Strangeness Is Coming, I Have a Group of Wise Players

Book quality: Gray The poisonous points behind the scenes of the game are basically all committed.

The writing is good and the plot is acceptable. Don't write about emotional scenes. It's very twisted. In the early stage, players upgrade to fight monsters, pretend to be bad and get slapped in the face, in the middle stage, group portraits, and in the later stage, big plot. This is a routine that has been used by gamers for many years, but many people don't understand it. It is recommended that you write whatever you want in the early stage to attract readers to accumulate knowledge. Do not write emotional dramas with frivolous manipulations. Be careful not to show any poisonous plot points. It is easy to lose readers. It is not too late to write these risqué manipulations in the mid-term. Nowadays, most readers get the following: shocking, handsome, connotative, excellent plot, and the thrill of farming millions of soldiers. Authors should not leave the connotation and plot in the early stage. Not only may they not be able to grasp it, but readers may not accept this trick even if it is a new author.

I hope you won't be tj and write more. There are not many votes left for this subject, so I'll give it to the author if I have one ticket left (sad)

The system is highly intelligent, the protagonist is immature, and the law popularization work of the Yu Dynasty is worth learning from China. The top leaders of Jianghu gangs are extremely respectful of laws and regulations. They are shocked and persuaded by the protagonist's making of black powder, coinage, and mining. My thoughts after reading more than 80 chapters.

The protagonist's level is too low, please improve it quickly.

After reading it, the author basically kept telling me about the Riddler, and it was very uncomfortable to watch.

Why don't you open a Q group and discuss how to raise monthly tickets? It's the same game as this one, but it doesn't have as many readers as that one.

190,000 Words for 300 yuan... That's it, right?

How to say it! I want to write horror but it's not right! I want to write about the big world but there is too much foreshadowing! I want to write about Xiaojianghu but there are not enough details! I wanted to write about characters but I was missing some points I took all the points! This is how I feel about this novel! Looks so naughty!

I wrote about the fourth natural disaster and spent a lot of time writing about a cowardly player. The more I write about it, the more I write about it.

I feel like the author is the kind of person who is short of books and feels like he can write a book, so he just started writing.