I Want to Go Home and Get Married After Being Used as a Mount by a Fierce and Cute Baby Dragon

The noisy and careless atmosphere may have been inherited from Japanese anime. However, animation is a visual image, which is naturally clear and concrete, while text is an abstract carrier that requires the reader to process and imagine. The uneven conversion of such carriers is one of the reasons why others say it is chaotic, lacking appropriate guidance or buffering. In addition, this kind of story atmosphere makes it easy for people to lose focus. Just like romance and fantasy, which stimulates people's excitement, they are all inherent characteristics of the story atmosphere. And this lack of focus exacerbates the confusion of others. This kind of atmosphere is not natively born and lacks the corresponding basis for understanding and adaptation. Anyway, it's just about picking people, that's it, there's nothing else to say.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good. The pace is too tight, there is no foreshadowing, the world frame is unclear, and the story line is vague. It is like an outline, which can reflect the description of time. I have never seen it before, and there are not many descriptions of the place. Is the protagonist just a big character? I can't see him thinking, and can't find the impact and contrast of his identity and environment before time travel. You skipped the most convenient place to shape the character, and was forced to be free, fair, and just in your writing? Is he just an actor who knows how to whisper? There is no work to be done, and the characters are divided. The development of the story is all due to the needs of the plot. Ma Lou has no ability to promote the plot. It is all the author who exerts his power with his pen. Even the character design of the protagonist is not likeable. The only labels that can be given are "Sese" and "Only Sese". It is recommended to read excellent works and study them first. It's a pity. I hope the author can find a better subject next time.

A patient who suffered from the second grade syndrome wanted to write a story about the second grade syndrome, but because the second grade was not enough, it seemed nondescript.

After reading it, it is very abstract and watery. It looks like a fun article 😥 with no obvious main line. After reading it, I basically forgot what I wrote 🤔

It seemed so abstract to me. I felt like my brain was running out of ideas after reading the Qidian light novel section in recent years, and the flavor of Light Novel Library is really great. Generally speaking, this book is good except that the male protagonist has a light novel FW flavor from a brat. Basically, it is a book that selects readers.

Head Maid

Mother-in-law

Her Royal Highness Princess Iris It feels quite appropriate

A family must be neat and tidy

Princess Iris

It's a good idea, but it's a little rushed, but the description isn't quite right.

Big Fox

Great Cleverness

Thousands of skills can conquer a country and conquer a city

Mianziya

The writing is too messy, and the main thing is that I can't understand it. I can probably understand that I want to write a Japanese male protagonist who is shameless but has good luck and some ability? But at the beginning of the plot, there are so many people and it's confusing. I often don't understand who the sentence is describing and immediately jumps to the next person. According to other people in the comment area, it's "very noisy" and I can't translate your words into pictures in my mind. I feel that the plot is interesting, and my descriptive skills need to be improved.