Hong Kong Comprehensive: Starting with a Baby

It was pretty good in the beginning, but after arriving in Thailand, it became a fantasy. Although there are Taoist priests in Hong Kong ghost movies, once the realm of cultivation is clarified and the female ghost teaches the skills, it becomes full of fantasy. At the same time, wherever the protagonist goes, he encounters the plot of a horror movie. It is like being forced to participate in a mission by other forces, lacking subjective initiative. It might be better if the hook can be combined with the plot of the horror movie, for example, to recharge the ghost coins that need to participate in the horror movie to help important characters get their thanks. This may be better. Let the protagonist chase the story and let the story promote the protagonist's growth. Don't always write about the plane crash where the protagonist is forcibly pulled into the story without knowing anything. Once or twice is fine. Writing this continuously is like killing people and seizing treasures without taking stock of the treasures after the war. It would be better to lose more than half of it.

The protagonist encounters more ghosts than ghosts. . .

We found some novels among a large number of memes

Around chapter 50, after watching The Demon Slaughterhouse, I felt that the plot was too conflicting. The plot of The Demon Slaughterhouse was a little off, but I can still take a look at it, but I felt that there was something missing in the plot, and it was not as good as what was written before. Of course, this is my personal understanding, and this book can be read at the moment.

Are you writing a novel or a story show? It's messy. You can fix the settings better.

The protagonist is quite suitable for the "Four Turns of the God of Death" 🙂 Everything in the world is reincarnated, Only entering the Six Paths of the God of Death. With one turn, you can wear clothes for nine days; with the second turn, you can eat the heavenly storehouse with a bowl in your belly; with the third turn, you can live in Jinhua in a big cave; with the fourth turn, you can ascend to Kunlun without being destroyed.

It feels a bit confusing, but the author still wants to figure out the subsequent plot, which seems too out of the ordinary.

I haven't read the script, but I understand every plot point. I have it in my life.

Just follow the script and I will definitely pursue it.

If you like some jokes and a relatively crazy protagonist, this novel is okay. It has about fifty chapters so far. I personally like it very much. After reading chapter fifty, I always feel that something is missing.

I think I can make a lot of money by writing a two-dimensional novel as a side story. It's rare to find a fan with the elements of Qitan Monogatari.

Ah, just chapter 188? It's well written. At least 500 chapters are suitable. Short stories are not popular at the starting point.

Interesting, strangely creative, worth a look

It looks good. Even a person who is afraid of ghosts thinks it looks good.

Why do you keep saying hi? ? ? Very dramatic

Gua, Lao Da won the resurrection match! So exciting! ! !

I'm sorry you didn't make me happy. How can I buy a car without more? How to buy a house? Update it quickly!

Man! ! !

What about the sweet two-dimensional life of Jin Mambo and Little Penguin😡

It is possible to time-travel to Jigong in Hong Kong movies, such as the Dragon Subduing Arhat and descend to the mortal world, and to have a big fusion, such as the Eight Immortals, A Chinese Ghost Story, and many ghost movies can be integrated into it.

Renew! His grandma's, give me an update!

Just grasp what attracts me and do Zhutian Comprehensive Flow.

For example, on the road ahead, you can cultivate to a certain state and condense your ghost heart, and choose the direction of your own life and destiny in the future. If your ghost heart is not destroyed, you can always be resurrected. The role of the ghost heart is to convert other substances into nutrients. For example, incense is poisonous, but it can absorb and condense the distracting thoughts of all living beings to grow into nails or other parts of the body. All cultivation secrets are a trap and turn you into something for others.

I finished reading tmd in one night, not enough

It's so beautiful, how come it's over after just raising it?

It's very well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

Ah, this is the end of the book. Although I had a premonition, I didn't expect it to be so soon. I haven't read enough.

It's too much, it's over 😐

The boss recommends that you read Simultaneous Time Travel, I Dominated All Heavens and Worlds, it's very well written.