Talent Sharing Starting from the Iron Fortress

No wonder I am still v1 after writing six books. I pretend to be mature and show off all the time. I am like a holy mother and take the initiative in everything.

It's disgusting. It's all the same old routines. It's basically a Japanese light novel. The protagonist has great strength, but is always looked down upon by others, and then pretends to be a slap in the face. He also protects the people, and is plotted by others from time to time. It feels very deliberately arranged. It's very like the old-fashioned novel of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, or the tiger really has half a pig's brain, and the pretending is really like it.

The writing is okay, and there are no obvious poisonous points. Anyway, it's about a fan I'm more interested in, and so far it hasn't hit my bad spots. As for the follow-up, I personally tend to write less emotional dramas. If the author cannot control it, it is best to have no heroine or just leave it out in one go. (There is no emotional drama at the moment, but I have already seen the signs)

It's a bit disgusting. If you don't kill the bald man, why should you kill the person who exiled you? The same thing is going to kill you, but being bald makes you superior to others? Are we nameless people inferior? Are the nine-wisdom lizards superior to others? A dog and a lizard are barking and ignoring their owners. Why don't you teach them a lesson?

The turning point is too abrupt. The Iron Fortress is not over yet. It enters the giant. There is a strong feeling of fragmentation. I just put a B on the front foot. I am still looking forward to the feedback from the public. What about the attitude of the general, and whether to accept Wuming and Acorus. Good guy, I just stopped it and changed the subject.

It's extremely poisonous. The protagonist has gained strength in the Iron Castle. If he doesn't quickly take over the leadership position, he still waits for those nobles to come and cause trouble. It's a lot of nonsense and it's uncomfortable to watch.

Inexperienced and immature. It would be much better if I wrote about a simpler and passionate young man

Has the author seen The Red Eye? The transformation of Seliu's machinery happened after Oka's death. You transformed it right now? I really wonder if you wrote it after watching a short anime introduction video as you mentioned in the previous post.

The lies are fair, the writing is smooth. To be honest, I don't have any ideas of my own, the characters are not vivid enough, and the writing is like a running account. If you can give 4.5 Points out of 10, you will lose your soul.

He is obviously a newbie, his character is gone, and his fan writing has become a pretentious and slap-in-the-face piece of writing.

The routine is too old, and it's a bit like a tomato essay

After reading the Iron Fortress chapter, I feel that the plot is: the protagonist is very weak, and when he becomes a steam worker - his strength increases, (almost invincible) - he starts to go through the plot, Kabane, cut down, enemies, cut down, conspiracy, discovered and cut down.

It's written in such a way that I don't know what to say. It's made other people laugh at me, and I want to keep a few pictures before killing them. It's all for the sake of the plot. I don't have any ideas.

I give it three points out of ten. It's like writing on an assembly line, no different than writing by a robot. An ordinary little thing is worth tens of thousands of words. Who can see it and block it?

Why do so many people travel at the same time recently? Before, there were a lot of courtyard houses, then there were Hong Kong undercovers, and then there were Tokyo behind-the-scenes scenes. Now this is popular? Is this an AI wholesale article?

There is no reader base in the first place, and you are not a master who brings readers by yourself, but you still have the ability to fight. Considering so far, it is slow to start and nothing exciting. Are there any reasons why you don't consider writing one movie and one movie? If you just want to write a long-term project, just finish it and don't look at the results before writing the climax. As soon as you see that your grades are not good, you will be punished by the eunuch. Then you have three golden chapters. Why write about Kabana in the early stage? It has low popularity and no potential. All group portraits must have priorities. Didn't you notice that others in the early stage were the most popular ones like the Dead Fire Sea and Marvel Condor? If you write about it in the future, you won't be able to slay demons. The combat power system will only be that high.

It is said to be shared, but in fact it is a system plug-in. One Kabane can write forty or fifty chapters and it will be impossible to finish. The strength is crushing, it is just water.

The introduction persuades people to quit. Is the protagonist called Lin Tian or Lin Yan? Is it because the author didn't confirm it correctly or because he didn't copy it correctly?

Why don't you write about a battle and write several chapters without talking about it? The battle scenes are also rubbish.

If it's all my own, I'd like to watch a chicken-eating movie, like Jet Li's movie, All Realms Are Unified and the Taiyi Dao Fruit

The names of the protagonists in the introduction are written incorrectly, Lin Tian and Lin Yan

What about today's update? Author!

The writing is not very good, like boiled water. There were too many dramas for the audience, and it was a bit watery. The protagonist's strength improves too quickly, and he doesn't have the courage of the bald devil, and there are no highlights in his daily life.

Keep writing, don't stop updating, just fix it. Keep updating even if it's not finished, it's the basic principle of an author.

The author actually wrote quite well, emmm, it's a shame it ended so early.

How much does it cost to read 100 chapters of Qidian's book?