Mountain God: Become Invincible by Adding Crazy Points

. . . Your system is too comprehensive, add points, lords, magical powers, exchange. The most critical thing about intelligence is that it can be upgraded. This makes it easy for the protagonist to be just a tool. If you still can't be invincible in a few years, you can only say that it's cool, everything is going too smoothly. So it's a bit boring to watch.

Qi-entraining realm, Houtian realm, Xiantian realm, Shenzang realm, Zifu realm, Yuanshen realm, Dongxu realm, Tribulation-crossing realm, Dao-cutting realm, Supreme realm, Hunyuan realm, Supreme realm.

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the writing is too wordy. I personally feel that it should be more concise. How can people continue to read after you are so wordy at the beginning?

Luck plundering is nonsense, haven't you heard a sentence, worshiping Buddha is useful, poor people can't even enter the temple, luck can plunder, the strong plunder the weak, the strong will always be the same

Heaven and earth are unkind and regard all things as suckers. To God, whether they are humans or ghosts, they are all the same. Just like ghosts want to eat humans and humans want to eat livestock. What is good and evil? So if the protagonist's mountain god status is given by God, then if he has experience in helping human beings and eradicating evil ghosts, it would be speechless, unless the protagonist's mountain god status is canonized by heaven? While you talk about the Golden Finger as being lofty, but at the same time you want to be a nanny for the human race, then I very much doubt that your Golden Finger was only given to the protagonist by the human race's great master in order to reduce the burden and protect the human race.

You have already passed through the calamity realm, how can you surprise the protagonist by turning a stone into ashes? This is your power system. . . . .

I read a few of them, and it's really verbose. I keep talking about one thing over and over again, and I don't even know it. The content is normal, but the way you write it really makes me feel a little uncomfortable.

No one, is there something wrong with this book? Don't dare to look at it

Kill the way? Condensation elixir? Does the author know what Zandao means? Why build a pill? Crushing a small hill is quite awesome. It's not even as good as the foundation building period in normal immortal cultivation novels...

The content is too lengthy, conflict handling is problematic, and it's a bit too tacky.

The title of the first chapter is called Trouble, and I instantly lost the desire to read on.

It's okay, it has a bit of a Zhulong flavor, but it's still a bit immature.

Che Zhulun's words went back and forth, and the more he read, the more tired he became.

The novel seems nonsensical at the beginning. The final evolution of the tiger is the white tiger, the four mythical beasts. You made it into the Mandrill series.

There are 12 realms. In the ninth realm, the protagonist actually finds someone from the fourth realm to be a protector. This is equivalent to someone who is in the distraction period looking for foundation building or someone who is in the Qi refining period to be a protector. Isn't it good to be a mountain climber in the mountains? Inexplicably, two low-level people were found to be guardians.

Extremely poisonous, Shennong is dead

I have been reading it before, and then I wanted to give it a try before reading it. Unfortunately, I lost interest in reading it again. The rest of it was just about doing errands, water, and the character descriptions were erratic. No wonder more than a hundred chapters were not released and were withdrawn.