Arc Light Gleam

The Yin Ying version has a gunfire arc, but the writing style is new and the villain routine is also old. It feels like the author was writing in a hurry. Before the setting was even laid out, he started rushing around to change people and places, so that many setting terms had to be mentioned first and then explained. It looked like patching, but even in such a hurry, the pace was not fast, because large sections of words had to be cut to other people other than the protagonist/main line (otherwise the protagonist would not be able to support the world view just by rushing around), and the protagonist had a big picture but refused to say a few more words to explain what he knew and thought, and acted as the Riddler with the readers. The pacing is basically finished, let alone the concept and character and other content that needs further reading to be judged. I can only sigh. Sometimes it's no wonder that readers ask for the golden three chapters. It really shows the author's skill to write them well Then the real heroine dies at the beginning and does not seem to be resurrected later. The new heroine is still the real heroine's fangirl (not even a friend, just a single-arrow fangirl). It is really confusing. After all, there is nothing lovable about this character.

What is written about the systems of various countries, how their fleets are formed, how they operate, how they fight, how their styles are different, and how their weapons and equipment are different, are very superficial and lack depth. After reading dozens of chapters, everything is written in a very vague and slow pace. Arc machines, battleships, MS, power armor, the appearance, data, model of these weapons, which generation of equipment the empire is, and which research laboratory or military industrial enterprise produced these small details. I don't know. The readers are annoyed, there is no in-depth description, they are all mentioned in one stroke. Daily life is even more boring. The writing is the same as that of an imperial country during World War II, without the flavor of space civilization.

The author's writing of the war scenes is smooth and feels a bit like watching the old guy from Shenwu 66. Come on, the author writes well.

Very nice, finished🙂

The writing is good, the plot is good, and it also has an independent background, which is very rare. However, I personally don't like this kind of plot about the dead wife. I would like to remind some friends who don't like this kind of plot.

So why is this book classified as science fiction? Is it science fiction if it is covered in the interstellar era?

Pure love harem is also pure love, I even like pure love tentacles

Fake corpse🥵

As described earlier, he was so angry when his fiancée was killed that he even severed ties with his family. He also said that he could not take revenge on the mastermind in his previous life. As a result, he has been in power in this life. The fiancée will be forgotten, and there will be no revenge. He even sat aside and tried to clear his name for the family. I also mentioned earlier how awesome my family is, running rampant in the aristocratic circle and no one cares about it. Later it was said that the family had long been in decline. Reduced to a third-rate family. What a double standard. Even if I plan to leave the company, I still have to give my eldest brother a company that has a monopoly on energy. Now the entire Iraqi oil region has been given to the family. You are awesome, your fiancée's coffin can hardly hold it down, and Lu Shuai will not spare any effort to support you. You actually use it as an industrial passer-by. Chou doesn't hug either. The three views are incorrect.

The writing has the feel of a movie, and it outlines the image of a cosmic character in just a few words. I feel that it would be better if the outline does not collapse and a little more description of the world view is added, such as bridge decoration, spaceship style and other details.

Just say I'm not a republican. I've always been an Imperial fan when it comes to StarCraft.

Otherwise, you should write a protagonist who is transformed into a Primarch by arc light or a machine ascends into an AI and becomes the Philosopher King. It has basically been all kinds of compromises since the Queen succeeded to the throne. The so-called revolution, the destruction of the empire is not seen at all, not even the purge of the nobles who killed their fiancées. What do you want to do? You might as well have a sailor uprising in Kiel and the Weimar Republic comes to power. Anyway, the prototype is Germany II.

This subject matter is still too niche. Although the writing is good, not many people read it.

It's very much like Eun-young's space opera, and the protagonist is also right for you. Come on, author! I hope you can write well later too.

Damn, I just ordered the latest one and the limit is waived.

Is the protagonist Lynch or Albert? Why is the male protagonist missing when writing a group portrait?

Some of the author's settings are really forcible. A victorious country can be infiltrated into a sieve by the intelligence organization of a defeated country. The senior generals of the empire are all mentally retarded and do not understand the importance of intelligence. An interstellar fortress can be poisoned by hundreds of thousands of people, and there are no countermeasures? ? ? Are the top officials of the empire being assassinated at every turn? ? ? Can marshals and princesses be assassinated? ? ? Why don't you marry the emperor directly? Such an empire can last for ten years. Author, are you cheating on the empire? An empire that lasted for hundreds of years, just because it won the kingdom, and then the nobles collectively fell into depravity for more than ten years, drunkenly and dreamily, and their fighting ability was low, so what did they do in the previous hundreds of years? ? ? Directly giving a group a halo of wisdom? ? ? Then what kind of federation produces one fleet a year, and ten fleets in ten years? Then they will just explode and rule the universe? ? ?

Fast forward to when the hero and his ex-girlfriend meet! I want to see Shura Field!

Good looking, love to watch more

Damn it, the coffin was revealed 🙂