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It doesn't matter whether you are a time traveler or not. What matters is whether the author's writing is exquisite or not. The time traveler is omniscient and omnipotent at first, which is very exciting to watch, but it can easily fall apart later if it is not well written, and because of its omniscience, it cannot escape the shadow of the author. It would be better if the writing style is better, but if the writing style is much worse than that of the original author, the excitement will wear off and readers will not be able to stand it. The author of this book is currently adding his own ideas on the basis of the original work. Let's not say whether it can surpass the original work. At least it has its own things in the book. If you keep it up, no matter what you write in the future, it will not be too bad.

When I read Chapter 21, I felt that there was no main plot, and the protagonist didn't even know what he was going to do. There was also no B-square, and anything could get in his way.

My grades are so bad. You did a good job in Shoyo Doujin, but the track is too small.

Do you want to replace the human race inside with humans? There is only one ethnic group in there.

The writing is great. Come on author, your last book was also good.

I can't read it after I wrote it. I don't know what I want to express. Updates are also slow.

Congratulations to the author for the update, a monthly ticket to express your feelings

It's not enough. It's not enough at all. Update it quickly. Don't force me to beg you.

How to invest in the infinity of the heavens

Author, if you don't want to update it yet, please send me a letter. If you don't want to update it, don't keep us waiting any longer.

Many people have been misled by the comment section. He is a native, but he has seen the future and knows all the plots. It is no different from time travel, except that he is not an earthling

Is it strong enough to be a wife at night? The master's qualifications can only be considered average but his understanding is extraordinary. The young master has spent some time in the Taoist sect. Masters like Fan Long and Tianxiaxi Shenzhi are all good at it, but the master has never used these. Instead, he absorbed the ideas of the Taoist sect and created an academy. The protagonist studied under Wei Guangming and learned swordsmanship from the Southern Jin swordsman Liu Bai. What kind of magic? I also studied Buddhism, talismans, and academies. I looked like I could do everything, but in fact, the road has become narrower and narrower. The Tao in the Haotian world is actually the rules. Good qualifications can break through the knowledge of fate. If you can't go out of your own rules, you can't break through the five realms. In fact, the author is just writing a piece of shit. He has no other characteristics except smell.

It seems to be really messed up. Waited for so long. The wait was in vain. Goodbye

There are two female protagonists who must be chosen in Jiangye. If you don't choose them, you can't choose them. No one reads your book at all. Yuan Bingyan and Meng Ziyi. Mo Shanshan and Ye Hongyu. Seriously. A long novel, many people jump to read it. Many of them watch TV series, only these two people can watch the TV series. The nympho looks like a ghost when photographed, and is not popular at all. Not to mention other actors. The Fourth Princess Carp is a teenage girl, but a young woman who is almost 40 years old was chosen to play the role. . . I'm really speechless.

The author has already written this book, so when will he write a new book?

Leading the Taoist sect to destroy the academy, Jie Jie Jie Jie

Hahahahahaha, I deleted it in the end. Was it because I was afraid that my ugly appearance would be exposed to the majority of book lovers? Hahaha, please delete and block this book too. Your openness only goes so far. You can't stand any doubts. You haven't said anything too extreme yet. Hahahahaha, it really made me laugh.