Follow the Advice to Cultivate Immortality: from Casual Cultivation to Become an Immortal King of Ten Thousand Dharma with Extra Points

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that it needed to be filled in with details or subplots. It really didn't have any big bad points, but it also didn't make people want to keep reading, and there was no sense of expectation.

The writing is quite smooth, and the plot could have been more exciting.

Especially on Tuesday, regarding new book recommendations, please!

It feels like the protagonist is obsessed with the Sinan family and doesn't know how to plan his own future. You're not married, so will the Sinan family give you foundation-building materials? You might be able to destroy the Sinan family by yourself with a sneak attack through the system, and why are you looking for them to back you up? You have a foundation-building pet and find a family with two foundation-building periods as your backer!

There are really very few books that Xianxia can read now. You are doing pretty well, you don't deliberately pretend to be cool, and your IQ is still online. It's just food and fodder for now!

Can't someone else draw the soul-enhancing talisman?

Mention a problem. It is best to unify the names of the magic weapons and equipment in this article. A magical weapon is a magical weapon, spiritual energy is spiritual energy, and a magic weapon is a magic weapon. I just saw the gift given by the protagonist to Chen Erniu's daughter The primary magic weapon is called a magic weapon and I can't stand it

Two chapters a day is almost enough. One chapter is too little and I have no desire to follow it.

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Author Jun, we spent Q coins to read the useless pig's feet you wrote. I'm convinced.

Don't be too wet and hurry up and code

Too little Update more

I feel like the protagonist's character is a little bit coquettish! Ink stains! Too old!

I mistakenly thought that the supporting actress looked too stupid😳

At present, it can be watched in its entirety, which is already better than a large number of them. If you want to go far, you should spend more time on the setting, and the plot should at least have basic logic. There are many problems such as the indiscriminate use of magic weapons and weapons, and the grinding of battles. There are also many unreasonable things, and readers will be screened.

This is system flow, not mortal flow

Even though my grades were worse, I didn't cut it out, but I kept on writing because I also had three other reading friends. Just enough to fight a table of landlords 😊

I have a suggestion, maybe you can learn to "open the book". I think only by "opening the book" can people quickly understand how others write books, and it is best to watch other people open the book. It is difficult to open it yourself.

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

Is the mechanism for adding points after foundation building gone?