Back to 1982: While Everyone Else Goes into Business, I Head for the Mountains

The first point: water! It takes five or six chapters to sell a nugget of gold And then I'm a little bit brainless. You believe whatever people say. You said you were going to sell gold, and you showed that there was a lot of gold. You dared to trade with others privately. This is completely brainless. In which era, people killed you and then sank into the river. Who can know? This kind of thing should be settled directly without giving the other party time. Cut the mess quickly and admit it even if you suffer some losses. It is better than losing your life! If you want more money, what people will care about is your head!

The writing of this Ruyan is really disgusting, and the main character is also really useless. Time travel and rebirth are a shame. No matter how beautiful the woman is, there is no reason for me to be angry. If you don't know the law, you won't find anyone to ask. It's just a comparison.

Do you accept this book from your mother-in-law? Just read it.

Don't read this book with your brain in mind, remember!

From the reading of the last book, to be honest, it is not as good as the previous book. I almost thought it was written by someone else First of all, I don't know if you want to give up the old readers who read your books, but in my opinion, the old readers who read your old books are basically LSPs. They like the tone and basically abandon most of your writing methods Secondly, even if you want to innovate , the beginning of your book also doesn't catch people, the start is slow, there are no three golden chapters at all, and the follow-up is also bad. I can't see the plot I want to see in lsp. The period novel doesn't have that feeling, and the jungle jungle doesn't have that flavor. I don't know the data of your book, but in my opinion it can't be any better. I hope you can take care of yourself, know your own strengths, and write what you should write.

When I read Chapter 52, the time traveler forgot to bring his IQ. The author did a good job of poisoning it, but luckily it wasn't put on the shelves.

The writing is good, but the water is real water

Author, I would like to kindly remind you: you must arrest people at the beginning. Don't roll out some branch lines in such a hurry now. The key is to let the protagonist use the golden finger to gain benefits as early as possible. Relationships and other things can be expanded after the first profit. This is what the so-called three golden chapters mean. I don't understand why your editor doesn't let you revise the manuscript. The beginning is too slow.

It's really better to continue writing another book

Emperor Ruyan is so terrifying😁😁😁