Naruto: My Wife Is Kaguya Otsutsuki

Chapter 45: I haven't seen Kaguya. The class has just ended. Do you want to write a thousand pages? The theme is clear, sir.

It's quite interesting, but it's been over 100 chapters and I still haven't seen Kaguya actually appear.

It's a bit interesting. I've never seen a Naruto fanfic from this era. Please write it well, author, come on!

The plot could be a little faster. It would be better to get out of childhood as soon as possible. The plot in the clan land in the early stage is indeed a bit long. The pacing in the later stages should be a little faster. Overall, it is good. I haven't seen Naruto during the Warring States period in many years.

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It's time to change it, it's always been the same routine, the protagonist goes on a mission and meets the enemy. If you get tired of it, the others are pretty good. You can develop the Kaguya line, such as traveling through the past and coming back in a dream, etc.

It's pretty good, but the pace is a bit slow, but I won't be afraid of it at all if you're a bookworm.

Although I don't know much about Naruto, my writing style is very smooth. Come on 🤓

You can't just be a kid playing house all the time. Are you writing a light novel? It's boring! Too bland

? If Yuedu is written to death, the author will definitely write down this book. I think it is outrageous to write an unimportant brother to death. If the sister with whom he is closest to is written to death, I can only say that the author is really going against the grain.