I Can See All Things Prompt

The conversion is very stiff, but the mysterious items in it are well designed. The biggest problem with this book is that there is no main line. All the protagonist's strength now comes from items, and there is no upgrade or anything. So many items are already very powerful. So far, nothing has been said about improving oneself and evolving. It feels like you're just fighting in various ways just to collect items. You don't know what you're trying to do. Are you risking your life for excitement?

After reading eleven chapters, I can summarize it in just one word, it's confusing

There are many typos, and some places are inexplicably changed to another paragraph. It is very confusing to read, and I suspect it is an AI work.

I was bombarded with characters, all with foreign names, sometimes their full names, sometimes their surnames, and sometimes their given names. Can't tell the difference at all

Sorry, please forgive me. I really didn't understand it at all. It's too confusing.

The name and introduction are quite attractive to me, but the content is really hard to describe in words.

There is a problem with the transition, the cause and effect are not clear

The system and mystery are well designed, but the connection is a bit stuck and cannot be read smoothly Also, I would like to give a suggestion to the author. It is enough for the supporting characters to have names. There is no need to add the last name every time you retell it. It seems very cumbersome.

The switch is too sudden. The protagonist has a transformation prop, and then he doesn't know when he will transform. The next scene starts without any foreshadowing. The same situation occurs when switching scenes. The switch starts without any foreshadowing or explanation, which leads to an extremely bad reading experience. To put it bluntly, I don't know where I am, and I am completely confused.

The plot is okay, but the connection is stiff. It jumps directly from the previous paragraph to the next without any transition.

There is indeed a problem with the characters' names. After reading more than ten chapters, I can't tell which one is the protagonist.

Why don't you revise it? Some sentences are too messy.

The design of the occult is wonderful, but the transitions are too fast. The protagonist's skills and items are not fully described at the beginning, and many plots are confusing. The more important problem is that the author really wants to portray the characters through actions and language. The lack of descriptive language is just like the bad habit of the squid, resulting in the characters not being fully three-dimensional. You can add some psychological descriptions of the main and supporting characters, as well as third-person image descriptions, and appropriately profile the supporting characters, which can reduce some reading burden.

Will the early plot be modified or redesigned? I've read a few chapters now and I can't understand the plot direction and character settings (the character settings are mainly because there are so many and long names that I can't remember them all) and if the author doesn't think there's a problem with the writing and description, it's really a bit too stream-of-consciousness for me.

The update time is too confusing. Can the author clarify whether he is updating one chapter or two chapters? I updated during the day and thought there would be more at night, but it turned out that I couldn't wait and wanted to read more.

Not bad, but it requires certain reading comprehension skills to screen readers...

The creativity is very good, but the writing is a bit not smooth enough.