Douluo Fire Phoenix

Why do you think you were thirty years old in your previous life? You make me feel like a student 🤭

Hmm... How can I put it, it's a bit bland, and the main character has no highlights! It's just that I don't have anything representative of myself…

It has ideas and the plot is okay, but the writing is a bit watery and lacks details.

You don't abuse San. Don't lick San either. What's there to see? Now you are all offended by the black fans and the three fans. Just tell me what makes your book so attractive. I want to howl

Post something common sense 1. Wuhundian does not represent the interests of the common people, he represents the interests of all soul masters, and what he protects is the soul masters, not the common people 2. The empire represented by Tang San is the aristocratic class it protects. Although these two classes have disadvantages for those of us who have studied Marxism, there is no doubt that the first Wuhun Palace in the fantasy world is gentler to civilians, and at least it will help you awaken the Wuhun for free.

The subject matter is quite good, but it's awkward. 🤭

Rubbish, leveling up, from level 8 to level 22 in two years, and level 26 in three years, really disgusting

Another licker. If you can't write about romance, don't write about a female protagonist.

There are too many personal items, the writing is too awkward, it's just a running account, there is one adventure for every 10 levels, it is recommended not to be used if you are over 18 years old👀

Whose good person is called Xiaofei? It smells like a bitch next to the villain

I feel that participating in the All-Continental Elite Spirit Master Competition is stupid. There is no benefit at all. I have exposed my trump card in front of all the forces. In the original book, Tang San participated because of the master, and Xiao Wu participated because of Tang San.

This name is really outrageous. Wang Xiaofei has left many times because of this name. People who want to leave are first-rate. Normally, if you click on your name, monthly tickets, subscriptions, and rewards will increase.

The wallflowers are the worst. Simply whimsical. I still want to be neutral and have both sides.

Shui Binger

Forcibly exaggerating to strengthen teammates? Strengthening should also be strengthened reasonably, right? Huo Wu only reached level 40 when he was 19 and you are now 47 at the age of 18. How can you just rely on an extreme soul ring and weight-bearing training to level up so much compared to the original work without taking any medicine? Strengthening should be reasonable, and the rest should be treated with grass jelly.

A flying fire phoenix doesn't want to cover others with firepower, but wants to scratch others with its claws. You are also a talent. You have transformed into a dragon. The Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex is a dragon after all, and its strength attribute is its strength. When did the Fire Phoenix rely on its physical strength to survive? It's just hard-coded

So Tang San is still alive and has gone to the God Realm. The opportunity you grabbed has no impact on him. Overall, he is just a little worse than the original, and the protagonist is still fighting life and death on the mainland.

After reading a lot of Douluo novels, I feel trapped. But I was a bit frustrated, so I decided to write an article myself. Just say it as you like, hope you all support it.

Fire Dance

What right of choice does a rural innate level 8 person have? Either have a backstage, go to the Spirit Hall, or die, choose one of the three, other than that it's all mindless.

I don't quite understand. If you want to be strict, then be thorough. What kind of competition are you participating in? Hiding by yourself to get to the Soul Saint is a waste of potential, absorbing it for thousands of years, and not absorbing it for thousands of years. If you are afraid of something happening, don't show your strength or show up in front of your account. How can people check you if they don't know who you are? To put it simply, it is mediocre, extremely mediocre. Gou Meigou is not up to the mark, and he has not mastered the practice. The ultimate fire has a profound foundation. It is so difficult to fight in the Wuhundian Academy, and he can't do it even if he wears seven. Really useless protagonist

To make me laugh, don't lick Tang San, don't blame Tang San, and then lick Fire Dance 😂🤣

The difference in the nanny story is that the protagonist group is the nanny for a bunch of supporting characters in the original story.

It feels like keeping a running account, which is a bit boring. The protagonist's name is also a bit persuasive and there are some obvious unreasonable things.

To be honest, I can write better than you can. All the anecdotes, all in one stroke, without any details. I can't stand it until chapter 20.

What a rustic name! I looked at a passerby:

I saw the plot of the Soul Master Competition, and I felt that the author's writing style was fluent and the plot was quite to the point.

It's a boring book, and the plot written by myself is bad and rubbish. It's bullshit that I won't participate in the war, but I just don't have the strength to unify the continent.

Originally, you and Tang San had nothing to do with each other, but you insisted on getting his mother's soul bone. There was obviously no causal relationship, but you had to adjust the cause and effect. Are you afraid that you are sick?

Some people are pronounced too frequently, and the whole paragraph is full of "xiaofei", "xiaofei" and "xiaofei".