Is My Pet Sandbox a Secret Realm from Another World?

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The subject matter is good, but it is very messy, the reality is unrealistic, there are no boxes, the world of immortality is not the world of immortality, it is a mess, and the plot often jumps directly without warning. It has a full sense of fragmentation, and there is no strong character at all. All plots only have one part, and then jump directly. The fragmented plot of the key part feels good.

Let the protagonist develop a few hundred pictures first, okay? You revived the spiritual energy so early and made the protagonist look like a clown. Many cases. The key is that you didn't say at the beginning that this was a world with supernatural powers. If you mention it later, it will be an act of deceiving readers. The previous one wrote about lizards. Obviously you can develop your own lizard kingdom on your own. We must achieve world integration in the mid-term. Spiritual energy revived. As a result, no one read the 6,000 subscriptions. I wrote hundreds of thousands of words, but in the end I couldn't write anymore. And as I said before, there are also successful cases, such as raising all human beings. He hasn't recovered his spiritual energy yet. Let's use an analogy. But the protagonist behind him has already developed. It's a crushing game. That's cool.

Stop writing about reality. Your writing skills are embarrassing when you write about reality. And can you write something about the world of cultivation? I'm confused by not mentioning the world of cultivation. I'm even more confused by the fact that the main character is somehow divine. Please write about the world of cultivation, and don't always treat that silly reality when writing about Hakoden.

If the scorpion poison is enough, it can poison people. The villain in the sand table cannot be filled with a sting. The foundation-building elixir must die or the protagonist's combat power will collapse. The foundation-building can kill the scorpion, the Nascent Soul can kill the mouse, the tribulation can kill neutral animals, and the protagonist can be killed on the top.

You can't use your brain. The setting of this book really cannot be studied in detail. After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't even understand how big the box and the little man were. At first, they were said to be as big as ants. You have to use a sword to cut the spider webs, and later you can wear a Lego hat. If a villain is as big as a Lego minifigure, a scorpion and centipede is at most a bigger beast to them, and a breeding box is at most the size of a manor to them. I really feel that logic is being raped all the time.

At present, the protagonist's sandbox is actually completely manually placed by the protagonist, and the main force of placement is consumers. In recent chapters, the protagonist is not satisfied with placing primary consumers, but has begun to place secondary or even tertiary consumers. The fact that the sandbox did not collapse is entirely due to the author's nonsense My suggestion is to reduce the investment in consumers and invest more in producers such as grass, vines and trees And the author has not placed decomposers, which is a very big logical flaw , for example, the electric eel electrocuted a lot of shrimps, but the electric eel must not be able to eat them all, so how to deal with the remaining corpses In summary, my suggestion is to invest more in producers, at least add two or more decomposers, and it is best to add a lighting mechanism, so that there is a cycle of life and death and the rotation of the sun and the moon. In an instant, it is out of the awkward situation of being completely manually input by the protagonist. It is semi-automatic and a small system is built, which can also be adjusted slowly later.

The first one is that the secret realm starts too frequently, not from the protagonist's side, but from the monk's side. The injury from last time in the secret realm has not healed yet and I have to come here again this time. I have never seen such a brainless person. Increase the speed of time and change the time when the secret realm of the monk world begins to ten years or a hundred years.

This idea has actually been around for a long time, but the author's writing is good, and the protagonist's portrayal is okay, but the monks' portrayal is very average, there are a lot of people, and there are no characters that people can remember at all.

It feels like the author is getting more and more biased as he writes. You can either speed up the transition of the plot in the small world and guide the protagonist to master the power faster, guide the revival of spiritual energy in the real world to expand the influence of Tiantian, influence reality, and pretend to be awesome, so that others can watch it. Then go to the world of cultivation through the cave, or guide the world of cultivation to enter the war between the cave and the sky faster.

Short, this book will be hopeless if it writes about reality.

The protagonist, the main world can be written less, I want to see it. There is also a secret realm in the world of the Immortal Cultivator.

A glance at a thimble indicates good. The current level is high, much better than other sandbox novels. The protagonist is extraordinary and not obtrusive, nor does he deliberately pretend to be anything, and the descriptions in the sandbox are also quite good. ———— However, there are also problems, such as some descriptions that are obviously confusing. At the same time, the main enemy lacks new ideas. 🙂 It is recommended to look for the Flora of China or the flora of other countries. The fauna is also good, you can refer to it.

Nowadays, the number of words is getting less and less, and it has already crossed the bottom line. Although it is updated every day, the number of words is worrying. I feel that this book has entered the countdown of life.

You can hit scorpions by practicing Qi, and you can hit people by Yuanying, right?

Ant Posts (Ant Enthusiasts) (Supplement settings, provide materials) Let's talk about the types of ants that are cheap and easy to buy on the market. Harvester ants, ferocious ants, and cartilage ants Leaf-cutting ant subfamily Harvest ant genus Ant colony structure: Single queen system, worker ant differentiation (large worker, medium worker, small worker) Artisan harvester ant (Messor structor) Combat method: Group battle Attack method: Jaw bite Mainly distributed in Xinjiang, China, and also widely distributed in Central Asia, West Asia and Ukraine. Soil-dwelling small ants prefer a dry and cool living environment The big workers are soldier ants. The worker ants are medium-sized and medium-sized. Their staple food is seeds. Small insects The development speed of artisan harvester ants in the early stage can far exceed that of needle-haired harvester ants and barbaric harvester ants. They have many characteristics such as being resistant to construction, not picky about eating, and differentiated, but they can fight against the five scum. (artisans raised by me) Native harvester ants (also known as barbaric harvester ants) (Messor barbar) Combat method: Group combat Attack method: Jaw biting Native harvester ants are widely distributed in southern Europe and northern Africa. Their distribution range includes Algeria, Bulgaria, Egypt, France, Portugal, Romania, Spain and more than ten countries. They are a European ant species Queen ants are 13mm and worker ants are also 4~12mm. The body shape is obviously thicker than that of Artisan. It mainly eats seeds and small insects. Weak combat ability Harpegnathos venator Harpegnathos venator Ant colony structure: Common multiple queens Combat method: Fight alone Combat method: Jaws and stings Skills: Jumping Vision China is distributed in Fujian, Guangdong, Hainan, Hong Kong, Macau, Guangxi Worker ants are 15~18mm, and queens are similar to worker ants Mainly hunts small arthropod insects Strong fighting ability (My hunting sickle) Red-footed ants (Pseudoneoponera rufipes) Combat method: Fight alone Combat method: Jaws and stingers Skills: Spray foam Ant colony structure: single or sexual worker ant reproduction Mainly distributed in tropical and subtropical areas such as Fujian, Guangdong, Hainan, Yunnan, Guizhou and other areas Worker ants, 13-15 mm in length, mainly hunt small insects and sugar water Strong combat effectiveness Camponotus ants Red-headed Camponotus ant (Camponotus singularis) Ant colony structure: Single queen production, worker ant differentiation Combat method: Group combat Attack method: Jaw bite Skills: Formic acid Domestic distribution in Yunnan The body length of worker ants is about 8.6Mm-22mm, and the body length of the queen is about 22mm. The largest Camponotus ant in China Usually small worker ants go out to forage, mainly feeding on honeydew and small insect corpses Strong fighting ability My red-headed Camponotus Narrow-necked Camponotus ants (also known as Camponotus sinensis) (suspected) (Camponotus angusticollis) Ant colony structure: Single queen, worker ants differentiate Combat method: Group combat Attack method: Jaw biting Skill: Formic acid Distributed in the border area of Yunnan and Myanmar Medium and small worker ants are 8.4-11.6Mm in length and the queen is about 22mm in length. The second largest ant in the country, the Camponotus ant, feeds on small insects and sugar water It has strong combat power Additions are welcome (I hope the author will not write about big-headed ants and leave them there)

It came out sot for no reason. I thought it was similar to Lilliput. The protagonist is the source of all laws. It doesn't seem to be the case. It may be that golden eggs appear in the world during foundation building, and Yuanying appears in the protagonist's golden egg world. That's what it means.

It's a little confusing, but the supporting character actually has a brain! Especially the part about the concert explosion and the management part were not very well written. There are so many names of cult members that it's hard to remember them.

This sandbox writing method is unique and very marketable!

It is said that there are always little things like mites in the soil. These tiny things are unavoidable. How come there are no such things in the work.

If you keep it, you will become a eunuch 😐

It would be unjust to not set the Ark as an immortal weapon and not to set the Crocodile to be at least a god.