Strange Beasts from Mountains and Seas, Invincible Starting from Spiders

The first time I played, I was chased as soon as I logged off, joined the official 6

Will the male and female protagonist be beaten to the point of kneeling?

The real-life plot is a mess, and it is still being written. It is really excellent.

The part about joining the sun is really poisonous. You might as well have joined from the beginning. It's disgusting. You slipped away.

It was interesting at the beginning, but it got worse and worse at the end. The readers came to see the evolution of your spider, but as a result, it ended up being written about real life, and it was really not good at all. If you don't change it and still write it this way, you can discard it.

After seeing 59 chapters, I counted about 24 chapters with game plots. The rest are real-life plots with a ratio of about 4:6. In fact, the writing is not bad, but it is recommended to reduce the real-life ratio. Everyone likes to watch game plots, which can retain people's attention.

The first few pictures are okay, but the real plot is just poisonous

Oh haha, join Taiyang (Japan), it's over

SB, right? In the world of mountains and seas, I was just being hunted. When I arrived in a different world, I heard a little girl crying in the wilderness. The protagonist thought that I could use human power to upgrade. Isn't that brainless? You still talked to people. You traveled through a spider as big as a palm. Why did you talk? Why did you think that people would help you?

The language control ability is strong, the plot is full of fiction and reality, and there are many thrills. Not bad! 👍👍

Not bad, come on! 👍👍

It feels a bit like Japanese manga Spider-Man

It's such a familiar subject matter. I've read several books before and it was cool after adding the official version. I don't know if the author can handle it well.

Isn't this well written? Why are you criticizing the author? Have you read it carefully? It's all just mindless trolling of the author. Except for the small number of words and the risk of eunuchs, the rest is good. Finally, as long as the author doesn't get involved in emotions, I think your book is about spiritual energy recovery? Behind the scenes? Alien beast flow? It's quite good 👍

Things are very casual later on, hahaha, I want to join any organization, and I want to create my own influence. It's good, it's still good food and fodder.

Haha

All I can say is that I'll give it a try first and see how I write it later.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁