Deep Space God of War, Starting from the Realization of the Outrageous Diary

It looks good, but the power system is not clear. A tenth-level star core is given to a first-level warrior and can only be upgraded to a few small levels. It's like a master who is about to ascend to a big position gives all his skills to a novice Qi practitioner and only upgrades the sixth level of Qi training to the eighth level of Qi training.

It's rubbish, there's no need to read it. The author himself doesn't even understand his own realm setting. In chapter 25, he just broke through and it was close to 100,000 kilograms. He also said that it would grow a lot after settling, but it turned out that he was about to break through to the next stage and it was only 70,000 kilograms

I want to see how many people use this star power as a bomb without absorbing it. Is the author afraid that the protagonist will take off directly after obtaining the star power?

It's hard to explain in one sentence. If you take the Nine-Revolution Elixir, you will instantly become an immortal. If the protagonist takes it, he will improve a little bit.

I seem to know that as a civilization that occupies most of the universe, there is no shortage of high-level resources, but there should be no shortage of resources for low-level warriors, right? Just like gold, there is a shortage of it on the earth, but some planets in the universe are made entirely of gold. As a result, you start by saying that pig's feet are very talented. But can't break through because of lack of resources? Inconsistent

It's pretty cool, but I don't care about it. If I don't care if I highlight one, the value that was raised at the beginning will drop back later. Plots, characters, and other details pop out of nowhere. The protagonist's behavior is just to follow the battles and events, and the reasons simply cannot withstand scrutiny. For example, the protagonist is greedy for a treasure and goes on an adventure without even thinking about how to bring it back. In the end, he kills the person and only has some resources left to upgrade himself. Even the god-level relics cannot be upgraded by one level. There are also various equipment worth tens of millions and hundreds of millions, and you can earn hundreds of thousands afterwards. Hey, I can't use my brain. If I can remember more than seven seconds, I'll get a headache while reading this book.

When writing interstellar literature, you need a little bit of astronomical knowledge. Generally speaking, the Milky Way is vast enough. If you have a little common sense, you should stop writing about the Milky Way. There's no point in writing more. If you write about half of the universe, I was really entertained by the beginning. 🤣It's like stacking fantasy boxes, I can stack them as I please.

It's actually pretty good-looking. The plug-in is just random writing in my personal diary. It's non-toxic and refreshing.

I still have to come out and say that this book only had 63 chapters, and I enjoyed it very much when I read it. At that time, I recommended this book, and my comments were also placed in the recommended comments, and many people liked it. Then it suddenly disappeared, and I didn't care. Now I come back to read this book, and I found that there are three dissuading comments in the recommended comments. This is a real classic, and there are three dissuading comments. I don't know why, but I really enjoyed it when I read it. The plug-in is written randomly in the diary. Is there something wrong with my aesthetics? Many books that are obviously good have three dissuading comments. I seriously suspect that the person in charge of comments wants to collect money. If you don't pay him, he will arrange three comments for you to dissuade you.

It's so tiring to watch, it just repeats the plot, and the resources for upgrading and fighting keep circulating without slowing down.

Please, I have written a novel and I want to change the title of the book. I can't make up my mind. Click on my avatar and read my book. I wrote a post and give me a reference. Please, I must come. 😭😭

Just a little bit, fight monsters and upgrade. If the realm is too vague, it will feel like smoke and mirrors, making it more difficult for readers. Either the tradition remains the same, or the realm is shown at the beginning. If you look like this, I'll be hit in the head. I was originally willing to support full subscription, but apart from the Eight Gates, Mingmen Mingquan then became GG, and I felt that the protagonist was too cross-realm.

Have a BUG? The protagonist only knows Hunyuan Gong, but the diary has been strengthened and turned into Huntian or something. But the protagonist doesn't really learn it, so the diary is an amplifier? Amplify the effects of things the protagonist knows how to use?

The protagonist is so well-written that level 81 cannot beat level 85 now. AI writing, right?

This is enough to make others think we look down upon us. Ten updates a day is not too much to ask for, right?

It should be a slow-burning novel. You can tell me that he is under pressure. I upgraded it in just over ten or 20 pictures. Sure enough, I am still suitable for a quick upgrade novel, the kind that can be upgraded to a level in 3 to 5 chapters.

The writing is quite good, but the combat power has increased so quickly, I don't know how much longer I can continue writing.

The protagonist's IQ is very...