I Will Add Some Cultivation to the Human World

Why are there always villains staring at the protagonist? Such poisonous points are too obvious. The simplest thing is that Senior Sister Lin can quietly go to the protagonist's courtyard, but Elder Kong and his group can't? The entire protagonist of Qi Mimi went crazy and died unexpectedly, so why not just play it?

Can you please stop using Buddhist exercises? Taoist sects also have physical exercises. They are all mixed up and very annoying.

We've been quiet for two months, but traffic suddenly came this month?

The beginning is very good, and the relationship between the handyman disciples is very good. You write according to this rhythm, which is very good, but you just don't write. The alliance caught a local Tai Sui and gave it to the sect. What I was thinking about was that the protagonists and several people presented the elixir-forming Tu Tai Sui together, and the sect would advertise it widely. It would be in the sect mission hall, and everyone could see it. When giving out rewards, they should be given out in public. After all, this is a contribution to the sect. (Of course, whether the subsequent items can be saved is a personal problem). You have directly made most of the people in the sect's Discipline Hall greedy, but you are still aboveboard. It can be said that you are blaming the sect to show your face. It can be said that this kind of behavior in a normal organization means that this organization cannot grow, even if it is a cultivator. That is to say, the author can write that after receiving these things, he was hunted by a robbery cultivator when he went out to buy things, and then this person was the personal behavior of someone from the sect. This can be regarded as a small boss in the early stage, and was solved quickly. However, what you wrote, the author, feels like a superficial palace fight. I suggest the author rewrite the female channel. I have already thought of the name for you, just call it "Senior Sister Xiu Xian, Tsundere, No!"

Is this really a cultivating immortality? This is obviously a formula from fantasy novels

Is it the human world or the world of cultivating immortals?