Pirate: This Navy Is so Despicable!

I really don't like to see fans who are marines. What is the navy in One Piece? They are funny characters. They think they are really just. They protect the Celestial Dragons who massacre a country's army every three years. They really think they are just.

The sea does not need love The original One Piece novels are all about men's romance The romantic part of One Piece fans always feels boring I really don't want a female protagonist If I'm not careful, there will be poisonous points I hope this time it can be as comfortable as the previous Naruto. A reading experience that does not contain poisonous points at all makes me feel happy (the pinnacle)

The more I write, the worse it gets, and now it's reduced to the point where you can tell the plot of this chapter just by looking at the title.

The abilities are too complicated. It's not interesting to see that you are now invincible. Moreover, the author still lacks some knowledge about pirates. Many knowledge points are wrong. For example, ability users are not afraid of water, but because there is a sea tower stone factor in the sea water, so they are afraid. There are many more, such as the battle on the top. It was destroyed because Whitebeard covered the retreat of others, so the headquarters was destroyed. If you want to reverse the prophecy, you should stop Whitebeard, not Blackbeard... Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. Your Konoha Death King is very good, I have read it before, but this book is a bit unrefined. Come on, look forward to the new book

The beginning was good, but it started to get worse after entering the Navy Headquarters, and then the main character beats Norima, and the Shichibukai later, the writing is not as good as before. I originally thought he was a bastard who fights against the world, but I didn't expect him to be a little loser.

The book is good, but the main character is a bit arrogant. Bragging in front of Capone about how awesome he will be in the future is a bit demoralizing.

Can you speed up the progress? It's still a small fuss now, and readers are almost finished 😒

Is it possible that there are conchs in the sea as a factor, so we are afraid of the sea? Freshwater people don't drink it, right? Change the settings, right?

Don't write in a flashy way. It feels like you start high and go low in every book, and then let yourself go in the middle.

Although he is a branch colonel, he is still equivalent to the status of a small king in the world.

I have read two books by the author, one in White Town and one in Despicable Navy. Both of them were very attractive in the early stages, but in the end, the abilities were too many and too complex, and suddenly I became invincible, and I lost all desire to see the end.

The protagonist's current strength is too weak. It doesn't even look like One Piece. Instead, it looks like an ordinary person from Blue Star.

Why draw the more expensive Shinigami without drawing the high-end character of Naruto? ? In Hokage, high-end characters such as Hashirama, Ban, Naruto, Sasuke, Toneri, Obito, Nagato, the Omatsutsu clan, etc. Are all qualitative changes, right? ? ? ? ?

The writing is good, but the comment section is really too small. At first, I chose the book based on the number of comments, and thought this book was average.

I feel like I've written more than 50 pieces, but the progress is just a little bit.

Author, I really like your description, but when will you be able to publish another Marvel book?🙏❤️

After reading this book, I can only say that I am very happy. The whole text is not watery, and the middle and later stages are definitely not sluggish. It is just that the early stage is more sloppy, so I wrote more chapters. In the middle stage, I was accepted by Garp as a disciple and officially took off. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist Goldfinger did not handle it well in the later period. For example, there is an extra eight tails for no reason (in the previous book, only one and three tails were drawn. I don't know where these eight tails came from). When you can draw the Hokage prize pool, you don't draw much but draw the more expensive Shinigami (it's not that the Shinigami is not good, it's just that the Shinigami is too expensive. It's more cost-effective to draw Naruto. If you come up with a six-level template, it will directly explode the star). There is also a poisonous point: drawing There is an issue with the prize probability (the first 100 will draw a red, the 150 will draw a red, and the later 1000 will draw a red, and the later 5000 will draw a red, and the later the single draw becomes more expensive, the protagonist is too different, and the author's leveling is too obvious). The white cards with the same effect in the front can be upgraded after fusion to improve the effect. As a result, the second prize pool of this setting was abolished by the author (1000 draws a red card, nothing, not even a white card, a blue card. Can you believe it?)

That bad colonel is still alive

It's okay, but the description of the deputy warden who wants to usurp the throne in Impel Down City is too much. It's too much to turn someone who is obviously a responsible person into a dog by the author.

The writing is good, I look forward to it. It would be better if there is a full-time hunter or something like that, a gourmet hunter is also good, or a little boss or something like that, jojo is also good.

If you can transform into the King of Ghosts, can you use blood to transform ghosts? Although the transformed ghosts have the weakness of sunlight, they are immortal after all, right? If the Tianlong people are tempted, maybe Wulaodeng will be tempted too!

I have finished another book by the author

If I hadn't read the old book and updated it, I wouldn't have known you had opened a new one.

Full order

The abilities are so messy, it's a bit disturbing later on.

Doesn't the author create a group or something?

Finished spreading flowers! Remember to let me know when Lao Wu Mian will release a new book.

I hope I can write a pirate fanfic that makes up for my regrets. I don't want the tragic bear. I don't want the donut Ace who died tragically. And I don't want the navy. Too many navy loses. They are all called One Piece and there are still a lot of articles about the navy.

I hope there will be another suicidal book. I really like it.