I Became a God in Another World

After a rough review, it is very unreasonable to reset all the deaths in the later stage. Whether it is reality or the game, others can form a group to kill you later. The protagonist can not die at one time, but what about the others? Once death returns directly to the whiteboard, there is no telling how many beasts can die in one wave in the game. In reality, the defense force will also be directly reduced, making it even more difficult to prevent. Not everyone is the protagonist, and it is impossible not to die at once. It is okay in the early stage, but it will be pure waste in the later stage. If you die once, you will basically have no chance. The simplest patch is to add a concept of job transfer (similar). After death, the words will no longer be reset (or the entries will be actively reduced) and the experience penalty will be increased. The more you write, the bigger the pit will be.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

I feel that some parts are not fully explained. The official reward for saving people has never been mentioned, and the direct version update has skipped it.

I feel that this book does not reflect how the entries are different from the general game world. I have seen several entries on cultivating immortals or games before that focus on the entry point.

Overall, it looks okay. There are no awkward emotional lines at the moment.

For those of you who are reading this, please be sure to read the latest chapter! If you haven't read it, you won't recommend it at all. This is the key to the book's survival! At the same time, create a post with a combination of entries. There is no limit to the style or effect. If you have any ideas, you can write them down.

It's a bit bland, and the protagonist is also very mediocre. There aren't many mentally retarded operations, but there's no outstanding performance either. If you're not a book reader, you can watch it.

The content is relatively smooth, and there are some minor flaws in another style of online game writing, but I personally feel that Liancao has a lot of typos. The author can correct it if readers point it out.

Finished reading, looking for something similar

Is there no book in Qidian? Recommend this book that has been suspended for 6 months.