Become Possessed by Adding Points

How to say it? This book is weird to read. I thought the protagonist would add some martial arts to practice Taoism, but it turned out that the protagonist also practiced Taoism, and then joined the court and became a policeman. I was completely confused.

As we all know, the beginning of a Yakuza novel and the character of the protagonist are the most important, and your Excellency, tsk tsk tsk

It's okay, but Duan Wan'er is really uncomfortable to watch. I suggest that the protagonist find her early and kill her with one sword. There won't be this woman who has achieved success in cultivation and will cause trouble for the protagonist. That would be too cliche.

Hello fellow readers, after thinking about it, I decided to make a post to explain briefly. Although "Obsession from Adding Points" is a very good book, it is not a fast-paced, mindless and enjoyable text with added points. In terms of writing, what I admire more is environment, characters, plot, three-element writing method, and environment shaping. The characters are created, the characters drive the plot, and the plot changes the environment to complete the most basic cycle, compressing the beginning, succession, and transition into a few chapters. Although the rhythm is more brisk, when there is too little foreshadowing, it is easy to lack emotion and lack of explosion, or it is mindless and repetitive, and the subsequent viewing experience is poor. I would pay more attention to telling a good story first, and then add other more interesting elements on this basis. After all, there are enough fast-paced and cool articles about Ji Dao now, and there is no shortage of mine. I want to write something different. I would like to recommend "Immortal Life from Slaying Demons and Demons". It is a very interesting book with perfect pacing. Now this article has been written about 50,000 words, and is about to enter the end of the first plot. I would like to ask you to follow up and turn to the last page to see the number that pops up. This is really important to the author and is related to subsequent recommendations. Finally, I wish all readers good luck in their careers and make a fortune. Of course, the most important thing is good health and the safety of their families. Best regards.

Why are there so many junk books recommended now? There are not many good books,

Chapter 3: Killing, pretense is embarrassing and fatal

There are more than twenty chapters, and I don't see any signs of being possessed, so it's hard to judge.

The characterization of the protagonist is too hollow, the emotional changes are extremely abrupt, the plot fluency is poor, the logical structure of the entire book is very hidden, and it is too procrastinating.

Being so humiliated by that Pan Dachui and then joining the court as a dog is extremely poisonous.

As the title says, I can see it, but I can't see it, so withdraw. The first three chapters are about to be withdrawn. They are boring and embarrassing. Finally, I saw the golden finger in the fourth chapter, and then it does not follow normal logic and the pacing is so slow. I will withdraw it.

The writing is very messy. It seemed okay at first, but as I went on, I found that the expression was very messy and there were too many bells and whistles. The four images are very suitable for your book. Just write as many sentences as you can. Don't force things you can't grasp. What you write in this way means nothing.

What is written is a trivial thing, and this can also be signed?

Well, although chapter 32 is like this, it is still very interesting. The protagonist comes back and kills those two guys. It is a growth for the protagonist. Overall, it is very interesting. It will be added to my excellent bookshelf.

The author's rhetoric is old-fashioned, and the protagonist has too many psychological activities