Deadly Strike: The Gunslinger Mercenary’s Path

The author's last book was relatively successful. He may have considered that after the success of a series, he would develop a branch type and form an independent but equally exciting story. There is nothing wrong with this in itself. This is what Shui Ruyi did. But the problem lies in several aspects First, the character Shan Ying appeared in the last book, but the character and the protagonist were far away from each other in the previous book. Readers who have read the previous book will feel that this book is less interesting when they read the new one. Second, this book "Golden Finger" is very similar to the previous book. To be honest, I'm a little bit convinced. Is it because I can't think of a useful cheat? Isn't it okay to learn from Shui Ruyi? Changing the tool cheat to an important characteristic and advantage of the protagonist makes it look at least less obtrusive to the reader, and can also show a long-term effect in the plot. Although the story pattern in the previous book improved the overall readability, every time the cheat appears, it still feels so awesome, and the visual sense of cheating is not good, and the integration is not good. Thirdly, the background of this book is Southeast Asia. Southeast Asia is too close to China. This kind of close-knit affairs makes content review more stringent, making it more difficult to write as wildly as the previous book.

First of all, let me make it clear that I have not read the previous book I have just seen the plot of Russia becoming famous, and I don't understand it very well. The protagonist has opened the sky eye hanger, or map hanger, and perspective hanger. This is acceptable But what I can't accept is that the protagonist's team throws flash bombs and shock bombs. None of the other teams have it? This thing is not a high-end thing. Even if the upper-level people no longer regard the lower-level mercenaries as human beings, they still have the money to equip them with a few grenades, right?

It was quite attractive before it was released. In fact, the policewoman in Bangkok had too many scenes, mainly because it was not written well, which made people less favorable. After arriving in Krabi, it really turned out... I thought she was a lone hero? At least he has to be a great tycoon. If not, you can write it as a hero, but in the end, you end up writing a slutty old man. Although I wanted to write a book with a sense of justice, it doesn't have any chivalry... Although this book deliberately writes about planning... About layout... About intelligence... But it looks like a clear soup with little water. Because I always thought that his Shan Ying would be a very good vest, but everyone knew that he was Yue Shan, Shan Ying... I thought the tourist police was just a skin... But it turned out that he was doing that... When all kinds of politics came out, it was really disgusting, and I wasted my time reading so many chapters!

It's boring. I want to watch the protagonist kill and kill, instead of watching the protagonist being chased around like a hapless guy.

188 Cm and 85 kg weight? Bamboo pole? If this height is stronger, it can easily exceed 100 kilograms. If the muscle mass is larger, 110 kilograms is also normal. Have you seen too many pretty boys and have no idea about macho men?

Are the U. S. Dollars in this book different from real U. S. Dollars? A bunch of mercenaries worked hard for tens of thousands of dollars. Isn't that little money enough to consume bullets if nothing else? I have never understood whether the author really doesn't know or has some filter on old America, so he thinks the US dollar is so valuable?

How can I say this? No matter how hard you pull out the mountain eagle and write it into a book alone, it will not be as good as the previous arms dealers.

After reading this book, I now feel that it is tasteless and a pity to abandon. From the previous book, it may be that the pattern of Master Jackal is too high. After reading it, my expectations have also been raised. Looking back at this book, I still feel that it is not as exciting. The only thing I am looking forward to now is when I can interact with Jackal 😏! Anyway, let's keep it and see.

Seeing Chapter 21, this system changes into equipment to make everything go smoothly for the protagonist. Conjuring something out of thin air is an outrageous operation. But this also reduces the difficulty when writing. You can have light and heavy weapons and equipment anytime and anywhere, which is more deceptive and dangerous than fully armed people. As long as you have money, you have weapons. Still top-notch weapons and equipment. I also read part of the previous book about the arms dealer and found it very entertaining. I still like to watch normal military-style fighting and killing, political games, etc. If the author changes the setting of the next book, maybe it will attract more viewers.

You can properly describe the situation of Shanying's wife after she took her son back, but don't describe too much, otherwise Shanying will not be able to stand up as a person who cares about his family who was forced to leave their hometown. Now it feels like Shanying does not have the sense of role of a heroic father who left his hometown and killed dozens of people for his son.