Brother Jia Qian's Hong Kong Comprehensive Journey

Now you dare to write a system of forced punishment. It's so brave. Goodbye.

I was numb when I read the first chapter. Ding Xiu is undercover? And he was the same generation as Lelo Pohao? Hong Kong variety show is not a Hong Kong variety show, it's a bit outrageous and has been modified 😅

This book is a mess. Ding Xiuhun wears nothing. It doesn't matter if there is a system. Lei Luo's era was the 1960s and 1970s. One day, more than 300,000 Hong Kong dollars could not buy a house. Then the call machines came out. The popular use of call machines was already in the 1990s.

There's no problem with the protagonist being an undercover agent. Doesn't it mean we can't send undercover agents before the system is established? The article also said that it was Lei Luo who originally sent people to infiltrate the lame man in order to deal with him. It was Lei Luo who used his power to achieve his own personal goals, which is normal.

Nice writing! Less poisonous! But this book is a winner! This is a mandatory task for your system! And jump out of tasks at will! It can drive away 90% of people! Done

The plot is not bad, but the portrayal of Ding Xiu is very different from that in Xiuchundao. You can refer to the novel "The Best Actor Wants More Money". I think this is the portrayal of Ding Xiu that is closest to the original character. With Ding Xiu's ability to kill a group of cavalry by himself in the Last Xiuchundao, even if he just traveled through time, his experience and character should not be so bad in the ring, especially the text description of observing the opponent's strength is too poor

I came here to see how Hong Kong Comprehensive can become bigger and stronger and create greater glory. If you look at other people's Hong Kong comprehensive articles, the only meaning of the system's existence is to kill the protagonist. You are rebelling against Tiangang here, and the system wants to be the father of the protagonist. And the protagonist is Ding Xiu. Xiuchundao has top-notch combat power. Even if his physique is ordinary, how can a few gangsters watch it? The Ming Dynasty is a waste of time. You see, those 007 John Wicks are not just ordinary people, nor are they killing randomly. The Jianghu experience is here. The night after the dog cage comes out, you should sneak up and assassinate Lame Hao or Lei Luo. This is the novice village where the boss plays. I don't want to write about the boss playing Novice Village. You can look at Shower Sheng (I'm in Hong Kong Comprehensive, and I accompany my sister-in-law to do her hair at the beginning) or Chinatown in the second book. They are both good. Finally, does any book friend recommend Hong Kong TV series or fan fiction to read? I'm begging for help from the book shortage.

Self-contradictory. Ding Xiu himself has a soul that has transcended, so he cannot be afraid of triad boxing and the like. No one in the entire Hong Kong underworld is more murderous than Ding Xiu. And while he was saying that Ding Xiu was so good at boxing in the ring, he was like a noob saying that his body was too weak.

The introduction is messy, can I read this book?

After reading the introduction, I have no desire to read it.

1.57 Million words. There is no comment threshold. There are only 70 comments. The author is only lv.1. I don't dare to read it.

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It's a story about ancient people traveling through Hong Kong, but it doesn't make you feel immersed in it 😅

Lei Luo wanted an undercover agent at that time.

The author has no consideration! Just for a paid gag, writing such an unrelatable character is different from aboriginals? Is it as popular as you thought?

I saw the introduction. It's good but not many people discussed it. Can anyone tell me about it? ? Is it poison? ? Or good? ?

In fact, there is no need to have a punishment mechanism for failure and death. The tasks posted are all do-or-die matters. If you fail, you will die naturally. There is no need to emphasize it. It will be a bit disgusting and will alienate some readers.

Mainland China sent an undercover agent to Hong Kong. Lei Luo hasn't left yet. It's a bit early to send an undercover agent now. It seems that the mainland is not very peaceful at this time. I think I still have free time to take care of Hong Kong. What do you think?

Poison or not? Where is Shennong? !

Unbelievable 100 comments but no comments

I saw the latest chapter, it's really well written and it's refreshing.

When I saw Chapter 23, the monster-fighting and upgrading stream, the protagonist Ding Xiu didn't have much of Ding Xiu's charm, I thought I was watching the Dou Po Hong Kong variety show.

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It's a rare courage to start over if you can't continue writing.

I've just read the last chapter, it's a bit in-depth and not bad👍

The poison points are a bit dense. Ten of them will contain at least twenty poison points.

I've read the first 50 chapters and it's pretty good.

The early part of this book is pretty good, but it gets a bit boring in the middle. I can't read the martial arts dramas later on. If I can't keep up with the Hong Kong dramas and movies, I can add some plots from European and American spy films and adventure films. They all feature characters from Mission: Impossible and Tomb Raider. Isn't it good to add these elements? You have to write martial arts dramas, and modern dramas have to be about ancient martial arts dramas 😐

Attribute points +0.1 What the hell🤦‍♂️