Uchiha's Double-Pupil Sharingan Suppresses Itachi on the Night of Genocide

First of all, there are too many typos. Secondly, I don't care if there are some changes to the character. I just treat it as an exaggerated description. You need to be cautious when entering this trap.

This book succeeded in making me not want to read it just by reading the introduction.

I read a random chapter in it, and there was a sentence in it that made me not want to read it for a moment. Uchiha Fugaku flattered Sarutobi Esma and said "..." It can be adapted, not for you to be a down-to-earth editor. The dignified leader of the Uchiha clan is like a bitch. I have read so many books, but this is yours, let alone reading it without thinking, even the eyes can't stand it.

In the first chapter, I was persuaded to quit. When I looked at the timeline, I knew that I was another baby sucking all over the world. I was speechless😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

I can't stand the first chapter. What kind of ninja world is there? Will Uchiha dislike alien eyes? The beginning of a low-intellectual article about a mysterious entrance

What's the use of a bunch of conservatives surviving?

I haven't had a cerebral thrombosis for ten years and I can't write such an article. I feel embarrassed when I read it.

Looking at the introduction, it said that the conservatives were left behind. What can this thing do if they stay? Then they will serve as dogs for Konoha and wait for the next night of genocide?

The starting point review is now getting worse and worse, and the basic quality cannot be guaranteed. The author's writing level cannot be more than a junior high school student.

Chapter 500 and I still haven't killed Sarutobi and Danzo. I'm convinced too.

6. When Uchiha sees double pupils, he will think it is a mutation of the blood eye, and he will be curious about his ability. If a family that advocates eye skills has not confirmed that the double eye ability is before the blood eye deteriorates, how could it be possible to say something that insults the glory of Uchiha. Fugaku even knew about the existence of the Mangekyō Sharingan, and he definitely knew what the two eyes meant. The author probably still wrote the article 10 years ago.

In a world where the power of heaven and earth belongs to oneself, the head of a wealthy family was tortured by a few ruffians the year before last, and it was hilarious.

The ultimate intelligence reduction, the character's personality and behavior are not in line with the original design, the routine of ten years ago, from the perspective of Uchiha neurosis, the person who is born with double pupils and blood wheel eyes can only be a genius among geniuses, suppressing first and then promoting is no longer suitable for this era.

What you wrote is stupid, don't write it next time.

Personal opinion: Wearing the skin of Naruto, writing the plot of the fantasy world, and carrying the character of fighting to break the world, the precocious and introverted Weasel is a fantasy writer who always calls people useless; if you don't agree with the old man's ideas, run away and follow him. Asuma Sarutobi, a famous bastard, became the loyal henchman of the third generation, the vanguard of Uchiha; Danzo became the most leisurely pot shadow, and he was no longer needed for any dirty work, and it was all done by the Sarutobi clan who were obsessed with obscene development.

When I saw Senju and the others awakening to the Wood Release, I was no longer interested. They are not direct relatives, so how can they inherit it through blood 😥 I felt like I was mentally retarded.

If you don't have money, go to Big Screw. Don't pollute other people's spiritual world here.

Against the odds, I persuaded him to quit in the first chapter. Although I also hate Itachi, it is not a reason to change randomly. His character is destined not to be as brainless as those ordinary people. Seeing Itachi constantly disdain the protagonist and mocking him when he opens his mouth, is this Itachi?

I don't want to say anything else. I can only say one thing. What I wrote is a piece of shit.

Speechless, a waste of coins Sixth Sharingan, one ability per turn + Book of Sealings + Eight Gate Armor On the night of the genocide, Itachi slaughtered most of the tribe and let Itachi and Obito run away. Afterwards, he asked the tribe not to retaliate against Sasuke. Your Sixth Rank Sharingan cannot beat a Mangeka Sharingan. The four extra skills are for feeding dogs

Anyone who can write a book like this is a god

Basically, every book is hit or miss. If you don't know how to give a Japanese name, you can just give it a Chinese name. It's not like the Naruto world doesn't have Chinese-style characters. It's really weird to have a Japanese surname paired with a Chinese online game-style name.

It's really a wisdom. Even if you can travel through the soul, the body function of a three-year-old child has not yet fully developed. A three-year-old child can reach the same speed as Metkai's morning jog at a certain height. I would like to ask the author, is the height of a three-year-old child taller than your waist? Not to mention running, how many steps does it take for you to take one step? He also runs, and his chakra is no less than that of a Jonin. So what was Sage of Six Paths doing when he was 3 years old? Come on, he is only three years old. You can say that he is very talented, but don't insult adults. Please clarify what age you should do.

I felt so aggrieved when I saw it that I vomited

Is this a kindergarten? ? ?

He is a genius who can write so many words. He is so bad at writing by force.

There was a direct black market crazy bounty for Danzo and a member of the Root Organization, and a direct bounty of 100 million for one against seven Uchiha. Just let them stay at home