The End of the World: Decompose Everything to Create a Safe House

Tell me what it feels like to see it now. Let's talk about the advantages first. I think most of the characters currently appearing are stand-up and flesh-and-blood. Not to say it's particularly awesome, at least it's not the kind of character with facial makeup. After reading it, I can still think of the personality traits of each character. In fact, I didn't expect this at the beginning, because the beginning seemed like the kind of mindless and emotional novel, and I almost persuaded me to quit. It wasn't until the heroine and other named supporting characters appeared later that my impression gradually improved. Including two female protagonists, a veteran policeman and a rookie policeman, as well as a car repairman wearing glasses, these people came to life in my case. In addition, I hope to add more emotional dramas for the female protagonists. As for the shortcomings, the first one is the writing style, especially the writing style at the beginning, which is really discouraging. The author can learn from the traditional fairy tales, which has a lot of feeling when choosing words and sentences. The second thing is that the focus of the plot has shifted a bit. You have to grasp the main selling points. For example, the plot of the transition outside is a little too long, which is not good. There's nothing wrong with reading it in one go, but it's torture to keep up with updates every day. Or if you update more, more than 10,000 words per day, then you can write whatever you want. You can finish the plot in two or three days, and everyone will enjoy it. The last suggestion is that in terms of relationships, the two heroines are currently very good, but I feel that there is no need to add others, otherwise the roles of the two heroines will definitely decrease, which is not good. As for the plot, I hope that the current safe house can be renovated to have ventilation, temperature adjustment, bathing, food production, and zombie protection. The more of these the better, so that the protagonist can be more comfortable and in sharp contrast with other people struggling to survive, so that it can feel like a safe house. Modify and add that you can continue to modify vehicles. After arriving on the mountain, there will be no vehicle modifications for a while.

The plot is a bit poorly written. When will I start to expand the base? I want to watch Jianjia. In the future, I can write less intrigue plots like this. Don't forget that I came here based on the title. This is the main line. If you need materials, dig out the tools provided by the system. Isn't this available? To be honest, I don't want to read it. You should put the construction of the base first and write as little as possible. Finally, the author can list the protagonist's level and the amount of materials. This can better reflect the things the protagonist masters. In fact, I hope that when the protagonist becomes stronger, he can provide help behind the scenes to those bases that have a good relationship with the protagonist. I mean after he becomes stronger. Finally, the main point of this book is that the protagonist does not work hard and hastily contacts other bases. The above are my personal suggestions and opinions

You said you were going home to see your parents, but the distance was only 400 kilometers away. Two hundred chapters have passed and you haven't gotten home yet?

The author's writing is okay, but it's too tedious. The location of the base has not been determined yet. Don't forget the main task. The reader's patience is limited. Does the protagonist only have space for materials? Can't he put other things? Finally, I would like to make some suggestions. 1. Do not unlock a few blueprints only after upgrading. Unlocking all the blueprints also improves the survivability of the protagonist a lot, so it will not overwhelm the protagonist. After all, unlocking blueprints does not give you physical blueprints. Different materials require different materials, and the quantity of materials is different. 2. I think zombies mutate too fast in just a few chapters. (Invisible Transformers) and half-zombie exist so quickly. In the end, the author can refer to other movies and TV series to see how the situation is gradually strengthened. Don't have zombies with super powers or humans who can do it alone. At most, there will be strengthening drugs. The strength of zombies or animal monsters can be referred to (Resident Evil series) (I Am Legend) (Metro 2033 series) and so on. Wait and see if the monster should be strengthened slowly. 3 The protagonist's equipment monitor can be turned into a portable radar reference (the lone gunman). Radar is an artifact. 4 Regarding the choice of the protagonist's base, it doesn't have to be in the mountains, but on the water? The cruise ship transformation is not a mobile base in the sky. Of course, this consumes a large amount of high-grade alloy materials. Of course, we must first build an underground hive base like (Resident Evil) to manufacture mining vehicles step by step. The above are my personal suggestions and opinions. I prefer to pick up garbage. Finally, I wish the author to write better and better books. This book now seems to be on the passing line.

So far, the plot is not very attractive to me. The zombies don't have any special characteristics, and the description of the battle between people is not bad, but to be honest, it is not something very new that can make people look forward to the plot. I personally like multiple female protagonists, so for me currently, the only thing that makes me happy is having multiple female protagonists, but as a novel, it can't be just one thing, right? Generally speaking, apart from Goldfinger, it is a story about ordinary people surviving in the zombie apocalypse, which is quite ordinary. The creation column of Goldfinger is refreshed on a daily basis, and there are only 3 items. Whatever is needed for the story will be refreshed. To be honest, this is less interesting, and it can't be said to be more enjoyable. There may be changes in the future. Maybe the plot is about suppressing first and then improving.

(Updated today) I know the transfer plot is too long. I won't sleep until I finish writing this paragraph today. Please don't criticize me. 😭😭😭 Maybe four chapters, maybe five chapters, anyway, I will definitely finish this plot! ! !

If you don't improve your abilities, you'll spend your days wandering around and playing the plot; you can obviously upgrade by killing zombies, but you just won't kill them, and you'll always be in intrigues with others.

Surprisingly, it was okay. I read the comments about a woman and thought it would be rubbish... Although there are some minor flaws in the writing, at least it's not a vase. Looking forward to the following story

Zombies want to bring mankind into the doomsday era. At the very least, the rules of the universe must change and the level of human science and technology regress to the feudal era. Otherwise, it is completely impossible to resist modern technology. Like the Yankee movie Rise of the Planet of the Apes which made me laugh to death. The safe house actually got a rental house on the fifth floor. If mutated zombies really come and tear down your stairs and the first floor, your safe house will be useless. It's okay to find an air-raid shelter, but in the end of the world, you won't be able to grab an air-raid shelter. It feels like it's better to find a cave and be more hidden, otherwise we won't be able to defend it. Actually, I want to see your safe house built. It's not that you're out fighting zombies, you're not very strong, and you're still wandering around like crazy.

It is not recommended to write zombie apocalyptic novels with a domestic background. Because of the three-year epidemic, anyone who reads the novel will not have a sense of immersion. Dead end

I have read three or four books on decomposition materials, and they were all broken I hope this one will give full play to this theme In fact, this is not difficult to write. As long as you have enough physical strength, it is best to make the things that have appeared before repeated in the later stage. For example, weapons cannot always wait for refreshes.

Moving Fortress

You can't write this without adding a girl to the beginning, right?

Many readers have asked me why I didn't set up a temporary safe house during the transfer process. In fact, it's because the timeline of the transfer from the city to the mountain only lasted three days. However, the plot was compact and took a long time to write. It would be a bit strange to set up a temporary safe house when moving at any time. (PS: In fact, I set up the vehicle as a kind of mobile safe house, and made corresponding modifications every day, but it seems that it is not obvious in writing, sorry.)

Okay, okay, a very good post-apocalyptic zombie story, very flavorful

I'll wait and see when all the drawings will be explained, or you can design your own drawings and save them. I don't know if the system will open this function, how much materials will be consumed, and the system can display it. Finally, I don't know if I can join the game mine and mine.

Come on, update, it's pretty good 😁

In fact, the cheats are good, but the plot is a bit stretched My family didn't find it earlier, they were busy talking about love and intrigue I stopped watching after seeing the previous part Who can play the protagonist if there are cheats, and no one has to rely on his own development The struggle for power is boring to watch.

Many female protagonists are said by AI to have no female protagonist, Shabei AI

It's said that the decomposition ability is too amazing and he doesn't want others to find out, but the protagonist demolished the doors of three families on the fifth floor. Wouldn't the female anesthesia doctor be surprised?

Please update quickly, the plot is very vivid and attractive

Just my 2 monthly passes? The content looks okay

The author writes very well, can you continue writing?