I Didn't Come Here to Chase Deer

After reading all the chapters so far, it feels a bit interesting. I think there are two points I still want to say. 1. The protagonist team travels as a group. In the beginning, the story is about rescuing people, exploring the world, and even finding teammates. All the plots happened within a few days. The plot is relatively compact, which I think is okay, but one thing is that I think the time progress of the plot development still needs to be grasped. The early plot is understandable, but the later plot is still the same as the early one. I don't know how many words are needed to develop to the later stage. If the author has an outline, ignore this point. 2. Since we are traveling with the game, we can briefly introduce the characteristics of the game played by the protagonist group, what is the level and strength of the players, what abilities and strengths the protagonist group currently retains when traveling to other worlds, what is the position of each member of the protagonist group in the union, and what is the position of each member of the protagonist group in the union? What is the character? How different is the level of the equipment carried after time travel compared to the other world? Although the protagonist group's fighting, spells, and treasure props confrontation have different realms, which often results in a crushing game, but sometimes it is still difficult to reflect what the protagonist group relies on to achieve a crushing game by relying on one realm division alone. This is just my fragmentary thought. I am too bored at work, so I can just talk about it if I feel it. Many things are too vague in the book, and the sense of substitution in the plot will be weak. Occasionally, I even feel a little unable to substitute or understand. After all, the plot has just begun, maybe the author wants to reveal it slowly. The world view is huge, there are many forces, and there are many protagonists. This is a great test of the author's writing skills. I look forward to the later content.

Bros, please help me. It's time to start operations. Thank you bros.

To be honest, the writing is really great and the style is very good. If you keep it up, your grades will not be bad. A blind guess, the twelve missing people have woken up and gone out in the past, the world has been affected by them

Brothers, please give me more opinions😫

I'm a newbie and don't know anything. I'd like to ask you all for your favorites, favorites, and recommendations to help me enter the signing stage as soon as possible. I will definitely transform into a Code Parlu and live up to everyone's expectations. Please! Help the kids! (Hold my head and cry)

Should I say it or not? You really dragged on this battle for a long time. The article is too long.

Why haven't anyone from the guild joined yet? I feel like what I'm most looking forward to is the talent in what position who will wake up next.

It feels like watching a 3D game, it's okay, it looks good

The subject matter is quite good, and the writing style is also good, but if you don't save the manuscript, don't hesitate. By the time it's published, there won't be many people around. See for yourself, even if you delete the last 8 or so chapters, it won't affect you. Your enthusiasm will be extinguished directly.

The writing is quite good, a bit like a fantasy version of a martial arts novel, but the pace is a bit slow. It feels even slower when you add about 4,500 words of updates a day.

I can't finish writing it, I'll finish it and send it out tomorrow. I'm so sorry!

Today's article is still being typed! Let me first say Happy New Year's Eve to everyone! Thank you all for accompanying me in the Year of the Dragon ~ See you there in the new year!

There are a lot of things to do during the Chinese New Year, and I really can't catch up today, so I'm extremely sorry. I hereby take one day off.

Update soon! ! !

Collecting, reading, commenting, recommending votes... Everything is good. Newcomers in the signing world need the support of big bosses from all walks of life! Please give me a helping hand to enter the shelf realm again!

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Starting from late August, I fell ill just in time for the season change. I originally planned to resume updating in September, but I was always out of shape. I was not satisfied with what I wrote and couldn't write what I wanted to write. Simply start combing through the full text, confirm what you are going to write next, and look for the status. This book is scheduled to be five volumes, and I have already reached the end of the fourth volume, so please rest assured that I will definitely finish it. I can't stand in this bad state and post something that I can't even stand. It is difficult for me to guarantee updates in the next week, but I will try to update a few chapters to ensure that your initial investment will not be wasted. I will resume updates next week depending on the situation. Thank you all book friends for your tolerance and support.

Book friends, I really can't catch up on today's updates. I'm going to take a day off and will catch up later.

Once your account is good, you should make up for whatever you owe 😰

There are a lot of scratches on the front, damn it

There is something wrong with my mentality and I cannot write the picture I want. I'll take a day off and I'll make up for everyone before the end of the month. Thank you everyone for your votes and subscriptions, but I really can't write at the moment. (Cry)

The situation got worse and worse as I wrote, and the plot was clearly about to reach its climax but I couldn't write it out. I'm very sorry, but I'm taking a day off to sort out the plot and ideas.

Please take a day off to smooth out the follow-up plot. Thank you everyone for your support.

Family members, the author is suffering from rhinitis. He may not be able to write more today or tomorrow. I asked for leave in advance and bowed to everyone. I'm sorry!

The poor author is suffering from rhinitis, pharyngitis and a cold at the same time 😢😢😢 Brothers are really embarrassed to have to take leave today 😢😢😢

Always letting the villain run away, once or twice is fine, but if you do too much, it becomes very poisonous.

The following plot needs to be sorted out, otherwise it will be a bit bloated. In addition, please rest assured that I am definitely rushing to finish writing to this point. Thank you for your support.

Thank you all for your tolerance and waiting, we will return this Saturday.

What's the chapter today? 😭

There was something wrong with starting a new plot, and it hasn't been finished yet. It's too late to post today. I hereby take one day off and make it up next month! This month I coded 130,000, and next month I will try to code 140,000. Thank you everyone!