Tokyo: I Found a Rich Heiress After Work

The author fantasizes about having a relationship with a 19-year-old high school girl, and also imagines his big belly as abdominal muscles. It is really BT.

Maybe it's because I wrote Se Se, and the heroine came here and asked the hero to help rub her belly and review me#&￥*+

Just manage the heroine well as a single heroine, don't think about using a female supporting character to supplement the word count. Otherwise, it might as well have more female protagonists.

If the female protagonist can choose the male protagonist in this way, one day she will be good again, and Huang Mao will be able to take over. This kind of encounter cannot be pure love😁

The writing style and narrative rhythm are okay, and the simple uncle and jk characters are also good However, the career position of the male protagonist is really embarrassing. Because he can see emotions, it is indeed good to engage in psychological counseling, but the author needs to polish the performance of the male protagonist. Psychological counseling must first establish a relationship, or establish a certain trust relationship. This process takes time. In the first few chapters, the heroine ran away from home and was picked up by the hero. The next morning, the hero asked her family how they were doing. The male protagonist already knows that the female protagonist ran away from home due to family problems, and he pokes her wounds when the female protagonist is in a very low mood not long after they have known each other? After the question, the female protagonist's mood dropped and the male protagonist was still thinking about whether he had said the wrong thing. This was a bit outrageous and gave people the feeling that the male protagonist only relied on emotional value and was not very professional. Because of the male protagonist's career, the subsequent love issues between the male and female protagonists are also very awkward. Although the male and female protagonists do not have a clear relationship between the client and the counselor, the male protagonist through his emotional value and professional ability? The act of helping the heroine is valid. If the male protagonist is not a counselor, there is no problem in falling in love, but the male protagonist is a counselor. Therefore, the empathy of the heroine and the hero must be considered. This relationship is not equitable in nature. Although the author writes that the male and female protagonists care about each other, it feels like it is not enough. But this is the case when reading novels. The reader only needs to point fingers, while the author has many things to consider. After all, the style and positioning of the novel are determined by the author. If you adjust it, it may not be in line with the author's ideas

When I first wrote Chapter 20, the setting was in China, but the data was really bleak. After communicating with the editor, I made minor revisions to the first 20 chapters and made the background and characters neon. So there are some places that may be a little abrupt, but it will not affect the plot. You can give us your suggestions for revision. The author lives at home and has never been to Neon. I know many places from anime and Nigaru. (I have been crazily trying to make up for my sunburn lately, please forgive me)

Does the heroine look like this?

I thought I picked up Tomie after get off work.

In the last two I wrote, the male protagonist came to school, but failed to protect anything.

The heroine's father escaped legal punishment after driving drunk and killing someone. Is it a problem for the stepmother to kill her husband to avenge her ex-husband? ? ?