The Great Nether Martial Saint Started with His Enlightenment Going Against the Heavens

I took one look at the heaven and the earth, and realized the Pangu Dharma. I took another look at the heaven and the earth, and realized the devouring of the heaven and the earth. I was looking at the heaven and the earth, and the heaven and the earth have been eaten by me. I have perfected the Pangu Dharma, and I am invincible.

This incredible understanding is just a trick system, and the protagonist himself has no understanding at all. I have never seen anyone realize the ability out of thin air. I have never learned the sword, I have never held the sword, I have never seen the sword, and I have realized the skill of the sword. It also comes with automatic naming.

There's something wrong with the way it's written. It sounded like love to me and gave me goosebumps. Headhunting is too enthusiastic. Also asked the child to call. . It's either the parents or the husband who call them this, male after male. . . It hurts my eyes, so it would be better to change it to a small inquiry. No other problems.

A demonic witch, a noble girl from a famous family, extremely vulgar.

It's quite beautiful, but Xun'er, Xun'er is so troublesome! Why not change it to Xunzi!

What I consider to be the best understanding is that I breathe, use the realm breathing method and continue to deduce it, until it is impossible to deduce it, and go straight to the way of heaven! Other analogies Otherwise it is a false understanding that goes against the will of heaven

Is it now about attracting female readers? They all behave like this female queen.