Perfect Martial Arts

The writing is a little weak, the plot progression feels weird, and it feels a bit fast.

Three thousand universes, starry sky reincarnation, here I come

I have a habit of reading books. As long as there is the sentence "I come, I see, I conquer" in the introduction, no matter how awesome the writing is, I will block it directly. Without it, I feel like a 250-year-old.

I think the author's writing is okay, even a little better than the description of the era of high martial arts, but I can't read it. It's hard to be attractive. It's all the same old routines, virtual battles, spiritual masters, still using warriors and generals? Mars? Don't you think it's a bit boring to watch it now? At least changing the name can bring out our freshness. These are not the most important, because if your character design is good and it is a book about Devouring the Stars, then everyone will naturally like it. Mainly the character design! 1. If you start with a younger sister and a heroine, you will definitely poison a lot of people. Do you believe it or not? I think my younger brother is better, look at Luo Feng. The key point is that you can't write a good female character, buddy. Pulling her to talk to the protagonist like this will only lower the reader's sense of the protagonist (it is easy to explode, and the dialogue can easily lower the protagonist's IQ.) The protagonist should be independent in the early stage, a bit like a protagonist. In the early stage, women will only affect the speed of drawing your sword, and in the later stage, you will not say anything if you open a harem. Look at Gao Wu Era, he couldn't even write a female supporting character, and he didn't dare to write a female protagonist at all. 2. It can be seen that the author did not deliberately shorten the settings to speed up the excitement, such as battles and so on. But the plot is not attractive, and I can't explain why. Maybe it's because I've read too much Gao Wushu. I still hope that there is a high martial arts book that can pull down the high martial arts era. Because his book is really not exciting, but his setting is new, the beginning of the plot is the star world, and the characters are not poisonous (mainly, he has not written many powerful supporting characters, they have always been teachers, palace masters, principals, etc. Anyone with a high status has to fawn over the protagonist. This is too deliberate and makes me uncomfortable. It's not that the other characters are well written and not poisonous, but he just doesn't think about it. In the past, when I wrote brilliant supporting characters, I felt that all the supporting characters were just like AIs who had to serve the protagonist, and they couldn't express any independent personality. So everyone was respectful to the protagonist. The disadvantage is that there is no conflict and it is very peaceful. The advantage is that it is not explosive, but it is still a piece of writing like this. The above is my personal opinion, if you don't like it, just delete it.

The author's writing about fighting is so embarrassing😥

It feels better than the 90,000-month-old Gaowu XX.

So good so far, keep it up!

Well written, not too toxic. There is still visibility. It's just that the combat power in the national war feels a bit vague. After reading it, I feel that there is no difference in strength between the first person and the last person to fight. The only difference in strength is the record and some special talents, but I feel that it is no different from those with average records. I hope the author can clarify the combat power in the follow-up. If you keep working hard and write well, I feel like you can make it to the top. I feel like we can learn from Gaowu Era and Global Gaowu, and their combat capabilities will be very clear.

The writing is very good. Recommended! Recommend

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I simply can't see enough, not enough.

Well written so far, keep it up! ! !

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