I Established Myself as an Immortal in the Mountains

I have read more than 80 chapters. The writing is indeed good, the writing style is acceptable, and the plot is not too poisonous. However, I still want to say, why is there no description of the specific details of Beiquan Mountain? It feels like a small bag of dirt to me. I can go up and down the mountain in just one thought, and I know there is a secret room in the front mountain and the back mountain. I still know it now. There is an extra spiritual spring, and there is no geographical location at all. There is no explanation of what is around this mountain. It is as if there is only this mountain. There are so many details that can be counted in words. The author just doesn't write it, and the readers are confused because the protagonist's strength is really average. Most of the sources are with the help of the power of the mountain. Why don't you write more details about this source of power? You watch mountains every day. What do you watch? Don't you understand the southeast, northwest, and northwest? I was scratching my head and scratching my head when I saw it.

I'm 15 years old, but I don't understand the introduction to this novel.

To be honest, the protagonist's setting should be of a management type, slowly transforming the world from point to point, and leading the world to upgrade. Those who are good at writing can challenge group portraits. What is shown so far is just an earthbound spirit. In the future, I guess the "resident" will continue to upgrade, and then at a certain moment it will be integrated with the world, and then it will go to the so-called upper world and continue to follow this process. In essence, it is no different from ordinary fantasy, except that the plug-in becomes an item. There is also the setting of this invincible flow. The pretense and slap in the face still remain in the villain NC who insists on looking for trouble, and then is beaten up by the protagonist. If I want to spice up the plot, I'll add someone who beats the young and then the old. Big brother, times have changed, and if you don't change this book, you will definitely fail Now it's about showing off invisibly, rather than relying on the villain to come to the door to cause trouble. Write more about the impact of something the protagonist does, instead of wasting time writing about how the protagonist upgrades. The routine is too old Of course I have to follow up with better settings. I think these two points I said are insignificant and just treat me as fart. To put it bluntly, this book was okay ten years ago. Nowadays, some people's writing skills are not good, but the settings are better than the previous ones.

Anyone who writes about princess at the beginning is a loser.

What the hell, the princess was kidnapped, she was imprisoned in the mountains, and then why did the emperor bring the child to find you? . . .

Author, why don't you explain what it means to become an immortal instantly?

I still had a question in the first chapter, why didn't the princess die after sleeping with her?

Has it always been Gu's routine of trying to be clean, and others dragging him into fights, coercing, luring and slandering him?🙂

The biggest problem with this book is that the system flow has attracted too many trolls. I don't feel like it when I read it. However, many of the chapter derivation is forced on. To be honest, it doesn't matter. But the biggest problem is that the protagonist almost never comes out. How does the plot come about? It can only be made up like this. If you can accept it, you can read it. If you can't accept it, maybe you really can't accept it. There is no way.

The eldest princess of the royal family is still a master, and she was kidnapped? Are you serious? Even if he is in a weak stage, why is there no one else in the royal family? All I can say about you is that you are quite abstract at the beginning.