American Drama World: I Am Really Not a Shameless Person

This protagonist is so hungry that even Sheila can kill him

Although she is the protagonist, Fiona is so ugly

Ofina in Shameless is like a bus, even this author can write it, awesome

Wow, it's even better than locking a shared bicycle. Here's how to lock the bus.

The author had a cold head, so he asked Fiona to be his girlfriend

I rely on the comments to say that Fiona is not good-looking. This is the 18-year-old who starred in The Phantom of the Opera and became famous because of her looks.

You can still watch it, but I doubt that you are just watching the clips for the details. I suggest you watch it again to observe the personality charm of each person. You can also read other shameless fanfics when you have time, especially those comments. The correction of details is very good. I don't know if you changed the characters for the sake of the plot or if you don't know, but you did it this way without a sense of immersion. This is not a fanfic. What you wrote is not too artificial, at least it can be read. However, I hope the details and character creation can be improved a bit. Also, you can't write clichéd online novels. Use those previous templates. This is an American drama. It needs a bit of American humor and American style, otherwise there will be no sense of immersion. Come on, I hope you can persevere. At least you can write. This is already much better than others.

So hungry? Is it possible that Frank won't let it go? That's the owner of Chrysanthemum Hidden Powder's record-breaking

The writing is quite good, but the update speed is impressive.

Is this a eunuch?🙂

Not enough to watch😭

Eat them all and don't let any of them go, I love you very much❤️😌😌😌

I want to eat them all and form a group.

Are you a eunuch?🤫

😁😁

Concept logical thinking, little kids