Reborn: The Deadly American Lawyer

You betrayed the DEA witness leads and got away scot-free, even getting 50,000 from toxic parties. The DEA won't come after you? I've only read about 30 chapters. You want to write a "sexy lawyer" type of story, but the plot can't support that kind of approach. I don't know what you're writing. One minute you're helping celebrities, the next you're helping toxic parties.

Please feel free to criticize any problematic points; I'm a person who listens to advice. 😌 Finally, please continue reading and recommend; I would be extremely grateful.

I didn't even finish the first chapter before I wanted to stop reading. This author, this is Qidian.com, I don't know about others, but personally I really dislike this kind of dialogue and writing with so much English. Maybe some people like it. I'll take my leave now.

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Britney

To be honest, the protagonist is too weak and easily sent away, and he has no power.

You, an unscrupulous lawyer, would actually risk your life just to avoid a 200 yuan fine? Then they forcibly threw away some things and hired a bodyguard. Honestly, if this were a TV show with gunfights and other dramatic scenes, it might be watchable. But in a novel, it really tests the author's ability. Keep it up!

Does the protagonist even use a gun? Doesn't he learn any fighting techniques? It's easy to get shot in America! Is it satisfying to seduce female characters? Please reply, everyone!

It feels like a better call to saul, please update soon 😡

I think you could change your name and come to America to collect trash (broken shoes).