Broken, Picked up by the Femme Fatale

The author can do some edging, but the dialogue's earthy accent will deduct big points.

Sir, you are so courageous. I wish you can become a god in the future 🙂

Forget it if you use dialect, it doesn't affect my reading anyway. A considerable part of the chapter consists of repeated self-questions and answers, which I couldn't stand. But I can't bear it when you say in Chapter 106 that the Japanese devils did more disgusting things than the bandits. Not to mention whether the bandits assisted the regular army in resisting Japan during World War II, are the human experiments conducted by the Japanese 731 and other Sima units something that the bandits can do? It's okay to step on bandits, you can step on them as you like, I hate it too, but to say that Japanese devils are not as disgusting as bandits is somewhat unfair. As for the plot of Er Niangniang in recent chapters, you might as well write that she doesn't know about the eldest Niangniang's mother, and then write about how to save her. It's a bit abstract to write that she knows but because she is the emperor's daughter, she is afraid that if she resists, she will lose the emperor's trust. It also seems too unappetizing Haha, it turns out that this comment has been blocked. Haha, this book has been sent. It seems, it seems.

Aunt Qiaoer She should be about the same figure

The first one is very interesting because it is written with the plot centered around color. But ever since Yanxiang Hui became Hui Yiba, it didn't look good, because you started to only write about the plot and not about Se Se. Your success is not because of how well you write the plot, but because of how well you write Sese. Why can't you distinguish the priorities?

After reading Chapter 14, I can now confirm that the protagonist is 100% a natural idiot. Sanniangniang didn't even get angry when she asked the protagonist to block evil spirits. You are actually sulking because you only care about not being allowed to touch Sanniang Niang's snake tail... You are really crazy. It's like a bad woman wants your waist, and you actually feel angry that you can't touch her body... Sanniang Niang's personal background is indeed very tragic, but she did not confess to the protagonist, why is the protagonist so careless about Sanniang Niang.

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If you are the protagonist, the small head controls the big head

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Why didn't the author reveal his previous vest? Why doesn't the author open a group? Why doesn't the author recommend his previous book? Why do so many authors make false recommendations and follow up? Why are people afraid of spending money and running out of books? Thought it was a large scale? No no no! Every old bookworm knows it This author must have a history of being a eunuch And he has been a eunuch many times The so-called emphasis on books with good grades will either sell the copyright or use AI I can only say that I deserve it

It looks okay, and the writing is very good and astringent, but it is best to control the voice of the child, and the protagonist calls himself a little less. To be honest, this book gave me a sense of the times and a sense of wonder that I had read in the early 2000s, but unfortunately it was not born at the right time. The development of online literature is really great now, but it is also quite interesting. As far as my personal evaluation is concerned, if the word count and quality can be guaranteed, it's no problem to keep 1st and 2nd.

It is not recommended to add local dialects in novels, especially in fictional worlds. Many readers cannot understand it and actively screen the crowd. The ones that are not accepted are far more than the ones that are accepted. If you don't add labels, you will be scolded.

Brothers, this is the brain storage place. Everyone is welcome to store your brain here.

No, those harems of yours are just decorations or something. They were cheated by the protagonist so quickly that they were comparable to Tianzun. The result is that it feels no different from when I was still Tianshi.

It's a bit strange that there is so little meat in the mines. Mining is a physical job. If you don't eat well, you won't be able to do it.

A femme and scorpion woman named Qiao'er highlights a sense of contrast? What about Kim Mee-jung, Lee Ho-mi, and Gao Ming-na? Their names don't have any ancient flavor at all, but are obviously modern. I don't know, but I thought they were traveling to Korea. 🤫🤫

Let's put it this way, it's very interesting, but the language is really unacceptable. It's fine for occasional use. Byd Zan Zang makes me uncomfortable, but I'm wondering if it's the setting or the author's speaking habits.

Um, don't be too smart, just read it as pornographic text.

It feels like watching "Please, Marrying a White Snake Wife is Super Cool"

This author is double-editing, and I saw Aunt Hao's article with exactly the same style 🙂🙂

When to eat meat?

Why does the style change drastically after chapter 150? It feels like it was either written by AI or someone else. There is a dog in the front and it is a little girl, and then it changes directly into a little boy?

What other books has this author written? Can anyone tell me 😭

The character of the protagonist is too shabby, he has no spirit at all, and he is still "we, we, we". It is really a drama. It is better to write that the protagonist Chengfu has the ability to conceal his own psychology and deceive himself to adjust his liking for the heroine. When he has the ability to kill them, he will give up the abuse or just cramp and peel the skin 😏

Haha, the author's language description is really interesting. I'll follow it.

The first few chapters look a bit like "White Deer Plain" 😓, the version starring Duan Yihong and Zhang Yuqi

It's a bit ridiculous. You used to flatter a eunuch, but now you have a special force with a few hundred people and you dare to talk to the 300,000 soldiers of the border army. 😅😅 Are personal armed forces comparable to government units?

This is a double book by the author. It is pure rumor to say that it is sealed.

Chapter nine persuades him to quit, the male protagonist is stupid enough

Just open a VIP group. Author, so many chapters have been reviewed. It feels so uncomfortable to watch.