Zhutian: Starting from Becoming the Lord of Hong Kong Comprehensive Kowloon Walled City

When you write a book, you should at least read the title of your book, the golden fingers of the characters, and your introduction. You are looking to see if there is any connection with what you are writing now, and the lord novel does not say how big the limelight it is, but at least it needs to be known to the people in the territory. As a result, you are going to be the mastermind behind the scenes. You're not going to write about opening a bistro in your own home to show off.

When you see that no one is following you, you should realize that there is something wrong with how you wrote it. It is not too late to revise it. Hong Kong TV shows still like people who rise slowly from the bottom. There is also the problem of thugs. It is okay to have 1,000 thugs, but everyone cannot be at the special forces level. We are not trying to dominate the underground world.

I don't know what the author wanted to do with this setting in the first chapter? What else is there to see? I don't understand

After reading it, it doesn't suit me. It's 24 years now, not 11 or 12 years. It's a bit inappropriate to write a novel about 24 years using the concepts of about 12 years.

The first few pictures look like a mess. The main character, Goldfinger, is powerful and has a thousand people under his command. He came up to destroy all the forces in the city. However, there was no loot at all. He queued up to receive the subsidy arranged by his own system. He owned the entire city and even opened a shop as a small boss. It was an inexplicable plot.

Please change the author, this book is terrible

La Liang's family went into the water to persuade prostitutes to be good. The author has a bad taste

Author, please update. It's been so long since I updated. Is it true that you have entered the palace? You should also send an announcement when you enter the palace. It's not good to keep people waiting.

In fact, everything is good, the most disgusting thing is the listing

I watched it roughly, but I feel like the plot is not well arranged.

The author's IQ is not enough to control the subject matter

What are you writing? Even though he became a lord, he was still a poor man. Didn't he become a lord in vain? Haha!

The protagonist is so mediocre that if you throw them into the manure pit, they will all be the same.

The book is a good book, but it is not suitable for me, so I have withdrawn it.

This kind of writing has nothing to do with the times. A dozen years ago, it would have been a simple piece of writing that didn't use your heart or brain, and it wouldn't work in any era.

Your lord system is fake. The missions and the system are seriously inconsistent. Goodbye.

The first few chapters are very creative, but later on they just pick up girls and pick up girls again. I haven't read it yet.

How about the high-level killer you drew? He's handsome.