Strange Voyage: Summoning the Fourth Scourge

This time the author comes to build a building, and the Shennongs will comment on it

The author's data processing ability is very poor, or it can be said that there is no processing ability at all. As a game writer, this is a very serious problem. The wax oil the protagonist obtains from the player is completely blurry. The author cannot tell how it came about, nor how it went away. There is absolutely no idea of ​​how much the players can provide each day and how much the protagonist consumes on a daily basis. Only when the protagonist wants to upgrade the building does it show how much is left, and upgrading the building has such an important function and consumes very little. Because the author has no concept of this consumption at all, it is like treating a worker's monthly fixed salary as a company's profits in a rising period, which is very misplaced. There are also forced restrictions on the protagonist's subjective initiative, and the protagonist's combat power is set very outrageously. He can kill all the monsters he has seen in an instant. It can be said that if he goes to kill monsters, his efficiency will be higher than that of all players combined. You must know that a level 8 murloc leader who can be manipulated by players has 10 wax oil, and there are hundreds of these monsters in a dungeon. The dungeon can be reset with 100 wax oil points, and the protagonist can earn tens of thousands of wax oil by himself in a day. But the protagonist can be said to be just a background. He basically spends all his time reading and watching the player's operations. The main point of this book is that players can download dungeons to spawn monsters. It can be regarded as a very original online game article. Players are playing a virtual game, and the protagonist is a game company that opens the game to players. Out of 5, I'd give it a 3. It's just passable and can be watched when you're bored.

Although I don't know why there are so many monthly passes, I feel it is very average. The protagonist is a purebred working class worker. The boss personally stepped in to expand the company's scale. He also often defends recalcitrant employees. Be a money-giving boy. No warning will be given for violations. What a good boss for the new era.

It took me four days to read it, and I would give it an 8.5 Out of 10. I felt that it was not very engaging in the early stages, but it received a lot of positive reviews in the middle. The original copy of After Nightmare was a bit too late, so it would be nice if I could write more details. The way the characters are written, I feel that there are 1.5 Male protagonists, and Li Miao counts as half. In the early stage, I thought it was quite annoying for him to steal the scene. The Long Night copy has completed the background and personality of the characters, and it feels much better. The descriptions of other player characters are also good. I would give it 9 points out of 10. It's a pity that the real world is not described too much in the main text. It would be nice if I could write more extras

Warning before viewing: I may not have read enough novels compared to others, and my opinions may be wrong. If there are any differences in my opinions, just assume that I am wrong. Please bear with me. Although this book is not perfect, the author has made great progress compared with the previous one. Many people say they feel bored, and this problem does exist in this book. Online novels basically have to have explosive points, the kind that can detonate the foreshadowing of the previous small stage and detonate the readers' emotions. However, I personally feel that there are not many explosive points in this book that can arouse emotions. The best part is the part that shines upon all living beings, and the rest can only be considered minor explosive points. The second is player description. Personally, I feel that the player part is above average: better than the author who treats the players as tools to make a bad mouth, but not as good as the author who can make the players very interesting. The players are the foundation of the fourth natural disaster, and they are the real "protagonists". The author handles this aspect very well. The wise behavior and shady exchanges of the players in the novel bring laughter to the readers, and the bond between the players and certain NPCs also brings excitement. But there are two problems: 1. The players are not causing trouble. It's hard for me to describe this feeling, but I just feel that players who don't cause trouble are just tools, and players who do cause trouble are truly free people, bringing strange vitality to the other world. 2. The happiness and excitement brought by the players are not enough. One of the reasons why readers can take the initiative to give up piracy and choose genuine books is to read book reviews (and of course, factors that support the author). Although there are moments of laughter and tears in this book, there are not enough. With enough laughter and tears, there will be comments from readers, more subscriptions, and more profits for the author, forming a positive cycle. Then there is the setting. It's not that the settings are not good. On the contrary, I personally feel that the settings are good and rich, but they are not used to the extreme. For example, when the mechanical players wrote that they could transform like Transformers at will in the Fire Saint stage, I thought it was great. I have been looking forward to the wonderful performances of the mechanical players later, such as turning into vehicles to pursue high-speed pursuits, the vehicles turning back into human form and then a king descending from the sky, multiple players performing a grand fusion, etc. As a result, after waiting for a while, I saw that the gear fire was finished, and the mechanical players also became invisible. This is not an exception. Many settings that could be expanded a lot have been cut for the main plot. This is a pity. All in all, the author's writing is quite good. Although he has not yet crossed the threshold of becoming a well-known writer, the author has never been a eunuch, and it can be said that the future is promising. I hope the next book will be as great as this one! ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

It's a good book. The overall background setting is tight. Although the ending is a little rushed, the essence of the short stories that make up the overall narrative is good. The fourth natural disaster and the group portraits are well mastered. However, the overall narrative is flat and the realistic description (to set off the high-end part of the game) is slightly missing. However, it can be read. It is recommended for those who like group portraits, the fourth natural disaster, and soul-based narratives.

The biggest miracle is that Wen Bupu in the group portraits

Shennong Post: For those of you who want to get into the trap now, let me share some of my opinions. Advantages: I think the description of the group portraits is very good. The transition in the early stage is a bit stiff, but the situation will get better after chapter 50, and the description of the characters is more vivid 🤓 The plot is very compact and can be read with your mind. 🙂 I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. Disadvantages: I think that the author may have messed up his thinking and buried some big holes in the writing process, such as the beginning of the game's development into reality. Of course, it's just a beginning, a taste, and no explicit explanation, so it doesn't affect the viewing. Evaluation: I think that he has learned the game of World Tree. This game is too real. It has some advantages of the two books and created a new theme. The content is novel and not brainless. It is highly recommended. 😁😁😁😁 Personal opinion, dog head saves life If you don't like it, don't spray 🙂🙂🙂

Because of the setting of this book, it is difficult to say that players are complete players. Their ability to resurrect is limited and they cannot play in groups. As a result, the rhythm of this book is very strange. It becomes a boring cycle of "the protagonist opens the map → the player explores the map → the protagonist harvests the items and the player harvests the plot → the protagonist opens the map", which makes readers very tired. , It is easy to abandon the book when there are more than a hundred chapters, and it is difficult to retain readers 1. The most important ability of the player is to pile up dead monsters through infinite resurrection. This book can still be written well. The problem is another problem, which is also the root cause of being called the fourth natural disaster. It is quantity, but it is not reflected at all. In fact, after I saw the basic settings at the beginning, I imagined the plot to be like this. The protagonist opens a new map, and players rush in to explore it. They collect everything they can collect like locusts. If they can't defeat a certain monster, they will call their friends to die. After defeating the final boss or achieving a certain goal, the area will be converted into a copy with a limited number of people for subsequent players to explore, but the original area will be cleared and can be used for other functions. For example, if the protagonist sets it as a free area for players, then various infrastructure constructions can be started immediately. Even after the city is built, in addition to players, various other races found by the protagonist can also live in it. This will have more plots to write, because it has become a real city. 2. Some basic things about player flow are not written. This is a medieval fantasy worldview, but gunpowder exists. Have any players tried to make gunpowder weapons? Have you tried creating other heavy firepower? When we fought against the Salary Snatchers, we knew that the enemy might attack the mainland, so why didn't we build a man-made shore-based fort? Isn't large-caliber artillery more powerful than ordinary players' spells? This leads to another question, where is the player's infrastructure capability? Changing to other game articles, there is a high probability that people are trying to build cities at this time, and various black technologies should also be researched; 3. Due to setting reasons, the map is severely restricted, and players cannot explore freely. They can only wander between the maps opened by the protagonist. The plot can only be promoted by the protagonist, resulting in a very slow and strange pace; 4. The plot has become incoherent. For example, in the very beginning of the Knight of the Law, both he and the Iron Masked Warlock belong to a country called Gullard. Later, the plot of the Exile Island and the 110,000 people who drowned under the sea were written. At this time, the readers were most interested in this country. As a result, when the new picture was opened, what seaside town, what SM couple, and my Gullard plot? The same is true later on. There is no coherent plot at all. The opening pictures always have new locations and new characters, but no connection with other plots can be seen. The reader's interest in reading is slowly worn away. These copy plots you wrote are like unit dramas. So is this what I am watching? What I want to see is the collision between the player group and this world view. You are putting the cart before the horse when you write this; 5. The level system is too crude. This is a basic part of the game, but it is poorly written. Is there any change in the profession every time you advance? Are there any specialized tasks? Will pushing a low-level profession to a high level unlock special abilities? Is there a direct connection between career and career? In addition to player skills, what about permanent expertise and passives? In addition, the monster panel is also very simple. According to the game, even the lowest level monster should have an entry. For example, the tidal flat fish man may have a "Basic Swimming Mastery - Swimming Speed ​​+10%". Players' acquisition of these exclusive abilities is also one of the highlights, but there is almost no description of this aspect in this book. In this regard, we should refer more to the Super God Mechanic. His panel is the setting that a virtual game should have. Your soul-fusion system is too crude. You have to know that the real game is made like this because of technical limitations. You have written a novel and can't use it? 6. A lot of foreshadowing. I won't talk about the real-life ancient martial arts family. After mentioning it, there is basically no progress. Again, readers will read down when they see an interesting setting, but you never mention this setting, and readers lose interest as they read; To sum up, there are many loopholes, and I think most of them are setting loopholes that cannot be changed. I can only wish the author good luck in the next book.

Your protagonist has been hidden in too many chapters at the beginning. Can you see for yourself whether the protagonist has half of the first ten chapters?

Can you refine this about realm?

The writing is too simple, and there is basically no climax. Sometimes there is a lot of foreshadowing, thinking that there is going to be a big one, but the result is still a dull ending. Secondly, the sense of immersion is too weak. The male protagonist is just a background. What is the point of giving the main perspective to Li Miao? It is better to give it to the boss so that he can at least push the copy. Secondly, there is the issue of the main plot. I cannot say that there is none. I can only say that there are basically no chapters in the first 300 chapters. Apart from promoting dungeons, it is about interpreting some irrelevant dungeon plots. NPCs either have amnesia or don't know. Characters who can push the main plot are either too costly or deliberately avoided. I don't know if it's because I haven't figured out how to write it or something 🙂. The two most disappointing plots, one is the team battle between the salary grabbers, which sets up a lot of what I thought was a hearty battle, and maybe it can also advance the main plot. As a result, the Archmage directly performed the magic for a second, and there was so much foreshadowing that it was not very satisfying, and the plot was not advanced. I don't know what it means 😅 The second is the damaged core copy. The level is so high at the beginning, with all kinds of crazy, parasitic elements, and the protagonist's trumpet. I thought it was a boss battle. No matter how bad it is, the outside gods can still reveal some secrets. The result is Cun Zhi again 😰. There are also advantages, that is, it is stable and basically has no major poisonous points. It is also good for daily complaints and so on. If you read it as a daily farming article, it's really good, but it doesn't quite fit the background. If you can accept a weak main line and a low level of fun, then this book is indeed good food 🙂

It's really not surprising that his grades were so bad that he was exempted from admission. What the hell is written in the third golden chapter?

It's a pretty good game article, but unfortunately it doesn't have any memorable points and it's easy to lose interest. I stayed up all night last night and read more than 170 chapters. The next day I had no desire at all. 😒

The game created by the author is not exciting at all, at least in the eyes of readers. The main reason for this perception is that the author does not have any key description of "feedback". It's like adding attributes to strength and agility. Shouldn't it make sub-healthy modern players feel "thrown away"? Or the "novelty" point has no description at all. Instead, there are feedback from players such as "If I weren't allowed to fish, I would have stopped playing", "If I couldn't keep fighting, I would have stopped playing" and other player feedback, which left people speechless. This game is a "second world" in a small way, and a "second life" in a big way. As a result, the players are indifferent and dispensable, causing a rift between the readers' viewing and the players' perceptions.

To be honest, I have collected hundreds of articles in Qidian. Currently, this is the only one I have kept track of the latest chapters. I'm not saying this book is particularly good, but at least it's not that cliche. After all, the usual routine of many Fourth Disaster novels is that the protagonist packages a real world into a 100% realistic game to attract players, and then some people question how it is possible to have 100% simulation. Once you enter the game, it is really fun, and then the game explodes, and then the players fall into the trap without thinking. The protagonist does not need to think about how to make the game fun, and the players will work wholeheartedly for the protagonist. This routine was quite enjoyable the first time I watched it, but it got a bit boring after watching it too much. So it's rare for me to find an article that's not so cliche and I keep following it. I don't think it is necessary to blindly suggest that authors should completely imitate those popular articles about the fourth natural disaster. After all, it is easy for new authors to imitate old authors in writing articles, so it is better to maintain their own characteristics.

There is no need to go through so many tricks to mobilize players. It is deliberately unnatural. You can directly make an announcement. The development of the island is determined by player activity. If you want new gameplay and new maps, you have to rely on the players' own efforts. Just like the Angela Opening the Door mission in World of Warcraft, it can be made into a main world mission, and the players themselves can contribute to building a sense of participation.

The difference is that the proportion of players is really large here, which makes it very comfortable to watch. Another thing is that for players, the world they play in is really game-like and game-like, which is also very comfortable. But there is another thing that I don't like very much. There are too few descriptions of NPCs. Interesting NPCs can really make people remember them for a long time. You can describe the relationship between NPCs and players. This game that reminds me of Morning Star is so real, the player even got married toNPC.

This novel is still okay. The plot is rigorous, the settings are perfect, and the players have complete functions, making it very comfortable to watch. But I still gave up after more than 300 chapters. The main reason is that the player perspective is always focused on those few, and the dungeon is only 1/2 people. Any of these points is not a problem in a natural disaster novel, but together it is catastrophic. It makes people read like a "Li Miao Soul Travel Notes", not like a natural disaster novel at all.

The book written by the author is really good. The only failure I personally feel is that it comes into contact with the real world. This type of novel will always be a failure if it comes into contact with the real world. I have read many novels of this type, and so far there is only one novel that has not experienced this situation, which is The Dungeon Next Door.

I have finished reading more than 400 chapters. Can you write faster?

To be honest, I am disgusted with the character Niu Niu. It doesn't matter if he plays evil ways, but his bad habit of killing people when he sees them is really disgusting. For those who play games who don't move and NPCs don't move, it's too dissuasive.

Liangcao Written better than the previous book, which had more than 300 chapters and I couldn't stand it The pitfalls have basically been filled The NPC descriptions are better than the players, Brother Mangzi Li Miao & Landing are two poisonous points, needless to say Brother Mangzi Brainless and reckless ≠ mentally retarded; The gay people written by Li Miao are very gay. Anyway, I have never seen such bad friends. Others are discussing the plot/strategy in the group, and the two of them become "happy enemies" without anyone else.

I think the most outstanding part of this novel is: the author solved a fatal bug for the players of the fourth natural disaster summoning (that is, monsters can be spawned infinitely, and explained very well how to solve this problem). All other players of the fourth natural disaster summoning stream have monsters that cannot be refreshed, and the monsters will disappear forever if they are killed and will not be refreshed (this will appear very stingy). Before a few players are summoned, the monsters are gone. This is a common problem among all players summoning genres.

Oh Mo, please be more precise

It's a pity. This book is pretty good in terms of background setting and character performance, but the description of some big scenes is rather bland and the plot progression is a bit stiff. Maybe the first few chapters were too abstract and missed the opportunity to attract traffic? Personally, I really like the part about Glory and the first battle with the meteorite, but I feel like the canned food and the evil god were a failure. Some of the short stories in the book are quite interesting, and many scenes are even more epic. I hope the author can work hard and absorb the essence of this book and continue to devote himself to writing. I look forward to the new book.

Haha, it's over, you can start watching, it's so cool

I hope there will be an extra story. According to the final guess, it should be a collision of worlds. Haiyang Xinhuo traveled to the real world, contacted the official and received help. There was also a problem in the real world, and only then did the protagonist travel to the candlelight world with the help of Haiyang Xinhuo. The Candlelight World has been repaired, but the real-world problems have just begun. Later, players will solve real-world problems with the help of the protagonist. There should be an extra chapter to write about this part. Zhuhuo's character should also come to the real world. Can Snails return to reality? How many more CP couples will we see again?

You can leave easter eggs in the next book. It will broaden the world view and it will be the same as Persimmon's Space Hulk, which is a continuation of the previous work.

Aren't equipment levels, fish levels, and item levels universal? They are everything from low to high, some are excellent and some are treasures. The fish you catch range from rare to epic. What kind of setting is it?