Hogwarts: the Showman

A mysterious and scheming boy (convinced)

Why did the author want Lily's sister to go to Hogwarts? I don't quite understand. If you bring someone who doesn't belong to the place where she should stay, everyone around you can use magic but she can't. The ridicule and ridicule of others gradually accumulates depression in your heart. Is it true that she won't be depressed or anti-social?

In the 1870s, that was 1870. Not to mention Potter's parents, Dumbledore was probably not even born yet.

The updates so far have been equal, and the writing is quite novel. It is rare to be a fan of the same generation as Harry, and it is a mysterious profession like a prophet. The writing is good for a novice, but I still feel that the plot is a bit awkward. I feel that the protagonist has lowered the quality of the prophet. The predictions of the prophet always have a bit of mystery, and the protagonist's predictions are like wholesale cabbage. Of course, the acting school of prophets should act in a big way, and then make things develop in that direction according to their own abilities. This is the acting school of prophets who want to modify the plot. But at present, the protagonist is already full of chicken feathers before he enters school. I quite like this book. I hope the author will not write it down.

There are very few divination-type articles. I hope the author can find his own path. Recommend some books on occultism + divination. The author can refer to the following: "Secret Garden of Roses" "The Golden Bough" (about martial arts) "Guide to Western Occultism" "Journey to the Magical World" "When Occultism Knocks on the Door" "Encyclopedia of Occultism" Encyclopedia of Occultism Volumes 1 and 2 Divination book "Astrology For Dummies"

Really enjoyed the depiction of the fortune teller family! Professor Trelawney was created in the original book. This is how she was in her youth when she escaped from our sight in the original book. It is very reasonable and the supplementary plot is also very interesting! The protagonist's parents are also flesh and blood. The Muggle mother who is worried about her family and the prophecy callback that her father "will not die today" are very interesting. I like the emotions between their families! It has the flavor of the original work! And I'm really worried that the author will kill him when he grows up... Dad won't be like the Weasley family wall clock, and one day he will suddenly discover the "fatal danger" of his family... In short, it's a super surprise about the prophecy! Come on, Mrs. Author! And about Penny... In fact, letting Penny enter school is not necessarily poisonous, but the author, Mrs., You later made this matter as the protagonist was calculated by Old Deng Laoge. She is a somewhat bitter and psychologically unbalanced child. Most readers and authors do not need to regard her as a villain. Also, after reading the prophecy part, Isol always likes to act like a riddler to us God-perspective readers. Ahhh, this makes people always on tenterhooks... Sometimes the foreshadowing must not be forgotten in the later chapters. Overall, I like it! Big cheers for the author

Author, do you want to tear down James and Lily (some people don't like James, but I like this pair very much. They have the same views and respect, so don't talk to me about bullying. The foursome is actually a deer and a dog, and Snape is not a good cake. Don't argue with me. The argument is yours), and ggad

And you can't even hail a cab without a wand? What's the use of magic? Even things that don't need to be controlled require a wand. What kind of wizard is that? They are useless.

Writing this kind of subject requires a lot of imagination and plot conceiving ability, as well as a detailed understanding of the small amount of information about the past generations mentioned in the original work. The writing is quite interesting so far.

Question: Is the author a CP fan of Lily and Snape?

The plot has not fallen into a cliche, but in recent chapters it has lost the rich psychological and environmental description at the beginning. The protagonist described at the beginning is still relatively weak, but it is fun to use skills and quick wits to bluff people, and getting along with the family is very humane. The stubborn character of Snape's mother is also very interesting. But now the pace is too fast, and when the protagonist gets along with others, it becomes the protagonist pretending to be x-the other party is convinced-the protagonist is about to get the benefits, and it gradually becomes a bit boring ~ Moreover, the background of the wizarding world at this time is also quite dangerous, but it is not reflected very well. The protagonist is lucky to have Ward and the others watching, and even if they are not watching, they can meet upright people such as Arthur. Although it may be a prophecy to see where there is safety and danger, the protagonist has not encountered any real danger. It feels like Voldemort's background is just a background. And predictions are a bit too "convenient" now. Didn't you say at the beginning that you won't be lucky enough to see the node you want to see? Now it seems like real-time updates can be seen in real time. And the protagonist seems to be using prophecies very conveniently now. My sister's previous prophecies said that he will never appear again if he changes the savior at will, and I don't see the protagonist making any plans or preparations. But if the author already has a plan, don't worry about what I said. After all, it is your work.

I read halfway through and stopped reading at the Wagadu section. Talk about the advantages and disadvantages you have seen so far Advantages: The subject matter is very good, and the writing style is also very delicate Disadvantages: There are too many, the author wants to write too much, too many and complicated, too complicated and messy, too redundant. You can divide the story into several semesters or academic years. But the author wanted to write everything in one school year. Too many things are piled up together, giving the impression that a child becomes an adult in one school year. Then there are a lot of dialogues and repeated character descriptions, which are too repetitive. You can use some character descriptions instead of dialogues. You don't necessarily have to let people speak out. The character descriptions are also written, the environment is also written, and then the dialogues are also added. There are too many. If the author wants to write another novel later, he must pay attention to this problem. There are too many things given. There is also the aspect of character creation. The protagonist sometimes feels like a child and sometimes like an adult. There is a conflict in the settings.

Too short to read 😭 The books I like to read these days are all new, just like quitting

Out of ten, seven points. I feel that the plot connection is a bit messy and the rhythm is not grasped well. Moreover, the protagonist's character hasn't grown much yet, and he is still a bit naive sometimes when it comes to talking about two lives. Then they even restricted golden fingers. There is also an inexplicable emotional line that suddenly appears later, which is a bit poisonous. Either it was there at the beginning, or it wasn't there. Finally, it was almost the finale, and the emotional line was arranged, which was inexplicable. It's worth watching, it's a good work, but it's not a masterpiece.

Personally, I think Voldemort's problem can be easily solved. This is when the Iron Wall stands, so if Britain is gone, Voldemort will naturally not be a problem.

Regarding the image of Grindelwald in the Fantastic Beasts trilogy, the huge contrast in the author's writing always gave me a strong sense of discomfort. I wanted to give up but hesitated. In short, I said "uncomfortable" 😢

The author Jun has put a lot of effort into preparing this book, so he does not want this book to die prematurely. He sincerely requests all readers to support it, especially collecting and reading. Thank you again to all readers~

The overall feeling of the story is that a little wizard who has not yet entered school is doing things that he is qualified to do after graduation or in sixth or seventh grade. However, there are many good reviews in the comment area, which should suit some book lovers.

How can I put it, the writing style is good, and there are some innovative ideas, but the direction of the ideas is a bit poisonous (named Petunia, half of the readers were discouraged in the early stage, and the remaining half may not like it, we can only wait and see the effect), and Goldfinger seems to be invincible. If the prediction is successful, magic will be added. Everyone has a prophecy.

I saw the latest one, the old rules, is there a female protagonist? Are there many or just one? Who is it?

I think it's okay, but the prophecy technique seems too worthless, and it's completely used to predict the future. And according to the article, making a prophecy will increase your magic power... To be honest, with the frequency of the protagonist... He has already become a god.

It reads like a strange detective novel, full of suspense after suspense. The last one is not solved but the next one is thrown out, but it seems that there is no big problem° In the process, the growth rate of the protagonist is close to the original work, which means the growth pace is slow, but it is not in line with the habits of most online books. Readers who are used to this kind of book may need to adjust° The overall writing style is not bad.

I watched the latest chapter after watching it for a few hours. As a fan, this book is well written, the plot basically fits the characters, and there are many novel and excellent fan settings, such as Ward Percival and the time turner; the protagonist's father pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger; the Trelawney family seeks mixed-race or Muggle marriages to dilute the prophecy talent; James and Sirius get the original plot (although I don't really like this arrangement), etc. But as a novel, this book has many disadvantages for ordinary readers: as the protagonist, there are too many constraints. The protagonist was deducted points and made things difficult for him by Sybil, tricked by Sybil's prophecies, suppressed by Sybil's professorial duties and guardian status... He was embarrassed and deducted points by Percival and Bella... He was avoided by Old Deng, made things difficult by the owl Carol, and was delayed because of the letters seized by Carol... He was tricked by his own prophecies... And he fell into coma several times after entering the school... The protagonist was too restrained, which to many readers is considered a poison or a poisonous weed. In addition, the newly opened Binns version of the school history copy may seriously delay the rhythm of the plot. If you sleep for ten minutes or one night, it might be okay to pass the dungeon in the book for two, three, months, or even at once. In this way, the protagonist will have to sleep for a day or three every time he enters the school history dungeon. This will last until the end of the semester or the end of the dungeon. How many chapters will be lost... In general, in my personal opinion, the fanfic is based on the original work. The background, while developing the plot and adding excellent settings, some details that fit the original settings and character settings may be extremely poisonous to some readers, and may also be excellent settings for some fan readers. Excellent fans often have a unique integration in fitting the original work and character settings, the rhythm of writing, and the choice of poisonous points and the arrangement of refreshing points. The above is my personal opinion, not a suggestion to the author, nor a dissuade to the readers. In addition, I published a book review early in the morning, so I may be confused in some places, so please forgive me.

The introduction says that you want to change Snape, why not wear Snape?

Occlumency is the foundation for playing Harry Potter. After all, this is the wizarding world. Big bosses are equipped with Legilimency as standard. Without this technique, appearing in front of Dumbledore, Snape, Voldemort, and Grindelwald is like running naked, which is super embarrassing.

The synopsis is quite novel, let me take a look at the plot.

It's hard to understand why it's so cold...

Very pretty and totally in line with my taste! Come on, author, do you want a female protagonist? (Hope not to enter the palace

A good book, with a different concept, a fresh perspective, and good writing. Looking forward to the follow-up

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing my precious treasure, I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and clever, and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...