The Villain's Follower Who Travels Through the Book Is Targeted by the Heroine at the Beginning

Poor content, bad ending, disgusting

Most people really can't stand this type of article where the protagonist's voice is heard.

The heroine can hear your thoughts. This is boring. It's just a quick copy.

The author may have misunderstood the word immortal. He is already in the immortal realm, but he can't beat others in the lower world.

This stupid young master is really nice, and I can't bear to see the protagonist cheating on him 🤭

The poisonous points in this book are: the God-Emperor, the highest state of the indigenous people in this book (his combat power can move mountains and seas), Chapter 26 of Pig's Feet: Flesh (prehistoric earth immortal) and Yuan Shen (prehistoric human immortal). I am also afraid of a small bass in the early stage. I am in a situation where I can't beat him but I can run a little.

I started to hear, see, hear and talk about my inner voice and I couldn't stand it any longer. Personal opinion

The system can be known, so the author might as well write the narration so that the heroine can listen.

I'm speechless. There are so many typos in this book. It doesn't matter if it's too many. I paid money to read it. It's so fucking bad. I'm really convinced 😅🙏🙏

. . . The system is the system, the voice is the voice, if they have to be mixed together, the plot is boring😑

Don't look at it, TMD is mind-reading again

The introduction to this book is full of typos, can you correct it...

Good guy, when I saw the chapter about the martial arts competition in the ring, I just couldn't stand it. In the prehistoric times, the second level of the Nine Revolutions Xuan Gong was at least an earthly and heavenly immortal, right? As a result, facing Long Tian, ​​the protagonist of this small world who is still only in the realm of martial arts, he actually wants to take action with all his strength? Author, didn't you say at the beginning that the strongest people in this world are just ants compared to the ancient times? It is also said that the God-Emperor can only move mountains and seas to pick up the stars and the moon. You must know that according to the settings of the prehistoric times, even the settings of most fairy tales and fantasy novels do not use immortals. Monks who have not become immortals, such as the Mahayana, can do this. In other words, this world is equivalent to the spiritual world of most immortal novels in terms of power level, and the strongest person is still far away from the immortal. As a result, you have to fight a martial artist with all your strength? So speechless

The male protagonist is also a real villain, don't look at him🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈

What a rubbish Nine-turn Mysterious Technique. She is so human-like that she is so charming that she is charmed by the physique of a woman who is still so far away from being an immortal. . .

The writing is quite delicate. Compared to other time-travel novels of the same genre, Mind Reading feels like the most emotionally delicate one I have read. At least the writing does not make people feel awkward. The actions of all the supporting characters are consistent with common sense and do not make people feel that they are forced to like the protagonist. The main reason is that it is not awkward. I am not very interested in these things, but I still think it is really good so far. This kind of writing is logical and I feel that it is okay to read. Is it difficult to explain, but it is still readable.

There's more and more nonsense behind it

Pure CS, written by pure egoists, so disgusting

What's wrong with the young master? You want to write him to death. Isn't it disgusting?

After reading dozens of pictures, I don't know how I read them, and the author was forced to be enlightened.

Stop writing about fighting, just be a fan.

Nice header, but broken.

Author: Why is this such a good novel only 199 chapters long? It has 20,000 chapters. 😍😍

It's a bit unfinished, it's only 199 chapters. With this kind of subject matter, it's no problem to write six to seven hundred chapters, but it ended so hastily.