Succubus Commander Longs for Retirement
魅魔指挥官渴望退役
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 651k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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881Recommendations
5.7kFans
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😐After reading the whole thing, I don't understand where the protagonist's deep-seated hatred for the alien beasts comes from. The background setting is that the protagonist is a transmigrator, and after transmigrating, he entered a death military academy. He doesn't have a direct conflict with the alien beasts. At most, it's just a life-or-death competition because he is human.
Is this a Girls' Frontline fanfiction? If so, I won't read it. 😭
The protagonist actually wants to liberate the human form. There's no way around it; humanoids are indeed more pleasing to the eye, more loyal, kinder, stronger in combat, and more resilient than humans. It's only natural that they would replace humans. It's just that the creators, with their first-mover advantage, have limited them for a period of time.
I don't know which platform the author came from, but this feels like a bait-and-switch tactic. They wrote about a bunch of girls, and then the sexual content was all over the place. Why be so subtle? You might as well not write anything at all and just filler with filler. Succubus? What a waste of time.
The saying "seeing a human figure"
Well, maybe it's because I'm still a bit obsessed with "Young 2," so I feel disgusted when I see it. But it might be good. I haven't watched it yet. Keep it up!
It's quite well-written, so why is it so unpopular?
The book is good, no problems so far, but it's quite disappointing; I was reading for a while and it was already the last page. 😤😤😤
It looks like a compilation of the second game's storyline. Does the author understand what I mean?
I suggest a slightly counter-plot.
If it's not satisfying enough, it won't be very popular. Even if you write down how much of an advantage you have over insects, it's useless. At the very least, we should fight back against those who scheme against us. Right now, we're all passive, only able to be beaten without fighting back, and we're still being controlled by power.
The subject matter is interesting; if the author's writing skills and pacing were stronger, it could become a hit.