Immortal Walker Game

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such a three-dimensional view. It is still infinite flow in the heavens, which is even more valuable. Today's novels are like killing people like crazy, human nature is twisted, it feels like everyone has a grudge against the protagonist, and things that can be clearly explained in a few words are often silenced. Some people can't bear to say it's the Virgin, but obviously, the protagonist is just doing his job as a healer. It can only be said that people with a dirty mind see everything as dirty.

Book title: The Immortal Walker Game Author: Bai Yinhara Number of words: 850,000 words Status: Completed Background tip: Chen Jianggui accidentally entered the Immortal Game and became a watchman by chance. From then on, a generation of night wandering gods officially swept away the darkness! Tips for settings: The Immortality Game can bring all game props and virtual abilities back to the real world. Death in the game means death in reality. Tips for comments: The writing is much smoother than the previous one written by Meng Xin. Preliminary setting processing I can continue to write normally and the high-quality products will be around the corner. The protagonist in the novice village has the opportunity to kill the ninth boss in the world and get benefits. I started to think that the setting is a bit similar to that of the unfinished sniper king, but after reading it, there is still a big difference. I have my own ideas. When I saw Chapter 157, there was a line in the early stage that was quite shocking. I knew a man and pushed him to favor the barber's wife. I was reported by Cocoa Bean for this line. This line was buried in the early stage. Some people who didn't like to see male partners picking up flowers would abandon the book. I saw it later and now I didn't push it after knowing a man. Article description All the supporting characters in the later stage are tools The rhythm is like a roller coaster derailment. The "farming development" in the early stage is delicate and attractive, but after a hundred chapters, it falls into a "violent cycle": Brush attributes → Show off and slap in the face → Change maps → Continue to brush attributes...

After reading Chapter 38, let's talk about some opinions The protagonist is a medical trainee. He has been trained for 3 years. According to the undergraduate degree, he still has at least 4 years of studying medicine before, and his family has a massage business. In terms of skill design after entering the game, it is necessary to He has basic medical ability. He has studied medicine for at least 7 years and has a quota for regularization. He was rejected. The reason given was that he was disabled. Can it be said that the hospital recognized his medical ability? Then after entering the game, should he have basic treatment skills? The protagonist highly admires traditional Chinese medicine and acquired acupuncture skills after treating Li Ergou. He is a physiotherapy and massage practitioner. When Wu Wanzhen said that there were so many people coming for acupuncture, he ran away in the middle of the acupuncture? Do you understand what the first-diagnosis responsibility system is? Can this be called medical ethics? When Wu Wanzhen asked him if he could still go to work the next day, she said no without any hesitation. How could this be called medical ethics? After three years of training in a tertiary hospital? No wonder they don't want him. Can this hospital want him? Not to mention that physiotherapy and massage are part of traditional Chinese medicine, but this is what medical ethics is? Then he said that Wu Wanzhen is like his sister. Where is the sister? What are you feeling distressed about? The protagonist himself despises his own store. Why should someone show you the store after you went to the hospital and keep it open for three years? When you came back, you didn't say you were grateful for the help, but you still made trouble for her? Can this be called distressed? Furthermore, whether the protagonist will receive external signals in the game, he can feel it for a while and not feel it for a while.

The skill names have one blade and one slash. Your weapon is a hammer. It's a humorous choice. If your weapon is a hammer, then your skill name should not have a description related to sharpness. It should be more thick. I don't know what you think.

The writing is really average. The deaf man found that he had regained his hearing. Was it because his sister was not talking to him? Sound exists all the time, not just the sound of speech

I know why this type of novel is not popular anymore? Because it's not true. These authors keep saying that it is real, but when you read it all the way, it feels like a game, without any sense of life and death. It is better to read a time-travel novel to be real.

I saw three pictures. The first one is that the pig's feet are not polite at all. When you go home, you don't even say hello to the people who care about you? There is no trace of family affection in daily conversations. When playing a game, one is always involved in the game. There is no respect for death. The dialogue is not handled well. There is something strange about oneself. Then one immediately asks others, and is treated as if one is mentally ill. Then one immediately says it is a joke. Wouldn't you think more about it and use other ways to test it before you have to say it directly? It's really stupid. Overall, this book is not very long and it's not well written.

This book shows that the lord that you have raised by yourself is wreaking havoc in the town, and you are furious and laughing to death. While emphasizing that NPCs are not data, you release the boss that the previous generation of Night Warriors fought so hard to seal. If this is not a hard plot kill, this boss will harvest the residents of the town. You, the protagonist, are just a dish, but you still have the nerve to be angry. Shouldn't you be afraid? Laughing to death

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, write less. It feels weird to watch, but the rest is pretty good.

The protagonist, a medical student, only has 4 points of strength and agility, which is less than 5 points of an ordinary person. Don't you deserve to be fired? You really don't need physical fitness to be a doctor. The protagonist is deaf but not physically disabled. This attribute makes him obviously lazy.

Cocoa beans have no logical logic Zhi Nancaihuathief shouldn't write it, either write it to death or not accept it Also, I don't understand how to persuade a novice player that the game is really difficult? The game is fake and the money is real! Come on, give me 20 years and I will give you 1 million. Is it OK if I don't have 100,000? This is what informs. You, a novice player, don't know anything. If you know about it, you will die in the game. Go mess with the advanced players! And when I knew that Cocoa Bean came to call the tavern owner as a witness, he could have died! No need for any other excuse. Since you gave the protagonist such a big hook! Then Novice Village shouldn't have so many supporting roles. What's the use of giving it? A level 15 magical player, should you watch a level 5 player fight and move around in a coquettish way?

As mentioned earlier, the protagonist clearly wants to learn weapon skills, so he goes to the tailor shop to learn how to use needles. As a result, when I got the basic skill acupuncture later in the article, I was surprised. Some settings in this book are obviously borrowed from other old books, so the author may have some default settings when writing. However, when I mentioned it again later, I wanted to follow my own settings. There were some inconsistencies. I hope the author can review the book carefully.

The opening layout of this book is almost the same as that of the other book, with the same framework, the same gold digger who never leaves the village, the same young man who leaves strategies behind after the death of his relatives, and the same black-handed players who kill players.

After reading the comment area and today's chapter, I want to say that I don't understand medical skills, and it's not very important. Just know that it is a skill that is developed in the early stage. Teammates who pick flowers are a big poison in the first place. They are obviously righteous. Why write about such a teammate? Of course, you wrote about being reported and arrested. You can also write that he repented and knew his own problems, which is okay. I didn't expect this, and then new players came in. , Regarding the attitude of NPCs, there is no need to forcefully arrange conflicts. This game is not simple, and it is already the ninth batch. Even if you don't know, you can say it. Even if you don't believe it, you don't have to accept it. There are obviously a large number of newcomers, and there are always people who believe it. Then there is the latest boss. If you wait for him to develop, why does it level up so quickly? It's level 12 in one go. You can obviously write level 10. Then wait until night, you I fought alone and had buffs and talents to suppress the boss, but due to the presence of mobs, he ran away with remaining health. Because he wanted to absorb flesh and blood to restore himself and strengthen himself, he ran towards the direction of the town, and then cleaned up the mobs and returned. It happened that the boss also arrived in the town not long ago, because the smell of the boss was obvious, so he was discovered. Under the leadership of the mayor, he persisted for a while, but was seriously injured. Just you Here comes the hero. Isn't it a good idea to make his debut? After defeating the boss, he will gain both fame and fortune. Even if this is too deliberate, it is better than the boss killing many residents in the town due to his own reasons. This plot reverses the image of the protagonist, and there is no idea at all. Whatever you think, I will give my opinion. This is also my subjective consciousness. I can't remember some plots. I can only have a rough idea. There may be problems with what I said. The author can refer to it.

😅😅 Quite white, the ivory tower in the game of death

Did you go too far in the back? A one-to-one reenactment of the desperate plot of the big sniper😡

Generally. Small poison points come in handfuls, not recommended.

The content is exactly the same as a novel at the top of the list. . That one is better

After reading a few chapters, I saw that it was really ridiculous to talk about attributes and skill status with the mayor. Always emphasize reality, and make the real world look like a game.

It's so stupid. I went to fight a monster without preparing any weapons. Catch the turtle back. Go borrow a knife.

Thank you everyone, feel free to follow it, there are many manuscripts saved, they will be on the shelves, and updates will be released soon. If there is a reward, it will be updated on the same day.

Yes, the more you write, the better. Can you update more, don't be like a big sniper?

The skill of counter-injury disappeared directly. This humorist

Although I have made progress recently, I still feel too watery.

How can I put it, it's okay, but the plot advances too fast, and the protagonist has to do everything, which happens too often

You say it's well written, but you don't want to read it anymore. You say it's not well written. The plot is quite interesting, but it's tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it.

This kind of game with the theme of time travel and returning to another world has become very popular recently. I just feel that the plot is not easy to control. I don't know why, but it is also very easy. Emmm, when I was reading this novel, I suddenly remembered that I had read a similar theme some time ago, but I forgot the name. This feeling is so uncomfortable.

I have read about a hundred chapters, and I hope the author can proofread them when he has time. There are some typos and incoherence (some expressions are contrary to the meaning of the text), which affect the reading experience.

It'll be on the shelves soon, I'm looking forward to it

Thank you 🙏 everyone!