Army Is Pressing Down on the Country, Why Should I Listen to Music on the Hook?

The first few pictures were average, but after the brothel poetry meeting, it gradually became better. Although the author's writing is average, the story is still good. I suggest the author strengthen the description of the characters and buildings, such as the internal and external characteristics of the brothel, and how beautiful the beauties are. This will make it more complete. I have read the latest chapter. Please write more, and I look forward to the following stories.

This is an embarrassing novel, don't read it if you can't stand it...😅😅😅

This is too naive. Even if the prince is deposed, he is still of royal blood. Who has no time to mess with a prince except for rebellion? 😰 The royal family, not only the emperor, but also the clan family is not a living person. This prince is acting like a dog, so can a dog come over and scold him?

Poor grades are not without reason

Just finish elementary school and then write.

The first one has so much inner drama

When I saw The Abandoned Prince, I thought of previous novels. A kid with a pig's foot was suddenly trapped because his parents were abdicated because of the family, and was later bullied by a group of domestic slaves. My embarrassment was gone after reading this! There are people in such a family who are fighting for him, Zhong Xin!

Already finished reading. Speed ​​update.

Congratulations on signing the contract🌹🌹

Daily guide - understand everything you know

Dreams are a reality, a reality The reality during the day is just a dream Dreams at night are real Life is a dream, dreams are real I travel in dreams, looking for my origin I create in dreams, showing my infinity I wake up in dreams, transcending my own limitations I become a god in my dreams, Control your own destiny Life during the day is just a habit The world during the day is just an illusion I during the day is just a shell Everything during the day is just a game I participate in the game and abide by the rules and order I imitate in the game, learn knowledge and skills I endure in the game , bear the pain and difficulties I am waiting in the game, looking forward to the coming of night The dream at night is my reality The universe at night is my reality The me at night is my true self Everything at night is my will I am free in my will and choose as I want I am magical in my will Wonderful, experience endless changes I am perfect in my will, realize the highest ideal I am eternal in my will, enjoy the most beautiful happiness Life is a dream, dream is real Reality is fantasy, fantasy is reality Who am I, who am I This is my answer The short novel is beautiful, the author ✍️ is good, with puns, 🤔

How should I put it, it feels like it is written like a child playing house...

So far, I have been recruiting girls The standards for reward distribution have not been clear The main plot is very vague, and now I feel it is a mess, going here and there, here and there It has always been emphasized that the protagonist should be the emperor, but the protagonist has been jealous, and there is no sense of heroism at all. On the contrary, the supporting role is better described than the protagonist, and the priorities are reversed. Then the background of the world is not clear. I understand that you want to describe a grand world view, but so far, I can't even understand whether it is a world of martial arts, cultivating immortals, or weird immortals. I especially emphasize that the main line is not clear enough and is very confusing. Author, you'd better organize the outline before writing. It makes me sleepy😪